Turned into a Villainous NPC: Sign-In and Blow Up the Whole World

It's okay, the previous writing is good, but it has been together with the players since about chapter 60. As an NPC, it's okay for you to trade with the players and fight monsters, but you are an NPC, why do you have to write that there is no difference between you and the players? Especially if you get a player's coat, you just write yourself as a player. Reading this kind of novel is just for novelty. It is more interesting from the perspective of an NPC. But when you look at it, there is no difference between you and the players. They fight monsters together, PK together, and do activities together. What's the point?

The author is right, so I will repost it again. The author recommends that you carefully read the comments that posted negative reviews. What they said is not unreasonable. The new subject matter written by the author (this is a bonus point) is quite interesting, but why does the male protagonist support Fang Xiaoyu to take revenge? You yourself also wrote: That is the kamikaze method of provoking generals. If it were me, I would not care about such a clown. If you want support, go support Ye Wu, he has more technical content. I couldn't finish reading more than ten chapters. The male protagonist is really stupid. A beautiful female anchor can make him give up his own interests (the source of the rat problem should be more than 2,000 yuan), and also say that his family is poor? As I read on, I felt like I had lost my mind. (Those who don't understand, please don't mess with me. Please understand that I have only read a few chapters, so I have changed it now.) Then someone said again, if you are not moved when you see a beautiful woman, do you want to be a eunuch? Ah bah! No matter how beautiful she is, she might like her after just meeting her once, but to give up his own interests in order to help her (previously, if the male protagonist was just an NPC, it would be okay to help the player slightly, but if he helps the female protagonist, I really can't understand it. Isn't this a virgin and what is the motive of lust?), This is a bit unacceptable.

Personally, I suggest that as an NPC, you should look like an NPC. Your writing is becoming more and more like a player. I suggest that it is better to develop the plot around the organizations of the NPC. Being the mastermind behind the scenes is better than becoming a player.

If you don't write about realistic female characters interacting with the protagonist, I support writing without female protagonists, but now I want you to follow Jiang Siming's example

Looking at the title of this book, I think it should be a cool novel! But I didn't expect that there would be such a thing as being abused, just like the kamikaze on the Internet! Why are you just scolding me? I still can't deal with them, there's nothing I can do, this is quite realistic, so I'll withdraw.

The first few chapters were okay, the NPC beat the player violently, but then it started to get a little bit toxic. The rat was sold to a female character at a low price, and the Nian beast started to tell people how to fight. You said he was short of money. Call them a threat to the protagonist. Although it is far-fetched, I can accept it. Later, the protagonist began to become more friendly to the people. You said he was like the big boss behind the scenes and was not strong enough. You said he was a villain. Except for the opposite role, I feel that he is not a villain at all. He is more like a player with an NPC panel. He also cares for the heroine in every possible way. He thought about changing the younger brother, but the money given by the heroine was so small that he never wanted to change. To put it bluntly, he was just motivated by sex.

It is a poisonous point to write about daily reality in detail, especially the part about Wu Shishi ... To make up for all the stars, I saw the protagonist in Chapter 53 opening a player clone. There is nothing I can do about this setting. After all, the NPC is set to have a low IQ, and it is easy to be suspected if you want to develop in-depth with the players. But, the villain NPC is the theme of this book, right?? Players and players have nothing to do with each other. Well, for me, I came here for the NPC setting.

What bothers me the most when reading this kind of game-type book is the connection with some pretty girls or some bad friends. If it were removed, everything else would be fine. I originally wanted to give it consideration to the opposite sex, but the author also had a hard time writing, so I'll give it two stars!

Except for the emotional aspects, everything else is to my liking. It's too awkward and childish. The author seems not good at writing, so just delete it. Fill in the holes and then delete it, or maybe it's okay to have a romantic scene where the male protagonist declares his family name and then gets together with the female anchor? Spend a few pictures to describe what kind of person the female anchor is, and there is no intersection in the game except for saying a few words to help out, but the female anchor doesn't know she is the male anchor. What a shitty intersection? Isn't this called licking a dog? Also, I skipped through the parts about Shishi because it was written without beginning or end. One second I was thinking about the male protagonist coming to find me, and the next second the male protagonist entered the game. It was so embarrassing, and Shishi didn't seem to appear in the game world. So if she doesn't want to be an overly sexual character, I asked her if this character wasn't written on the author's whim? Write what comes to mind? I suggest you create a portal to another world and enter the game world directly. If you want to get both games and love, then write it well? Nothing simple like helping with leveling, I'm speechless. Update, damn it!

Come on, the author is too short and not enough to read.