As a Girl, I Want to Be a Swordsman

First of all, thank you for your support. Because of your comments and gifts, I feel full of motivation! Because I was still editing the article, I replied to the message a little later. Either the author didn't reply or he might have been editing the article or something and didn't see it.

Everyone shout Lily Lily with me. ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥

So far it looks pretty good, I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. Regarding the main character, I think it's best if she's single. She doesn't need to be a lily or get married. She can have someone who admires her. 2. Don't make the protagonist's character too masculine. It can be a little bit, but it's best not to have it. After all, what I want to see is a girl cultivating immortality, not a tomboy cultivating immortality. If it's too masculine, it's better to go straight to a male-oriented character. 3. The protagonist is a good-looking girl, so that should be reflected. Don't use those cliche plots of slaps in the face. After reading so many fairy tales, the good-looking girls in them are treated very well. It is best not to write a supporting character who looks down on the protagonist and then the protagonist slaps him in the face. I think it can be written as an image with talent, good looks, and the admiration of many people. In addition, you can write about the troubles caused by the protagonist's own appearance and talent under certain circumstances. 4. Try to write as long as possible, and describe the region in a grand way, such as the four major domains and the central sacred domain and the ancient forbidden land, the Hundred Thousand Mountains, the Ten Thousand Demonic Forests, the Demonic Domain, the God Burial Valley, and the final land. The author can create his own ideas and learn from them. 5. You can write more race, but don't write it in a messy way. I hope the author can write better and better, I'm optimistic about you

To be honest, you can quickly pass your childhood. Generally, in this kind of cultivation, you will become an adult at 15 years old. You can directly pass it to 13 or 14 years old, and your appearance will be better. The author is great

Those who want to read "Change Marriage" please go to "Women's Channel". Among "Male Channels", only "Lily" is the orthodox one. And almost all female channel novels are about "Change Marriage", okay, what's wrong with having more Lily? ? Also, the protagonist is originally a man, but there are always some "rotten girls" in this evil society who "make the male protagonist be with another "man"!!"

It is best to be single, and then there are one or two men who like the heroine.

Join me in calling for marriage change! Change marriage! Change marriage! (｢･ω･)｢Hey

As long as I don't get married, I will keep this good review.

Author, can the author make Xiao Qing, the little girl in the system, and the protagonist look like micro lilies, so that it feels like CP?

This book is good. I give it five stars. I hope it can be updated with 3,000 to 4,000 words every day.

I feel that the storyline is very good, and the author will continue to work hard.

Author, do you still want to write? 😰😰😰

Your book uncle likes it very much but he doesn't like your update speed very much.

The content of the story is very exciting. Among many fantasy novels, this one is quite good. It can be used as a book to confer gods. It is necessary to describe more details. I think it can still be used to confer gods.

Lily should change her marriage, I prefer Lily's change of marriage but I can't stand it

When I woke up, this book was actually updated [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]. If it hadn't been marked as being serialized, I would have thought it was finished and wouldn't have updated it [I almost cried]

It's just that when the male protagonist traveled through time, he was a bit young. 😂😂

I haven't read enough. Can anyone recommend novels of the same type? Book shortage

The author who updates every month is amazing. Added August 20, 2021 to now January 29, 2022. Twelve point thirty thousand words, one hundred and sixty-two days. To be honest, I have written more words than you in the papers I have written in such a long time. (The plot is pretty good, but I don't know where the author is from).

It's too little, but the content is still super exciting. I hope Wan Lao won't be disappointed.

The content is exciting and interesting, coherent and smooth. It is a good book and worth reading. But the author is too slow to update. My hands are a little itchy. I want to send him a razor blade.

The book is very good. I really like the pairing of Lin Qingxi and Lu Xiaoyao. I hope it is a Lily novel!

This book is quite interesting and well-organized, and the characters are drawn in detail. I like it.

Very pretty! I hope the author will continue to work hard!

The idea is relatively clear and clear. Nowadays, there are relatively few female protagonists in the theme of cultivating immortals. Come on, come on, come on!

Come on, the author, it's a good plot

This book is very good, but the updates are a bit slow, so I won't give it five stars.

Give it five stars. I will be a long-time fan from now on.

The suspected missing person is back. Really, if I hadn't accidentally browsed the bookshelf, I almost thought this guy wouldn't be updated anymore.

Married, still a lily or single, but I like them both