Fantasy: Establish an Elderly Immortal Cultivation Activity Center at the Beginning

To be honest, this author just writes mindless articles. The realm he writes about suddenly appears in the back. Many realms that he does not have appear suddenly. It is a mess. You can't even remember what you wrote. Then what do you write?

This is the first time I have seen all the negative reviews. I can only say that this novel is really bad. The killer should look like a killer. Go back and practice again. Maybe you are really not suitable for writing this kind of novel. A harem slap story is the best for you.

Doesn't the author know that all the tricks are vulnerable to absolute strength? Also write this layout.

It's so scary that I'm so confused...

Killer? ! ! !

Are you sure this is a killer organization?

There is no logic at all, just look at it without thinking

Hot chicken is obviously a killer organization, but he is indecisive in doing things, just like the dynasty.

Too rubbish

The author does not have

It's so shocking,

Hot chicken book. . . .

What rubbish

Have you ever seen a killer like this? [Vomit]

The chapters in this book are confusing and the logic is extremely irrational.

Don't be careful, it just seems like it's just for money, just writing randomly...

I feel so happy when I see all the bad reviews.