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I am a novel author who is very popular on other platforms. The author of this book has fresh writing, humorous language, and sometimes bohemian (such as character description). It is not the colorful words everywhere. The novel is relaxed and pleasant, and the title is attractive. XP is completely a classic urban magic + alien world transformation novel. I said that the novel has a clear idea and well-depicted characters. The characters' personalities are reflected in the multi-faceted descriptions of language and movement. However, the description of the characters' movements is a bit poor, and the psychological description is still not enough. Some of the narratives are straightforward (some psychological aspects can be expressed in a subtle way). I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve. The early stage of the plot development of the novel seems to be an everyday urban story starting from the protagonist's ability to transform into a girl and a series of interesting stories. The protagonist uses the ability of a boy to transform into a girl as a variable, and the relationship between various supporting characters. In the early stage, the protagonist let go of the second male lead and his (best friend) gay friends, which makes readers feel that it is developing in the direction of changing marriage. The addition of the father in the subsequent protagonist's story shows that The inner pain of the protagonist is revealed. His father has traditional values, his mother gave birth to a girl for the second time, the protagonist is unable to revitalize the family due to illness, and his father has an affair outside the home. The relationship between mother and son begins to become cold, and domestic violence occurs between the protagonist, mother and son. The story gradually gains depth. The protagonist is becoming more and more feminine, and the second male lead is still unaware of the situation in the early stages. It is difficult to cover up the fire, and the secret will be leaked sooner or later. Because the second male lead has a close relationship with the protagonist, the plot may develop in the direction of remarriage in the later stage. Just because I have read Chapter 11, the subsequent content of the novel's plot is still open to discussion.

The article is still short, but the subject matter is very novel and rare. Although the author is a newbie, he is very skilled in driving. The subject matter of the article is also the same. Instead of following the crowd, it is about changing marriage. There's nothing else, come on, the author just wants to say goodbye to the eunuch.

This book has been on my bookshelf for more than a year. It has accumulated 34,000 copies and has been discontinued now. I rarely comment on this book so everyone may not notice me, but I still give a serious review here. 1 In terms of material selection: It was definitely very novel in the transformation literature at that time. The routine of the transformation literature at that time was roughly to arrange a system first, and then issue tasks, such as what would happen if you don't wear a skirt. Then the protagonist adapts to life and then gets married, or changes into a hundred, and then writes about daily life until the end. Most of their backgrounds are in the entertainment industry and live broadcasting. This book is first of all systemless, and then it is magic plus campus, and the transformation method is the mode of being bound by a succubus and then transforming, which is much better than the forced transformation of the system at the same time. 2. In terms of plot: The sources for obtaining things are relatively reasonable. In some novels, because the author does not know how to write a reasonable source, he just says that the system gives something and the protagonist can be as powerful as he wants. In terms of emotions, some authors even give it away at the beginning. I don't even understand how it works! The emotional development in this book is slower and more realistic. Personal evaluation: This book is well written. It can be said to have opened up a new world in transformation literature, and it also gives readers a new way to read transformation literature, which is eye-catching. Ps (I hope the author can come back soon and don't be affected by other people's criticism, come on) Reviewed on August 13

The subject matter is never the reason for low scores, the content is. The main thing that Xingzhuan writes about is psychological changes, from initial resistance to confusion and entanglement, to relief and change. In this regard, Tomato's translations are basically not very good. The psychological changes in the early and middle stages of this book are still not well written, and some places are slightly exaggerated. As for the later plot, that is, before and after the game, I feel that it is better than what I wrote before. Although the author's writing is still somewhat unsatisfactory, it is still quite good compared to other works. I hope more efforts can be made to update it. Compared with the spiritual revival of the new book, I am still more interested in this kind of daily life and love content, and I really want to see the ending as soon as possible.

I just read it and it feels good. If possible, please ask the author not to change your marriage, but to stay the same (≧∇≦*)

It's very beautiful. Sometimes I get tired of watching lilies all the time. Changing the style is a different experience.

Big cheers for the author. I finally found the third book "Bian Married" on Tomato. Although I just read it, I felt it was labeled "Bian Married" and gave it five stars. ο(=·ω＜=)☆Kira

It's very beautiful, and it would be nice if I could update it quickly. I hope you don't be ignorant ٩( ö̆ ) و

Good-looking, one of the few stories about marriage change

Tomatoes become less and less, and finally there is another book. Come on, the author, give me some candy!!!

Stir-fried chicken is a good-looking article about changing marriage, highly recommended! And the author will update soon😳

The overall idea of this book is good, the thinking is clear, and the writing is not sloppy. The transformation at the beginning makes a boy suddenly become a girl. There is also a process for the transformation of any thing. This process is very good. The male protagonist, oh no, the female protagonist has changed again and again to gradually adapt to the fact of becoming a girl. Up to now, this story is confessed to the male protagonist (I saw this one because the author has not updated it yet ('-ωก̀ )) However, the plot has not collapsed yet. I hope the author will write better and better ٩(๑′0`๑)۶

People have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes. I have finished reading the novel, and it will take a few more years for it to be updated. I don't know if the author has seen it. If so, don't forget to update. Sending a razor blade thousands of miles away is a gift worth updating. ——The author must "take care" of your health

The author's writing is quite interesting and very unique. So don't stop updating! (›´ω`‹)Your book is mentioned in many posts now. I think the first chapter can be revised. It describes the game a little too much and turns off most readers. The transformation only starts in the later chapters. But if you read the rest, you will find it interesting. So the author must not give up! Many book friends are helping to recommend your books.

The plot development is uneventful, and the roommates have begun to change with a strong sense of immersion.

It's great. I really like it. It's the last day of school. Please update it soon! ! ! (≧∇≦)/

The book is very astringent. It contains different sizes of candies and knives, as well as wrapped sugar knives and wrapped candies. It is recommended to read it as slowly as possible, just one chapter a day. The author has not updated for more than two months. This heartless man (a heartless woman?) Kept saying "it will not be finished", but he (she?) Still stopped updating (could it be that he stayed up late to study? No, no? No?)

The previous plot is very good, I hope it will get better and better in the future! (Can you update more and faster? I hate the yellow button ψ(｀∇´)ψ)

This is the first novel that made me laugh out loud like a pig and my aunt laughing in class. It must be five stars. Hahahahahahaha. I stopped singing and I was laughing for a while (not the kind that makes me laugh, this novel is very interesting)

Come on, the author, support remarriage. Qiuqiu please update quickly [Sending Hearts]

The author begs you to come back and update. I have been looking forward to your update for a year [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] 2024, grave sweeping O. O

Great, great, but the update is too slow. And it's too short, not enough to read.

The author will update soon. It's very interesting. I can't bear it anymore.

The plot and characters are well controlled, but the subject matter is not good. However, such subject matter is very practical in Tomato. Although it has some shortcomings, it is still worth reading. After all, this is an era of book shortage, so I will not pick it up. Come on, the update is a bit slow.

It's really good to read, but I just hope the author can update it faster. It's such a good-looking book. Recommended by conscience, you can read more

Well, the writing is good. I finally found another book on marriage change. Cheers, author＾0＾~

I originally thought it was a Lily article, but the author has reversed it. The book is very good, but some passersby lack a little emotion.

It's very beautiful, I like it very much, I support the author to continue writing! ! !

Superb writing! Come on, Rin-chan!

The most exciting one is me. This is my favorite among so many transformation stories I have read