Pirate************

Not bad (I always feel a bit sloppy)🌚

Generally speaking, it kind of ruins the character. But I give full marks to the harem

Although they are a harem girl group, they don't look disgusting at this stage. I hope they can keep it that way.

It's so well written, I really enjoyed reading it, and I'm looking forward to seeing Zoro and Kuina, Nami and Noki, and Sanji and Carmen meet again. 😀😀😀

There are a few questions. The protagonist only killed the pirates and did not attack civilians. Garp probably just wanted to lure the protagonist into the navy. Also, the protagonist and Nokigo are both natural fruits, so bullets hitting Nokigo are useless. No one can hurt them in the East China Sea, and the protagonist is armed and useful. The mouse colonel was also captured and taken to Impel Down. Where is the mouse colonel? But it's still very interesting, I hope the author will keep writing! ! !

The book is very good. It's almost November and I hope it will be updated more so that I can enjoy reading it.

It's good to watch. Although some characters' personalities are different from the original ones, I like to see different ones when reading fan fiction. If everything is the original plot, why would I read fanfics?

The author has a thorough understanding of the TV series and writes well. It is a rare good book. It must be the plot. I have seen people who read it. I think this is because the author of this book spent a lot of time in the research process. Five-star praise 👍👍👍

Although some settings and missions are not very satisfactory in terms of character, overall it is still very good. There are many pirate books that I have read a few chapters or abandoned the book after a few chapters. This one is in the top five of the pirate books I have read. I am looking forward to the next work.

Author, is it finished? So fast?

Yes, yes, but I looked at why there are no daily check-ins for a long time. They are all special check-ins.,,,,

It looks okay, but I don't know how to define this combat power? Just beat the navy colonel~ How can you still be at 55 with the navy hero? Garp's current combat power is 19,000! You have more than 20,000, good guy! You can directly push the four emperors

Not bad! Where is the gift?

I hope the author will continue to write full harem and invincible novels. It's strange that the time traveler is not so eloquent! But if the time traveler is Lily or a eunuch, it's a different story! The only pity is that Nami was not included in the harem by the protagonist, and the Donghai sisters only picked a black rose. Another white rose cost Wang Lufu nothing. In addition, Im's strength is really too low. The ruler of the world was defeated so easily! But since this is fan fiction, it makes sense that even a true god would have to kneel down when facing a cheating protagonist!

It's very interesting. I really like harem stories. When will I summarize the previous ones?

(͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) It's good-looking. This is a girl group. Except the captain is a man. He can't say anything sexy. It's good-looking.

It's pretty good, and the author's writing style is also good.

Beautiful(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Cheers to the excellent authors! (づ ●─● )づ

I hope the author will be a man, come on! ! !

Yes, very good, but the best summoner for the summoning card is Pain Six Paths, Uchiha Itachi, and Uchiha Madara. Thank you.

Very exciting, very beautiful

Okay, I like this

There are four generals? The three navy generals Akainu, Kizaru, Aokiji, Fujitora and Midoriya joined the navy later.

It's better to be different from the original comics. Whitebeard and Ace are not dead, Blackbeard is dead, and the top war navy fails.

It's well written, why is the rating so low?

A good pirate novel, but one that follows the ship or harem genre.

Author, I really enjoyed reading this book you wrote. I hope the author will continue to work hard and take care of himself at the same time. Don't tire yourself out by staying up late. Come on💪

Although the writing is not that good? But the overall feeling is still okay! You can keep watching, I just hope it doesn't end badly!

It's very interesting. It was a bit boring at first, but the more you watch it, the more interesting it becomes.

It looks good ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з, but the ending is a bit sloppy