Second ***

The comprehensive comic type has a system. However, this system is often ignored by the author (personal feeling). Overall it is good (≧∇≦*). It can be said to be an urban campus type plus a daily life type. It is worth watching. However, I feel that it is a bit watery in some places, but the problem is not big o(≧v≦)o

It's interesting, but I think the male protagonist seems to be developing towards a golden face, a demigod, blond hair and red eyes.

Long book review, updated regularly. … 10.7 Update The protagonist's outlook on life is really good. I was also so confused when I first entered society a few years ago. So full of emotions. +1 Star … Advantages: Tomato is a rare two-dimensional harem theme; It's a daily article with unclear main line, but the author still has enough control. It doesn't feel boring. It's so plain that it's actually interesting. The character design of the protagonist is okay. It is a two-dimensional harem theme. If the character design does not collapse, it is a success. There are so many fusion animes, at least the most I have seen in my more than ten years of reading. Disadvantages: The degree of character restoration is not very high. Due to the limited space and the large number of people, the author cannot set up each female character, which is a bit streamlined. But it doesn't matter, the character can be developed slowly later. The author needs to pay attention to the achievement of collecting all wives in the two-dimensional harem novel. With so many characters written, is it possible to collect them all? If you can't, don't write so much. Because if at the end, any of them didn't collect it, they would end up marrying some passerby, which feels like a cow but not a cow. This is how most fandoms get trashed. Above, four stars.

It can be regarded as a top-notch work among online comics. The subject matter is relatively old-fashioned nowadays, but the setting is quite novel (the male protagonist does not know the plots in each anime, which makes the plots that happen more surprising. The male protagonist directly becomes a character in the original novel, and there is no plot confusion caused by time-traveling. The memory of the male protagonist's time-traveling and systematic The effect does not make the world unbalanced or even basically eliminate the benefits that should belong to the reborn, making the novel closer to real life). The content of the novel is mainly daily life for the time being (for a casual reader like me, I actually hope that it will be mainly daily life in the future). The characters are more vivid and closer to the original work. The character description is more realistic and the writing is more beautiful. However, there are still shortcomings, mainly due to the gradual increase in the number of roles, resulting in some characters appearing too little, the plot being a bit delayed, lack of main line, and lack of love plot (the male protagonist is too straight). I am still looking forward to the next plot, and I hope the novel will get better and better. (Finally, the male protagonist of this book is not a two-spined ape, but an adult. It's incredible. Where can I find such a male protagonist?)

A good book worth reading in the comprehensive comics section, personally certified by a 10-year-old bookworm. At present, the system's cheats are basically useless. They all rely on the protagonist's own efforts, and there are basically no poisonous points. It's just that the author has updated too little! ! !

Good brother, all books of this type have been discontinued, and you are the only one left.

This book is really good. It is better than most other Japanese comics that combine many Japanese comics. The main story is not broken. In fact, it is better to read it this way, because the author can't let him become powerful and invincible in one day and collect harem everywhere. You can just think about it for yourself. Why bring it into the novel to poison others? Of course, it is only my personal opinion. I still recommend reading it, but I recommend reading it more (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

There are too many female protagonists, don't you know how to write about stripping? Personally, I feel very good. I hope the author can add more. The amount is too small and not enough to read.

I think Qiong and Yuu don't need to get rid of them to become the protagonist's sister (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑) Author! How many chapters will you write? I'm really afraid that you'll just write two hundred or five hundred chapters and be done with it! I really like your writing! There used to be an author who wrote a two-dimensional life story similar to yours, but he didn't know why he stopped updating it for unknown reasons after writing more than 600 chapters. All the female characters in the heroine in it were really awesome, and although you didn't describe them in detail, I also saw the flavor that I used to like! Come on!

The writing is pretty good, and I like the content. I feel like the author dug a lot of holes and mixed a lot of anime into it. I hope it can come back later. The only bad thing is that the book is not too fat, and there are not many bites to eat after slaughtering it.

The timeline of Chapter 240 is about three weeks, all in Japanese, with a template for the silver protagonist, a Shimizu who hasn't eaten, a girlfriend who barely sees him, some of Se Se, and the book has been cut. It's said that it's a harem, but it actually doesn't mean much. Writing about quintiles takes up a lot of space, but Ichika is going to be an actor, and there must be actors kissing and so on. Anyway, it must be very poisonous to most readers who watch harems. I am one of them, so I didn't give it five stars because of it. After that, most readers probably couldn't stand it anymore, and I was one of them. When I thought about Yihua kissing many actors on the road to acting, it was difficult to read it calmly. In the next few dozen chapters, there probably were too few readers, and the data dropped too much. The author may have cut it because of this. I also tried my best to skip to see if there was any more plot twists in Ichika, and there was obviously no twist. After reading this, I felt uncomfortable for a while.

Ahem, bad news: Stitches. Good news: It's all sewn. (Please pretend you didn't see it if you copied it) It's not a weird style, I just used character templates. "Miss Kaguya Wants Me to Confess ~ Geniuses' Battle of Love Minds" "Fifth Section Bride" I am afraid of making mistakes if I write too much. Just list these two (actually I don't see anything else)

There are too few storylines about my sister, to the extreme. Please treat my wife Sagiri well.

Baby, your updates are too slow. It's nice but not enough. Woohoo.

I don't quite understand why this novel has such a low rating? This is obviously a very good novel. He satisfied all my desires for the second dimension, and also revealed many issues that I was unwilling to face head-on. The author uses very elegant language to sort out the plot clearly, making it clear and easy to understand, so that people will not be confused when watching it. I can say that this is the best comic book I have ever read. But some people don't like it. He thinks that there are too many animations added and the lines are too messy to be clear. I believe in the author, I think he has the strength. As for the title, it can be regarded as a bad joke of the author! Anyway, I'm on this side of the novel, I don't want it to fizzle out.

Very good, and a combination of many two-dimensional characters. The male protagonist in the article is a male protagonist with five equal parts. My sister cannot be that cute. The male protagonist who has few friends. The male protagonist who has few friends. The male protagonist who is Miss Kaguya. The male protagonist who is so empty. The male protagonist who likes you in vain... It's all good-looking. I like it.

Nice needle. It looks really interesting to chase More updates! More updates! More updates!

Very good book! It's just that it hasn't been updated for a while. Could it be that something happened to the author?

Well, it is unrealistic to say that the work of Fengshen is not realistic, but it is indeed good. It is true that I did not expect that the male protagonist would have a girlfriend so soon. I recommend reading it. The author is too slow to update. I waited for more than ten days to send me three or four chapters.

Sure enough, I still like Shirogane Keuna's line [laughing evilly] Sleeping Milk [laughing evilly]

It's really beautiful, but in the last chapter, what did the author write? It's been a week and the review hasn't been completed yet. I'm so curious! (･ω･)?

How to say it? I like to see the value of force being more explosive. If the male protagonist has no money, then use force to solve the problem, and add some supernatural events by the way! There's also Date A Live. In short, this system is honestly terrible. Let's make the male protagonist stronger! Especially lifespan, lifespan determines everything

It's well written. There are currently very few books in the Tomato genre. If it is written at this level, there is a high probability that it will become popular.

I finally found a comprehensive daily novel on Tomato😭. Do you have any recommendations for other similar novels?

I like this book very much, but I really can't put it down. There are many good works and we have no shortage of them.

All in all, it looks great, but I personally think it has a few drawbacks.

Personally, I feel very good. It's not easy to put so many plots together and still keep them flowing smoothly. I hope I can continue writing at this level. As long as I don't seek death, I'll get a solid nine points.

Yes, I like this kind of novel very much. I hope the author will be better in the future.

This book is very beautiful and contains a variety of animations. If you are not a follower, you may be confused by it, but if you are a follower, you will find it very interesting.

One thing to say, the style of this book is very relaxed. For someone like me, the author Yasushi Tsurugi has a good picture in the novel. The characters respect the original work, and the heroines are not so free. I think it is very good. It is a good book among the Tomato comics.