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Author, you changed it a bit too harshly, you might as well stick to the original sentence. This way the book will read better and it will be updated soon.

I will give you a five-star review. How do you write it in the original text? Don't make random changes, update quickly, don't wait for reminders.

Let me say something as an intermediary! There is a book friend here who has been writing original sentences. First of all, thank you! The author is not so much correcting it as explaining the meaning of the original sentence. If you read it carefully, the original sentence looks more like classical Chinese, but the author changed it into vernacular! But the author forgot one thing: why poems are so popular? It's because poems can better express that kind of charm. But it's still painful to read, because if you already know everything about it, how many book lovers are new to it? ! So don't change this kind of sentence, let alone the classics. You can create and write your own, but! Since you are going to take the universe as your world view, you have to write the original sentence and respect the author of the original work, unless you can make the changes better than the original work.

Five-star praise, the original text cannot be written in the main text. The author can write the original text in the paragraph comments, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to read! ! !

Just because the author cut Yi Xiaochuan into pieces in The Shame of Time Travel must be given a five-star rating.

Let's make a list of the strongest memes from JOJO's Bizarre Adventure. For example, Dior forced a kiss. Then put on the other ones and get them out together. Another example is the scene where Dio fights Jotaro. And the name point where Yoshikage Kira introduces himself. Another example is Uncle's Bizarre Adventure, the fifth installment of Golden Wind. The gangster shake in. The appearance of the three pillar men in the battle trend of the second part of Uncle's Bizarre Adventure

Author, your book is indeed well written. I was a little excited when I read it. It was your original pretentious lines. Why did you change it? If you change it, it won't have that taste anymore. Of course, if you, the author, do it because of copyright issues, then just pretend that I didn't say anything.

Beautiful, exciting, really beautiful

Author, your book is great. I will notice that everyone thinks you must update it tomorrow. I am a hacker. If you don't update it, I will directly hack your home network.

Bone King: Taking stock of the pretentious bosses from all over the world, am I, Gu Aotian, unworthy?

No Queen Werewolf Emperor Emperor Huangtian

I personally haven't read that many novels that are perfect or cover the sky, so it doesn't seem to be awkward at all. The writing is okay.

This novel is okay😊

It's over so soon

What should I say, come on?

It looks good, but can't it be changed to the original text? Or is the original text better?

Author, whenever you change the sentences you changed back, I will give you 5 stars.

ヾ ^_^♪

The author is very nice, but there are too few. Please write faster.

Damn, author, you are so short and weak. Please update it quickly. I give you a five-star review.

Not bad, at least the plot is well written

It's okay if you take a look at Shuhuang, but if you take it seriously, you'll lose!

I feel like I haven't finished writing yet.

Why is there no Shi Hao? I want to see Shi Hao

Not bad, but the modified sentences are a bit weak

It's not easy to write a book, so I'd better give it a five-star review.

Not bad, good, keep working hard, author

After so many years of reading, this is the first time I have met you The protagonist has the same birthday, May 25th

Although the changes are a bit jarring, the backend is still pretty good. Please support me.

666 Is super nice. I like it.