Moonlight Qingfeng thought he had unlocked Xiao Li's flying knife skills, but when a sword-controlling book was placed in front of him, he was completely confused. "You want me to cultivate immortality in the world of Naruto? Don't make trouble..."
Reader comments
From the current point of view, some places force reasonableness for the sake of reasonableness. This is probably to serve the larger world view later. The author wants to write about politics, but every time he only touches upon it briefly. This is very good. He does not just copy it from others, but has his own opinions! 👍🏻
The combat power system has not collapsed as of the latest chapter, the tailed beast has not yet emerged, and the elimination of blood successors can still threaten the protagonist. It is gradual and has a beginning and an end. The protagonist's flying knife is very convincing against a profession like ninja, which has high skill and low defense.
The shortcomings are: updates are too slow!
If there is no psychic, why not summon the Bat Immortal?
Okay, okay, I can call it a masterpiece, but I didn't know that the rating would be so low. I think it was done by people who are used to reading cool articles. I still hope that updates will not be discontinued and ignore them.
Actually this book is quite good. It's just a bit like that at the front, but it looks very nice at the back. Starting from killing Danzo, the first forty-five pictures were not very good, and everyone was persuaded to quit.
It's super good-looking, the progress in strength is very reasonable, there aren't many cheats, the battle scenes are also very good, and it doesn't open up a harem. It's a rare moment of clarity, and it's worth watching.
The writing is good. Unlike other fan fictions, the protagonist is invincible and no one can control him. There is also a lot of original content. The reason why there are no five stars is the damn plot correction.
I just started watching it and it was quite interesting.
Come on, you can do it
But if you were the protagonist, would you make any different choices? Anyway, I support the author, this is very beautiful.
Very good. Judging from the current progress, Naruto is the novice village, and the main text is on the right. 😊
It's pretty exciting
It looks okay now
It seems pretty good among many Naruto stories
I can still watch the original novel if I don't care about Naruto, but I feel nothing after Naruto.
It's okay, just read it as a book on immortality hanging in the world of Naruto
No comments, just a good read
A breath of fresh air in the world of Naruto, well written
Harem Harem Harem Hehe!
For Aionia
Come on, increase the Chinese elements.
Don't ask why, I just like watching it. What can you do?
Actually, it's pretty good. .
Not bad, a book worth reading!
Some places are too simple
Goodbye, moonlight breeze
It's better to write the chapters about Naruto
The author greatly appreciates it. This book is very good.
Very good, those who give low scores are just trolls.
It felt pretty good, but the timeline of the story was too fast and the later stages were too rushed.
I have to endure it and read it, it feels better. I haven't been able to concentrate recently, so it's annoying if the text is too dense.
From the current point of view, some places force reasonableness for the sake of reasonableness. This is probably to serve the larger world view later. The author wants to write about politics, but every time he only touches upon it briefly. This is very good. He does not just copy it from others, but has his own opinions! 👍🏻 The combat power system has not collapsed as of the latest chapter, the tailed beast has not yet emerged, and the elimination of blood successors can still threaten the protagonist. It is gradual and has a beginning and an end. The protagonist's flying knife is very convincing against a profession like ninja, which has high skill and low defense. The shortcomings are: updates are too slow!
If there is no psychic, why not summon the Bat Immortal?
Okay, okay, I can call it a masterpiece, but I didn't know that the rating would be so low. I think it was done by people who are used to reading cool articles. I still hope that updates will not be discontinued and ignore them.
Actually this book is quite good. It's just a bit like that at the front, but it looks very nice at the back. Starting from killing Danzo, the first forty-five pictures were not very good, and everyone was persuaded to quit.
It's super good-looking, the progress in strength is very reasonable, there aren't many cheats, the battle scenes are also very good, and it doesn't open up a harem. It's a rare moment of clarity, and it's worth watching.
The writing is good. Unlike other fan fictions, the protagonist is invincible and no one can control him. There is also a lot of original content. The reason why there are no five stars is the damn plot correction.
I just started watching it and it was quite interesting.
Come on, you can do it
But if you were the protagonist, would you make any different choices? Anyway, I support the author, this is very beautiful.
Very good. Judging from the current progress, Naruto is the novice village, and the main text is on the right. 😊
It's pretty exciting
It looks okay now
It seems pretty good among many Naruto stories
I can still watch the original novel if I don't care about Naruto, but I feel nothing after Naruto.
It's okay, just read it as a book on immortality hanging in the world of Naruto
No comments, just a good read
A breath of fresh air in the world of Naruto, well written
Harem Harem Harem Hehe!
For Aionia
Come on, increase the Chinese elements.
Don't ask why, I just like watching it. What can you do?
Actually, it's pretty good. .
Not bad, a book worth reading!
Some places are too simple
Goodbye, moonlight breeze
It's better to write the chapters about Naruto
The author greatly appreciates it. This book is very good.
Very good, those who give low scores are just trolls.
It felt pretty good, but the timeline of the story was too fast and the later stages were too rushed.
I have to endure it and read it, it feels better. I haven't been able to concentrate recently, so it's annoying if the text is too dense.