Forbidden Land******************

The subject matter is quite good, and the writing style is also relatively good. The shortcoming is that your priorities are reversed. The novel should be written around the protagonist, not around. Well, if you write about the whole big world, it will make the protagonist seem to have no sense of existence. Nowadays, netizens prefer to watch exciting content. If someone like you is a bit Buddhist, they generally won't like it. But I still quite like it, go for it!

It's pretty good-looking. Fortunately, the way the guy appears is different. He's so handsome. The male protagonist is so handsome

Dad, come on, support you! !

Beautiful, I like it very much

Invincible text, I will first give the last two lines to Samsung. I will give you the invincible text at will. Then I will read it first and then I will say it when I am satisfied! Don't live up to my expectations!

Not bad, keep up the good work and write more novelly.

Big cheers for the author! Have you updated? Where do you see the gift I gave you?