My Life Became a Game

The youthful fantasy diary of a bullied senior high school girl. The core is good, you have to be strong, and what you get through hard work is yours. It just kind of came to an abrupt end at the end.

Nice! It's really good. In fact, the ending here is just right and not too abrupt. But it would be better if it could be longer and have more details and stories [crying] At first I thought it would be revenge, then I thought it would be darkness and depravity, but fortunately it was not the case... It felt quite touching. I reconciled with myself, relied on my own efforts to change into a better version of myself, loved myself, and made real friends... It was really good! !

The setting of this book is very interesting and makes people think about what would happen if life really turned into a game. The protagonist's experience reminded me of my own struggles in the face of difficulties, which was very resonant. Moreover, the characters in the book have distinct personalities, especially the elf, who is very cute. I think this book is very suitable for friends who like fantasy and adventure to read.

It's too short. I feel like there's still a lot that I haven't written yet.

So exciting, what's to come next! ! ! This is gone [what]

It's pretty, but it's just not enough.

Come on, your writing is very complimentary, keep up the good work

It's very good, but it's too short. It would be better if there is a sequel.

Only sincerity can be rewarded, but falsehood can only make you feel tired! Just let go of the past [almost crying]

It's beautiful, but it's gone so quickly, so I'm still a bit unsatisfied