The Most Authentic Cultivation of Immortality

This book is really amazing. I have been reading it for six or seven years. I have read a lot of novels of all types. After reading too much, I become very picky. It is difficult to read ordinary books, and I will even stop reading after reading them for a long time. It has been a long time since I read this book in one go, and I have been following it every day. The plot is really The writing is very good. This book is different from other cool novels with male protagonists. It is really very realistic. It is very sad in the early stage and counterattacks in the later stage. You will understand after reading it. I strongly recommend it. It has received five-star reviews. It is just that the update is a little slow. I hope the author will work hard. Good books will always become popular. Just don't end it.

The sense of immersion is very strong, I already feel that my holy eyes have been dug out

When Heaven is about to entrust this person with a great responsibility, he must first strain his mind, strain his muscles and bones, starve his body and skin, deplete his body, and mess up his actions.

I've been a bookworm for 78 years, and apart from Xian Ni, this is the only book that makes me feel good when I read it.

How can I put it, overall, the author's character creation needs to be improved. For example, he created a tragic experience for the protagonist, but did not give the protagonist the intelligence and viciousness that he should have after turning into a black man. I personally feel that some supporting characters such as the younger sister and Ye Xinyu have shortcomings in their images. I think the reason why Ye Xinyu waited for the protagonist for so long is really untenable. I feel that the early stage is just for the sake of abuse. After the abuse is not enough, the drama is added and the abuse is continued. This will make many readers give up. I think the shortcomings of the protagonist are mostly his intelligence and personality. For example, I just believe what others say. The part about Qingyun Sect really made me break my guard. For this kind of dark novel, those who see the darkening basically want to see the protagonist become awesome and cruel, cruelly torture the enemy, and have a cunning character. However, I only saw the protagonist becoming a demon queen and being beaten into a dog. To be honest, I didn't feel the excitement of the novel. Is it just pure abuse? That is bound to not have much market. Hey, I originally wanted to give it three stars, but the protagonist is so miserable, so I'll give it four stars. If the author reads my comments, don't think too much about it. I'm not a troll, I just express my feelings. The author's plot content still has merit, but the writing style and character design need to be improved.

It's so real. I haven't seen a book like this for a long time.

Great, this is the first time I read such a good novel, but the front part is too sad, so there are not many people [laughing]

The content structure is particularly novel. It can be seen that the author has written this book carefully. It is not a bit better than those old-fashioned novels. Writing novels should be innovative and unique so that people are willing to read it. Maybe some people don't like this type, but most book friends like to read it. Support the author and keep updating! As long as you're not exhausted, don't stop updating even if you vomit blood, and don't let some book reviews you don't like affect your performance. Write in your own style, because I see a lot of creative themes that were good at the beginning, but later were influenced by the book reviews and changed the style, so I lost the desire to read. Here I would like to give you a five-star review to encourage you!

I don't know why the rating is not high. Maybe it's not in line with the public's preference for "cool writing", but this is the real world.

It's so sad to watch, I laugh when I'm sad, I cry when I laugh.

How can I put it this way? This novel is very well written and very real. In the early stage, the protagonist almost became like a dog. Later, he gradually gained strength. However, the only drawback is that the update is too slow. The author, please, please update faster. If you don't like watching it, don't rate it. Those who couldn't stand it are a bunch of primary school students. Have you finished it? You're right there talking

It took me one night to read it all. It's really exciting. The author works hard to update it, otherwise I will send you the 40-meter sword that I have treasured for many years!

How should I put it? I have read so many novels about cultivating immortals, and this one is relatively new. It is different from the previous novels about cultivating immortals. It does not have a smooth start, and it is not even the most ordinary one. Some are just cruel. To be honest, the first few dozen chapters are heart-wrenching and difficult to read. Mainly. First, Jiao was murdered, and then he awakened and had his eyes gouged out to extract spiritual roots. It can be called the worst start. Later, the protagonist gained strength and took revenge, and then it started to feel like a short story. But in general, the subject matter is relatively new. Five stars are given. I hope the author will update soon.

It hurts so much. It's so beautiful. The author portrayed the protagonist so vividly that we really saw a young man go from being high-spirited to being discouraged to seeing a little hope to being lost again. It's so good-looking. It can be called a book written by a genius. But I hope it can be changed in the later stage. It's really cruel.

Please refresh, yes, it's not like other works. It's said to be scrapped at the beginning, but I don't know where it is scrapped, and then it becomes special in the second and third chapters. It's quite nice to have the determination to go home and miss you after all the hardships.

Let me re-review this book. At least I found the content of Perfect World, Covering the Sky, and Immortal Rebellion in this book. There is a lot of room for improvement in this book. For example, in the early part of the sect, it is a bit too far-fetched to say that the core disciples bullied a handyman for five years out of boredom. It would be more reasonable to write that the middle-level disciples were oppressed by the core disciples and because of the sect's regulations, would it be more reasonable to express their anger on the handyman? And the scene where the future sect master gave the elixir and the poisonous elixir. The reason was that he was afraid of a mortal, and his strength would be much lower. It is okay to write about amnesia in the middle period, but the cause of amnesia also feels a bit too far-fetched. It is written deliberately. In other words, if the memory is recovered, it will be a trial. If not, then the protagonist is a complete demon, killing two birds with one stone. There is also the issue of the style of this book. The early stage is full of abuse and the later stage is enjoyable. In this way, both sides suffer. Try to write in one style. I suggest the author find a writing method introduced by Sanxian Archangel on Weibo. I feel it is very suitable for this book, called Sunshine in the Crack. If this writing method is adopted, it will not lead to depression in the early stage and confusion in the later stage. The style changes too quickly without too much excess. There are still many areas for improvement in this book. It is recommended that the writing method of Sunshine in the Cracks be mainly used in the future, which will not cause the conversion to be too fast. If you can change it, it's better to change it. If it doesn't work well, it's better to switch out and change it. After all, the rating is too low. However, I suggest cutting it off and re-opening it. You can use this model, but you have to change a lot of details. I mainly use the above writing method. I just suggest that you can also continue writing it and pay attention to the style trend in the later period.

Still worth a look. Recommended by old bookworms

After reading a lot of cool articles, this sadistic article is very interesting, and it is so real that it makes people think deeply. However, the author, please don't be too appetizing to readers, otherwise the rating will not be improved. If it is too sadistic, no one will pay attention to the book. After all, the protagonist is the protagonist, and he also wants to save face. If it is too sadistic, it will not be true. Please author, let us feel the emotions of this world. Come on, author, come on author!

In a world of cultivation where the weak is vulnerable to the strong, this is really true, and what is written is indeed true. People die for wealth and birds die for food; if people don't do it for themselves, heaven and earth will destroy them. Cutting the grass and eradicating the root cause, but the protagonist's life is hard, and the lives of others are like ants. It is not the protagonist who is miserable, but the billions of low-strength cultivators.

Or maybe this is just a dream that Qin Feng had after becoming a handyman and being tortured to death.

Old bookworms like to read it. It is highly recommended. I cried when I read it. It's so tragic and so real. This is one of the most enjoyable books I have read this year. I only need this book on my bookshelf. Others stopped reading and stayed with the author every day.

It's really good. I saw a few of the previous ones and felt very addictive. Of course, I feel very good after writing it. This is not like other novice novels with all kinds of cheats, but the protagonist is invincible. The author's writing style is also very good (personal opinion). After this book became popular, I became a veteran (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑) (Although I know that writing books is just a part-time job for the author, I still hope that the author will be longer)

If it weren't for the ending being too hasty, the rest of the story would still be full of storylines that would keep people hooked. Or maybe this is a new way of writing created by the author [laughter]

It's so funny. The author went too far with the abuse. It didn't even make me uncomfortable. It made me laugh so hard that my stomach hurt.

It's quite special. The story is very good and the plot is good, but I am the kind of person who reads books at a fast pace. I often finish a book without knowing the name of the protagonist. The world view is not particularly small. It is a normal fairy tale novel. Except for the protagonist and those who have passed the exam, other people only play a supporting role as long as they have nothing to do with the plot. I don't know who it is. The writing is very good, but the pace is a bit slow later. It is normal to write thousands of fantasy novels. Maybe I am too anxious! I feel that the appeal is not that attractive. I am also an old bookworm. I have read a lot of serialized books. I often continue to read a book after a few years. But some books remind me of the plot after reading it, and I have to read it again. The writing is very good, but it lacks a feeling that I am looking forward to the next one after reading it today. I know the ending and the routine and can probably guess what the next one is about, but some books can make you look forward to it. This one lacks a little feeling. But to be fair, it's much better than many books.

It's quite true. The author remembers to hurry up ٩(๑^o^๑)۶[sneaky laugh]

Recommended by a ten-year-old bookworm, the author is great, come on

She is Bai Yueguang from the beginning of the Demon Lord She is the enemy who dug up the spiritual roots of the Demon Lord. An accident caused the two people who were supposed to be in tit-for-tat to fall in love with each other. It wasn't until their memories were restored that they realized it was a big dream. Isn't this a standard villain heroine? It's so bloody, I look forward to it (✧◡✧) I like Nangong Yue, it suddenly becomes three-dimensional, much more interesting than Bai Yueguang

The protagonist is so miserable, but it's real, it doesn't break or establish, haha😄

I watched the beginning which was pretty good. Damn, I feel so tortured that I want to cry.