Traveling Through *********

Well written, very beautiful

This is the only book I've read that doesn't have a bad ending. The plot is also very exciting, but it's a bit sparse. The only kind of erotic plot I want to read is about the little fox and the elf princess [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

This novel reminded me of the cartoons I watched in kindergarten and elementary school. It's okay as a cartoon

It is a very good-looking novel. It makes you invincible through time travel and provides countless game equipment. The plot setting is very reasonable and the whole novel is humorous. However, the story is a bit sloppy at the end and the ending is not good. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it.

Although I was puzzled by the protagonist's attitude towards life and work from beginning to end, I still finished reading this book, and I am following it to the end. I can give it 4 stars.

I read Chapter 201 at 15:21 on August 1st. The previous plot is a bit complicated [face covering] I really put my brain on the author [laughing and crying] but it is still acceptable [like] [sending heart] [please pay attention] Rating 5.4

The moves, skills, descriptions of scene details, and themes are all wonderful, but the procrastination of the plot is the most lacking. It can be said that the protagonist's personality after being invincible is more based on the modern concept of having a pet-like patience for weak groups. I hope the plot of the next book can be improved, especially the chapter and a half about the bet between the protagonist and the light elf [Love] The forging process in Chapter 190 is really exciting [Sending my heart]

It's suitable for people like King of Bones. If you like King of Bones, it's really good.

It's pretty, but a little bit like a virgin.

It's much better than some mindless novels. It's hard to explain in one sentence now, but overall I feel it's pretty good.

It's so beautiful, a lot of laughs, like Gu Aotian hahaha

This is a very enjoyable book, why not many people read it?

, Although it is an imaginary different world, it may not be my favorite plot.

Good-looking, but a little lacking

Where is that little wolf cub?

I really like it, love it, love it

The portrayal of the protagonist may not be ideal for me.

Well, maybe somewhere. Where will the troops follow?

Not bad, but the plot is a bit tight

Brother, the plot is good, but a little lacking.

It's pretty good, not that unsightly. It's definitely a good book if you're in a book shortage.

The characterization is great. If the publisher had it, it would be better than Overload. Unfortunately, the plot of the online novel is too fast in the later stages.

Except for the ending, which is a bit sloppy, overall it's pretty good.

It's very interesting, the story line is very exciting

It's okay, but the ending is a bit sloppy, but overall it's a good novel to pass the time.

The characters are portrayed with more emotion, unlike other novels where the characters are stiff and the dialogue is emotionless.