I Rebuked Jinlian from the Start: Hand It Over!

Hello everyone, Cat has become the avatar, Orange has become the pen name, I am Orange from Orange Cat. There was a short story in "The Anti-Routine Bureau of Fairyland" before, where the male protagonist's script collided with the female protagonist's script. Later, a friend said that this should be written in more space. I just want to open a new book. I hope you all like this book. This book uses some storytelling expressions, so it may be suitable for word-for-word reading and listening. I also pursue a different sense of immersion, similar to the mood of "get to know this idiot and see what kind of trouble he makes." At the beginning, Wu Dalang was actually a bit incompetent, but then he gradually began to have goals, learned to fight in the struggle, and gradually became a great person. The reason behind Wo Kuotai and Yue Fei is mainly to show a truly promising mechanism, which must make young people better, and those with inheritance are promising.

How should I put it? After reading it, I can see that the author wrote it carefully and expressed his understanding of Water Margin through Wu Dalang's words. Four stars, and one star because I hope the author can fix the small flaws in the dialogue, such as the gas that appeared at the beginning, hhhc it's really easy to get into trouble! Come on, help me write a book and have a bright future.

The writing is okay. Maybe it's because the cover is not very attractive, so it doesn't attract people to watch it, or maybe the plot is a bit too wild. After all, in ancient times, if you tried to establish a republic, those things would definitely kill you first.

The following book review contains minor spoilers, so read with caution. Advantages: The author's writing skills are very good, and you won't be a noob at first glance. The article is coherent and not stiff, making it very comfortable to read; The character creation is very good, especially Pan Jinlian, who changed from a cute and mentally retarded girl who read too many romance novels, had high vision and loved to fantasize, to a cute and idiotic girl who is devoted to Wu Dalang. This transformation and the description of this transformation are really great; The author is obviously familiar with and understands Water Margin, and he is one of the best among the few Water Margin fans. The "bandit" who died in vain, the real and fake "blade knife", the reckless heroine and Dihua's righteous man, these settings are really "jianghu and martial arts flavor". Disadvantages: Is the plot developing too fast? Firstly, the plot is too fast and the amount of information is difficult to digest. Secondly, I'm afraid that if you write too fast, you won't be able to write anymore. After all, it's such a good Water Margin fan, and I feel uncomfortable if it's short. How about occasionally writing about daily life and giving it a proper refresher? (By the way, this is the first time I persuade the author to slander hhh) With Pan Jinlian's character, I'm afraid of Dalang's bronchitis (laughs). The "asking for love" girl is also quite cute. It would be too painful if he was fucked by another pig because of Da Lang's bronchitis. (I won't say that I really want to see Pan Jinlian get jealous and steal a man) In short, I dare not say that it is one of the best books in a hundred, but at least it is one of the best books in ninety-nine. Five stars presented.

It's beautiful. Come on!

Except for Pan Jinlian, I don't feel very good (maybe it's my own fault), but everything else is pretty good.

After reading it, my head was buzzing and I was greatly shocked.

The front was so funny. Very pretty.

Military, history, and political economics are added to the time travel, which is quite interesting.