The Holy Lord Is in Marvel and Gets the Fish Fruit at the Beginning

It's okay, not too poisonous, and the world view is grand and a bit confusing, but after all, it's not easy to write like this, so come on, author. (Actually, the author, your writing is a bit messy. I personally think it is a bit uncomfortable to watch. The character of the protagonist is okay, but the portrayal of the supporting characters needs to be improved. The better the logic, the better.) Come on, author, write well.

Seeing that it's not too bad yet, I hope the combination of the worldview won't cause too many bugs. It looks pretty good so far. Ps: Are you serious about reciting the works in the introduction? ? (ಡωಡ) (Manual funny)

This is one of the best Jackie Chan Adventures fics I have ever seen. The combat power system is very clear and did not collapse even in the later stages of writing. The battles are passionate and reasonable, and there is no recklessness.

Overall, it seems to be quite well written, but don't be limited by the structure. You can consider becoming a villain behind the scenes. For example, it's like working with Phoenix Girl. You don't have to use force to decide the outcome.

This is a really good book. You can enjoy seeing how the Holy Lord should really feel instead of the unsightly feeling in the play.

Not bad, it's a pretty good Holy Lord article I've written so far.

Bad News: Stitches Good news: They were all sutured and there was a second wound. The author is very thoughtful and has a very grand world view The only pity is that the author chose this way of describing niche themes and supporting characters, and buried too much foreshadowing, resulting in an imbalance in the description of the primary and secondary relationships in the later period, and a weak ending. Personally, I think it's worth watching. It's a wonderful fan creation that shouldn't be let down. Finally, I strongly recommend the author to continue writing this book, five-star praise

This is the best thing I have seen written about the Holy Lord, but there are too few.

I really like this book and there is no pretense. The author's writing is good and the content is rich and colorful. Apart from the shortcomings of the Cthulhu worldview, I recommend the author to take a good look at the Cthulhu worldview. I really don't want to read it because you wrote about the Cthulhu worldview. Really, unless you declare that this is your setting, I am a Cthulhu fan.

Beautifully done, really beautiful. The only regret is that I didn't add Aoife Enoch.

It's very interesting, and it suits my taste very well. I feel it is the most interesting of all the Holy Lord novels. I don't know why it doesn't get a high score.

The plot is smooth and coherent, and I can't stop it. I hope the author will continue his work and make it longer and stronger ('▿')

Some details are not handled well, however. Overall, this book is still very poisonous, but it doesn't feel like the one next door. The writing is touching, so I give it 5 stars (◍•ᴗ•◍)

It's really beautiful. I like you so much Don't hide, it's you

A very nice book. Although it has no system, it is inherently cheating. It has clever writing and a female protagonist.

I think this book is really good, especially the imagination. In fact, this book does not give a clear ending in the end, so how to say it? There should have been some foreshadowing before, author. But it's just a Xiangzi, a member of the Zhongzhang Universe. Half of the creatures in the universe are gone. It can be said that it gave them a very good ending, but why does it feel a bit pity, if I haven't seen it.

The world view is huge, and I think it looks pretty good anyway. Come on, author!

It's very good, a little chaotic at times, but the intertwining of this kind of world is very interesting. It's a pity that I am a student, otherwise I would definitely reward the author.

Well, let's put it this way, it's the first time I've seen a novel with this theme. It's quite novel. Maybe the first dozen or so chapters weren't very enjoyable, maybe it's because the backgrounds of the two worlds weren't well integrated, but I could get through it without thinking about it, and I personally felt that it gradually became more enjoyable later on. A suggestion: When creating the two world backgrounds, make an outline first, and slowly incorporate some events using your own ideas or events that exist in the world background so that they are not obtrusive and reasonable. It's just a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

It is a very imaginative and innovative article, not bad😊

I feel like I can accept Xiaoyu. This is one of the few comprehensive American comics I have read that is not bad, and the writing style is also good.

There are no words to describe the brilliance of this book. The combination of Marvel and Jackie Chan's Adventures is very novel. Excellent plot and great battle scenes

Personally, I think it is average, but the subject matter is very good, very novel, and interesting. However, in the middle and later stages, it is indeed very dull, with no outstanding two points. If I personally rate it, if it is 10 points, I may only give 6.9 Or 7 points.

This book is particularly good and the world is well integrated. Unlike other novels, the theory is confusing. It also proposes bold ideas and a reasonable and bold world fusion, which involves many well-known novels, such as The Law of the Dark Forest of Three-Body Problem, which is a novel worth reading carefully. After watching that, I found that Thanos didn't say a few words at all, and the rest of the plot was skipped. But I can't help it. I became addicted to this book as soon as I read it.

Integration of multiple worlds, clear world view, not too toxic, not a stallion, distinct character, not many heroine plots, worth watching

It's interesting enough. The plot is exciting and brings in Marvel elements perfectly. I hope the author will work hard to keep writing it and not end it. Come on, strengthen the Holy Lord and conquer the Marvel universe. Come on. Also, the system is ineffective. It is recommended to increase the system capabilities, otherwise the protagonist's battery life will not be enough. Come on, five-star praise. . . . . Well! It ended badly again. Does Tomato really have no happy ending?

A very good book. Although it felt to me like I was making a big stew with ingredients from Buddha Jumping Over the Wall, but ended up adding too much soup, causing more than half of it to be water. Overall it's pretty good. Very recommended. But don't come here if you have weak resistance to poison.

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Except for the unfinished ending, which is a bit sudden, the rest of the logic is pretty good, and the macro is pretty big.

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