[Quick travel +1v1]
Li Yuan, who has the best skin in a million, devoted himself to special copies and various acting skills to complete the mission.
…
Gentle Proton: Why do you always look hurt every time I see you?
The eldest son of a wealthy family: Yuan Yuan is obviously the best at seducing me...
Major General Star: It is obvious that instructor Li Yuan admires me...
Little cutie: Do you like to play with me?
…
Li Yuan: The plot collapsed again! ! !
System: Yuanyuan, just be a human being! ! !
(Lord God vs. The cute little angel)
Reader comments
It's good-looking, I like the first aspect, but it's a bit messy. At first I thought the three Song family members would play with the male protagonist together, and I was a little excited. But later I found out that I was wrong. It turns out that Shou is only loyal to Gong, ugh~. The second plane is also very good-looking. It's so sweet that I like it so much. Keep up the good work, but you should also pay attention to your health💓💓
Beautiful, this is a good article! I hope you will pick up this book. The emotions are real. Every story will make you cry, but it is also very sweet. It can be said to be both painful and happy. I read this article quickly because it's so interesting! So I can't tell you some details, but I can say that the storyline is novel and the protagonist setting is very popular. Especially the possessiveness of the protagonist is exciting, and the character of the other party really pokes me. This article doesn't make any sense! Woo hoo hoo, it's so sweet, my beads are falling while watching it [covers mouth]. Come on, this article is the most satisfying among my many collections. Although I have many collections, I only read a few of them often.
It's great, but it's very similar to the paranoid villain in a suspense novel who wants to monopolize me [Quick Time Travel], especially the first plane. It may be an illusion. I still choose to believe the author. The author writes very well. Come on!
When I first watched the first scene, I was so tortured that I didn't want it. I was about to give up, but when I saw the introduction, it said that the first plane could be skipped, so I looked at the next plane with uneasiness. It was super sweet, so sweet that I didn't want it. The author is great. Fortunately, I read the introduction, otherwise I would have missed this wonderful novel! Do you want to trick me to death so that you can inherit my bookshelf [Dog Head Saves Life]
Although the first plane is chewing glass candy 🍬, the next one is definitely sweet! ! ! Go! ! !
Awesome, I like it so much
You are the fireworks in the world, you are the only one in my heart
There's a world of difference here, I believe you will choose me
After all you are smart, aren't you!
Very nice! Is it true that there are so few chapters on the third plane? There seem to be more chapters on the fourth plane.
Come on, hehe. Although there are not too many people nowadays, please don't have the idea of abandoning the article. In short, the authors who work hard to update will have sweets to eat. Come on, I am optimistic about you!
(๑`灬´๑)
It's beautiful and very sweet, but I'm sorry for one thing. I always thought that the title of the book and the cover were messed up by the author. After recommending it to a friend, she asked me why I couldn't find it (><) (dog head saves life🐶)
The writing is delicate and warm, and the situation is not cliche. It will not make people like me who love to throw away books feel impatient. A very good fast travel novel
I've read it all, it's good. The ending is a bit quick, I hope the next book will be longer. By the way, will your next book be a quick travel novel?
It's a good article. Here are some suggestions for the author. The logical content of the article is a little unclear. Maybe the story lines and emotional lines of the first few planes were written a little too fast. Each plane feels a bit rushed. The emotional lines of the two protagonists are a bit too fast. The protagonist's character is a little broken. Secondly, I really can't stand this new plane of octopus. The plot is a bit draggy. Maybe the author has made changes after reading previous comments that the story is too fast. But We can try to speed up the story a little bit on this basis, and we can appropriately delete unnecessary plots, such as the number of appearances of Ellen, or slightly reduce the degree of octopus's influence on the protagonist. Although it is good to have some reservations about Ron's identity or to create some suspense, if it keeps the reader's appetite, it will make people feel a little disgusted. You can try to delay Ron's strange feeling later, or write Ron's feelings for the protagonist more intensely, which may make people feel better.
But it's great for newbies! Come on! ! I hope you write better and better~
Come on, come on, come on! Awesome
The article is not enough. Come on, big brother
You come to the human world to see the stars at night and feel the gentleness of the years. ——Yuyi Literary Society·Gu Jiu
Dear author, the article you wrote is really, really good. But dear author, your update speed is really slow! ! ! ! ! ! (•̀へ •́ ╮ )(•̀へ •́ ╮ )
Jue Juezi! But I didn't understand the ending. Ai, it doesn't matter, it's just good-looking! Highly recommended! ! !
I enjoyed the first plane, but lost it halfway through. 👿👿👿👿👿
Simply! ! High quality quick passage article! So pretty! I strongly recommend the first face, it's so "sweet"🌝It's amazing! Anyway, there is absolutely no loss in investing!
The author's writing is great, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง
It's not bad, it's to my liking, but I was a little confused after watching the first plane. Speaking of which, I actually stood against CP. (ಥ_ಥ) It's so sad. The author couldn't have updated a thousand chapters to make up for my young mind⊙▽⊙So it's time to update (✪▽✪)
The plot is unique, very imaginative, and sweet to the heart😍😍😍😍. I stayed up late to read it for a long time, and I soon became tired of it😤😤. I love this book so much😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍, thank you so much for the author! !
It's very beautiful. I really like the little octopus on the board. It's so cute that I want to steal it. I hope you will continue to work hard
Come on, author, come on, ah ah ah ah ah, it's so beautiful. Update and update, can you please update more?
Come on! The book is beautiful!
It's written so well in big letters, why is it so short? But I forgive you. Can you write more next time you write a book? Beg on your knees!
Let me check in. When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan! ! ! 🌚
The first aspect is very touching. Especially that yandere Mr. Song Chuyan, if those methods are used on the commercial battlefield and underground activities, then the Song family will definitely be able to dominate both the black and white.
So pretty! Love it, love it! 😍😍😍Big cheers to the author! 😘😘😘
It's good-looking, I like the first aspect, but it's a bit messy. At first I thought the three Song family members would play with the male protagonist together, and I was a little excited. But later I found out that I was wrong. It turns out that Shou is only loyal to Gong, ugh~. The second plane is also very good-looking. It's so sweet that I like it so much. Keep up the good work, but you should also pay attention to your health💓💓
Beautiful, this is a good article! I hope you will pick up this book. The emotions are real. Every story will make you cry, but it is also very sweet. It can be said to be both painful and happy. I read this article quickly because it's so interesting! So I can't tell you some details, but I can say that the storyline is novel and the protagonist setting is very popular. Especially the possessiveness of the protagonist is exciting, and the character of the other party really pokes me. This article doesn't make any sense! Woo hoo hoo, it's so sweet, my beads are falling while watching it [covers mouth]. Come on, this article is the most satisfying among my many collections. Although I have many collections, I only read a few of them often.
It's great, but it's very similar to the paranoid villain in a suspense novel who wants to monopolize me [Quick Time Travel], especially the first plane. It may be an illusion. I still choose to believe the author. The author writes very well. Come on!
When I first watched the first scene, I was so tortured that I didn't want it. I was about to give up, but when I saw the introduction, it said that the first plane could be skipped, so I looked at the next plane with uneasiness. It was super sweet, so sweet that I didn't want it. The author is great. Fortunately, I read the introduction, otherwise I would have missed this wonderful novel! Do you want to trick me to death so that you can inherit my bookshelf [Dog Head Saves Life]
Although the first plane is chewing glass candy 🍬, the next one is definitely sweet! ! ! Go! ! !
Awesome, I like it so much You are the fireworks in the world, you are the only one in my heart There's a world of difference here, I believe you will choose me After all you are smart, aren't you!
Very nice! Is it true that there are so few chapters on the third plane? There seem to be more chapters on the fourth plane.
Come on, hehe. Although there are not too many people nowadays, please don't have the idea of abandoning the article. In short, the authors who work hard to update will have sweets to eat. Come on, I am optimistic about you! (๑`灬´๑)
It's beautiful and very sweet, but I'm sorry for one thing. I always thought that the title of the book and the cover were messed up by the author. After recommending it to a friend, she asked me why I couldn't find it (><) (dog head saves life🐶)
The writing is delicate and warm, and the situation is not cliche. It will not make people like me who love to throw away books feel impatient. A very good fast travel novel
I've read it all, it's good. The ending is a bit quick, I hope the next book will be longer. By the way, will your next book be a quick travel novel?
It's a good article. Here are some suggestions for the author. The logical content of the article is a little unclear. Maybe the story lines and emotional lines of the first few planes were written a little too fast. Each plane feels a bit rushed. The emotional lines of the two protagonists are a bit too fast. The protagonist's character is a little broken. Secondly, I really can't stand this new plane of octopus. The plot is a bit draggy. Maybe the author has made changes after reading previous comments that the story is too fast. But We can try to speed up the story a little bit on this basis, and we can appropriately delete unnecessary plots, such as the number of appearances of Ellen, or slightly reduce the degree of octopus's influence on the protagonist. Although it is good to have some reservations about Ron's identity or to create some suspense, if it keeps the reader's appetite, it will make people feel a little disgusted. You can try to delay Ron's strange feeling later, or write Ron's feelings for the protagonist more intensely, which may make people feel better. But it's great for newbies! Come on! ! I hope you write better and better~
Come on, come on, come on! Awesome
The article is not enough. Come on, big brother
You come to the human world to see the stars at night and feel the gentleness of the years. ——Yuyi Literary Society·Gu Jiu
Dear author, the article you wrote is really, really good. But dear author, your update speed is really slow! ! ! ! ! ! (•̀へ •́ ╮ )(•̀へ •́ ╮ )
Jue Juezi! But I didn't understand the ending. Ai, it doesn't matter, it's just good-looking! Highly recommended! ! !
I enjoyed the first plane, but lost it halfway through. 👿👿👿👿👿
Simply! ! High quality quick passage article! So pretty! I strongly recommend the first face, it's so "sweet"🌝It's amazing! Anyway, there is absolutely no loss in investing!
The author's writing is great, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง
It's not bad, it's to my liking, but I was a little confused after watching the first plane. Speaking of which, I actually stood against CP. (ಥ_ಥ) It's so sad. The author couldn't have updated a thousand chapters to make up for my young mind⊙▽⊙So it's time to update (✪▽✪)
The plot is unique, very imaginative, and sweet to the heart😍😍😍😍. I stayed up late to read it for a long time, and I soon became tired of it😤😤. I love this book so much😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍, thank you so much for the author! !
It's very beautiful. I really like the little octopus on the board. It's so cute that I want to steal it. I hope you will continue to work hard
Come on, author, come on, ah ah ah ah ah, it's so beautiful. Update and update, can you please update more?
Come on! The book is beautiful!
It's written so well in big letters, why is it so short? But I forgive you. Can you write more next time you write a book? Beg on your knees!
Let me check in. When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan! ! ! 🌚
The first aspect is very touching. Especially that yandere Mr. Song Chuyan, if those methods are used on the commercial battlefield and underground activities, then the Song family will definitely be able to dominate both the black and white.
So pretty! Love it, love it! 😍😍😍Big cheers to the author! 😘😘😘
Come on, author, it's so beautiful