Elf*******

Except that the pace is a bit fast, everything else is pretty good

The content so far is very good, but it's best not to have a female protagonist, and if there is, it shouldn't be a sundae.

Wonderful! Except the pace is a bit fast! Could the author please stop arranging a partner for the protagonist so early (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ? The male protagonist is only ten years old! Besides, that girl from the aristocratic school has no ability other than cooking! I don't like her (´-ω-`)! Big cheers for the author! Waiting for your updates or updates! The more the merrier! I don't mind! 🥰🥰🥰

Although not as awesome as the protagonists in other novels, it is still good. I prefer that the protagonist can beat others violently at the beginning, rather than draw, or just have the upper hand. This gives us readers an indescribable pleasure. I hope the author will work hard.

I feel like the author has been able to control the rhythm issue to a more balanced point. It doesn't feel as fast as before. There is indeed something in the writing. Come on, author!

I like it, I can't read it lately, and I don't know why, but I read this book from beginning to end (although it's a small amount, but I can't finish some of the smaller ones)

Updates have been a bit slow these days. I just want to hurry up for no other reason.

This book is very rich in combat content. And it's also well written. Two updates every night at eight o'clock. It's a pity that it will be discontinued soon.

The author writes well. I hope you will continue to write and finish after traveling around the world.

Not bad, not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, come on, it's very beautiful, it's my type

The logic is reasonable, the sentences are fluent, the sentences and words match, there are no wrong sentences, the organization is clear, and you are immersed in the scene (highlight the key points to be tested)

The content is very good, but I hope the protagonist has more contact with Pokémon.

I want to know how many areas the author will write about? Will it be in the area of ​​Garner?

Beautiful, super beautiful! But can the author add a few more chapters? These are simply not enough.

Wow, this is great. There are very few novels about time-travel Pokémon like this. The point is that they are well written.

I like it very much, I hope the author will update it soon, (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡ I hope the author can follow the main line of the anime to the Orange Islands, Johto, Fengyuan, Sinnoh, Unova, Kalos, Alola, and Galar. Give a different anime. I hope Zhiye accepts Serena in Carlos I hope Xiao Chang can educate Xiao Hao well ╰（‵□′）╯ Finally, I wish the author's books will become more and more popular I hope the author can continue to do so and look forward to the fourth update.

Not bad, not bad. Many childhood regrets have been filled in. The writing is also good. There are basically no inconsistencies.

Very well written. The plot is also quite interesting. It's just that the strength is growing a little fast. Hope this is a continuous, challenging Quartz Conference. Also travel to other places.

It's really good to watch. The identity of the protagonist is well written and there is no system. I hope the author will not write about the mythical beasts everywhere. Also, the elves upgrade too quickly and the pace is fast. Finally, I hope there will be a grass elf, preferably a rotten wood demon.

Goodbye👋🏻The author is great

The heroine hopes to be Sirona

What a pity. Why was it taken off the shelves?

It's really nice to look at, but a little bit lacking.

Keep up the good work and hope that there will be a Hupa later🤣🤣

Come on, I love this book so much. Get the sundae as soon as possible. It's best to have a single heroine, and at most add a little snow.

This is my favorite Pokémon novel so far. I hope the author won't be influenced by other people's words. Come on!

Pay attention to your body. This is the best thing I have ever seen except for the main character Tatsuno. It is also the first time I have seen it without a golden finger.

It's very well written. It's the only Pokémon fan fiction I think is well written except for Team Rocket (ｖ＾＿＾)ｖ

I think some of the characters in the animation are quite powerful. It shouldn't be so simple in the battle. It should be okay 😓

The plot is good and the protagonist is very decisive. The most important thing is that this seems to be a harem story, so I won't give it five stars. I'm sorry, it's my own conscience.