Chi Fan, a disciple of the Poison Sect, fell into the soul-breaking sect of the martial arts sect after the death of his master Alchemy Master Jiujiu. In order to repay Wang Zhihai, the second head of the Duanhun Sect, for taking him in, Chi Fan took action to treat Wang Zhihai's poison. However, the head of the Duanhun Sect, Wang Zhitian, and the elders of the Duanhun Sect discovered that he was a cultivator of immortality. The people from the Duanhun Sect wanted to steal Chi Fan's practice skills, but Chi Fan discovered it early and prepared to leave the Duanhun Sect. Zhou Yaoshi, who also knew that Chi Fan was a cultivator in the Duanhun Sect, also informed the Divine Doctor Sect, which was also a martial arts sect. The Divine Doctor Sect encircled the Duanhun Sect. Because Chi Fan reported to Wang Zhitian's daughter Wang Yiyi, Wang Yiyi and Wang Zhihai fled to heaven, but Wang Zhitian fell on the Duanhun Mountain.
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Few people write about the feeling of alchemy. Most of them are weapon cultivators, sword cultivators, and talisman cultivators. Maybe the alchemy cultivator as a whole is alchemy. It rarely feels like fighting. It is difficult to write a grand scene and many people do not describe it as the protagonist. Most people like to be a wandering knight or swordsman. Danxiu feels very plain and weak, and is not liked by most people. But it is precisely because of this that this story feels special. Starting from the perspective of alchemy, the angle is strange and unexpectedly fresh.
The author's unique and rich imagination is a highlight of this book. The development of the plot is quite imaginative and makes people feel novel and curious, but upon careful consideration, it turns out to be reasonable. But during the reading process, I felt that the sense of immersion in this work was relatively lacking. If the characterization of the characters and the description of the environment can be enriched, whether it is the rendering of the surrounding environment, environmental atmosphere, or the description of psychological monologues and actions, it can greatly enhance the reader's experience during the reading process.
It feels a bit lacking. I have read a lot of fantasy articles and I feel that this article should be an older story. The pace is relatively slow and it is not the fast-paced story that is now mainstream. New readers will find it a bit overwhelming. The pace is a bit draggy and the impact is not enough. It will not look good. However, compared to older readers, they should feel very comfortable. The foreshadowing is slowly unfolded and the world view is shown and described bit by bit. It has a strong sense of immersion and a sense of picture. The overall plot is not very ups and downs. Most people should be able to accept it, and more than a hundred chapters is not a lot.
There are many stories in Soul-Severing Sect, and there is always a lot of hatred between cultivators. I also felt the fight between cultivators. Wang Zhihai's fate is so twists and turns. Some people want to harm him, and some want to save him. The story is quite twists and turns, but very lively and interesting. There are many plots that are very eye-catching, but there are also some less rigorous aspects, such as the logic is a bit unclear, the writing is a bit rough, and some parts are repeated. At the same time, the final ending also made me feel a bit abrupt. The writing is sharp but there is a lot of room for improvement.
This is a fantasy novel full of fairy spirit. The story tells the story of the protagonist who falls into a martial arts sect after the death of his master, Alchemy Master. In order to repay his kindness and help people cure their poisons, someone with intentions inadvertently discovers that he is a cultivator of immortality. This triggers various sects to steal and plunder the protagonist's cultivation techniques. Since ancient times, evil cannot prevail against good. In the end, the protagonist defeats the demon master with justice and wins. The author uses vivid writing to show us a fantasy world with interlocking storylines. Reading every byte of the story makes you feel like you are personally there.
It is a fantasy novel that I like very much. Although the author's writing style is relatively erotic, but who has never been young? I have read through the books written by the author later, and each one is better than the last. Returning to this book, what shocked me so much was the author's innovative description of the worldview, which was really eye-catching. Most people follow the rules and write a leisure system, but the author took a different approach and attracted a lot of attention. There is actually some talent and understanding of my own in it. I also hope that the author will get better and better, come on!
The plot of this book is very attractive, especially the story of Chi Fan, a disciple of the Poison Sect, which reminded me of Han Li in "The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality". They are all people who continue to work hard in difficult situations and pursue the path to immortality. The description of the double-eyed blue blood and ancient inheritance in the book is also very mysterious, making people curious about the secret behind it. Looking forward to future developments!
The chapters are clear and the content is exciting
Few people write about the feeling of alchemy. Most of them are weapon cultivators, sword cultivators, and talisman cultivators. Maybe the alchemy cultivator as a whole is alchemy. It rarely feels like fighting. It is difficult to write a grand scene and many people do not describe it as the protagonist. Most people like to be a wandering knight or swordsman. Danxiu feels very plain and weak, and is not liked by most people. But it is precisely because of this that this story feels special. Starting from the perspective of alchemy, the angle is strange and unexpectedly fresh.
The author's unique and rich imagination is a highlight of this book. The development of the plot is quite imaginative and makes people feel novel and curious, but upon careful consideration, it turns out to be reasonable. But during the reading process, I felt that the sense of immersion in this work was relatively lacking. If the characterization of the characters and the description of the environment can be enriched, whether it is the rendering of the surrounding environment, environmental atmosphere, or the description of psychological monologues and actions, it can greatly enhance the reader's experience during the reading process.
It feels a bit lacking. I have read a lot of fantasy articles and I feel that this article should be an older story. The pace is relatively slow and it is not the fast-paced story that is now mainstream. New readers will find it a bit overwhelming. The pace is a bit draggy and the impact is not enough. It will not look good. However, compared to older readers, they should feel very comfortable. The foreshadowing is slowly unfolded and the world view is shown and described bit by bit. It has a strong sense of immersion and a sense of picture. The overall plot is not very ups and downs. Most people should be able to accept it, and more than a hundred chapters is not a lot.
There are many stories in Soul-Severing Sect, and there is always a lot of hatred between cultivators. I also felt the fight between cultivators. Wang Zhihai's fate is so twists and turns. Some people want to harm him, and some want to save him. The story is quite twists and turns, but very lively and interesting. There are many plots that are very eye-catching, but there are also some less rigorous aspects, such as the logic is a bit unclear, the writing is a bit rough, and some parts are repeated. At the same time, the final ending also made me feel a bit abrupt. The writing is sharp but there is a lot of room for improvement.
This is a fantasy novel full of fairy spirit. The story tells the story of the protagonist who falls into a martial arts sect after the death of his master, Alchemy Master. In order to repay his kindness and help people cure their poisons, someone with intentions inadvertently discovers that he is a cultivator of immortality. This triggers various sects to steal and plunder the protagonist's cultivation techniques. Since ancient times, evil cannot prevail against good. In the end, the protagonist defeats the demon master with justice and wins. The author uses vivid writing to show us a fantasy world with interlocking storylines. Reading every byte of the story makes you feel like you are personally there.
It is a fantasy novel that I like very much. Although the author's writing style is relatively erotic, but who has never been young? I have read through the books written by the author later, and each one is better than the last. Returning to this book, what shocked me so much was the author's innovative description of the worldview, which was really eye-catching. Most people follow the rules and write a leisure system, but the author took a different approach and attracted a lot of attention. There is actually some talent and understanding of my own in it. I also hope that the author will get better and better, come on!
The plot of this book is very attractive, especially the story of Chi Fan, a disciple of the Poison Sect, which reminded me of Han Li in "The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality". They are all people who continue to work hard in difficult situations and pursue the path to immortality. The description of the double-eyed blue blood and ancient inheritance in the book is also very mysterious, making people curious about the secret behind it. Looking forward to future developments!
The chapters are clear and the content is exciting