Quick Transmigration: A Supporting Actress's Guide to Raising Children

The first world is weird 1. The male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist too quickly (and the specific reason why the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist is not clearly described) 2. The male lead is a yandere type and very possessive. Even if he wants the female lead to live happily, he will compete with the male lead for the female lead (anyway, all the yanderes I see are like this😊) 3. The ending ends too quickly. This book is about raising a Zai Zai, but it ends with a meeting with the parents, which is a bit sudden. If you want to write about raising a Zai Zai, you must write about Zai Zai's life. 4. The foreshadowing is buried, but it is not made clear. For example, that little girl in second grade, most people probably think she is Zaizai's future wife (I guess!) 5. Zai Zai is a child, and children are quite sensitive. If his mother suddenly changes her personality, she will definitely be suspicious. She has to make appropriate changes to fit the character in the original plot. After all, children are quite sensitive. (In the fight in the kindergarten, Zai Zai said that her mother looks completely different from usual. Most children will not believe it. No matter whose mother is suddenly completely different from before, they will not be suspicious) 6. It was said earlier that Zaizai was afraid of telling the truth (the fight in the kindergarten) because he was afraid that his mother would beat him, but when the heroine received the original plot, she did not say that the mother had beaten Zaizai. (The first world has too many minefields) I just read the second world. To be honest, I was a little confused whether this book had cp or no cp. It was told that there was no official cp, and then I felt a little dizzy. The second world is to lose one's husband and raise cubs (I definitely didn't mean to say Dada!!! I just made suggestions. I hope Dada's writing style is better and the content is better😓) (As for the above mentioned, just use it as a reference, please don't criticize meヽ(￣д￣;)ノ) I hope the content and writing will get better and better (✪▽✪)

It's pretty good to watch, except that the first world is a bit unfinished. If you mind, you can start watching the second world. The rating is a bit low because not many people have watched it. Big boost for the author!

I hope CP's role will be less and Zaizai's story will be more.

It's pretty good looking hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

The first story ended before it ended, so I give it four stars. The fourth story is the most to my liking, so keep up the good work! Don't write too verbosely, and the main character is a child, so just don't steal the spotlight from others.

I can't say it's the best or not the best. I just felt that the first dimension was a bit boring (self-feeling), but the writing style is generally good. I recommend it with 4 stars.

Dear author, the first plane is a bit unfinished, but you wrote it very well. I think you will be able to write better in the future.

It's very beautiful, neat and tidy, and there's nothing too big between lovers. I just like reading this kind of novel, and I'm currently reading it!

, The author greatly cheers^0^~ I hope "Zai Zai" can take more shots

Although this book only has 18 pictures, I think the author's writing style is very good. As the saying goes, good books are never too late. I believe that the author's great books will definitely become popular in the future! Come on! (✺^▽^)✺Come on (๑•̀ㅂ•́)ﾉ➹♡