Fast Time Travel: the Blackened Villain's Pseudo White Lotus

This book is very interesting. Whether you like it or not, I like it.

Because the author is a novice, I will give you some advice (this is my personal experience) ① In the first interface, to be honest, it's a bit draggy, and many places just don't focus on the theme, which makes the first interface a bit scattered, but the outline is very good. ② The female protagonists are all lovable, but one more feature can be added is self-reliance. "Self-reliance" here refers to completing tasks without relying on the male protagonist, which allows us to understand a person more clearly, but there is no problem in leaving some difficult facts to the male protagonist. After all, coquettish girls have a good life. ③The relationship between the characters is not well explained and is somewhat incoherent. You can think about it from another angle. If you are stuck in daily life, you can learn more about the articles of some big guys and learn their structure and some writing skills.

For the sake of drama, the heroine maintains her character so that the hero will misunderstand her, and she doesn't refute when the scumbag scolds her, which makes people misunderstand her.

It's quite interesting, but I feel like the author made the original villain unable to control his emotions after being time-traveled by the male protagonist.

Emmmm, I couldn't stand it after reading the first plane halfway through. The author's writing style may not be very good, and there is no emotional fluctuation when reading it. There are a few glitches. I read the book review and it said that the author is a novice, so I understand the writing style. It just feels like the male protagonist and the female protagonist seem to have no idea about love. Personally, I prefer career-oriented heroines, but everyone has their own preferences. If there are any sisters who like to read sweet articles, you can try it! I just watched the first plane, and I felt that the emotional line between the male and female protagonists was quite sweet. So, five-star praise is given to you.

Ah, the first world is so cruel! [Cry][cry][cry] But, luckily it gets sweeter later on. Great author, why don't you write the story of Lin Ling and Luo Bingcheng? What a pity [cover face][cover face][cover face] Finally, I would like to thank the author for writing such a great book. Bixin[send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Why not write the story of the Ka family brothers and sisters? [Cry][Cry]

This book is very exciting. I hope the author can continue to work hard and don't be sorry for my five-star praise! Big cheers for the author! ! !

The author is yyds, the plot is so nice, so the author will work hard to update it~

It's just an unrequited love! Then use the task world to cultivate an emotional pair. This time the villain boss also knows him, right? There is or he knows him unilaterally and he does not know her. He likes her, but he doesn't know that she does. Or maybe he doesn't even know there is such a person. Or maybe this person is too mysterious for her. That's it for the first story.

The plot is good, but the writing needs to be improved

The storyline of Da Da Da is very good. It probably didn't take long for Da Da to write the book. The plot ideas are very good, but the depiction is not gripping enough. More efforts need to be made in the description. The plot could use a twist at times, the writing is not mature enough, and the characters are not vivid enough, so please give it a try

I saw the aspect that interests me (the villain's scheming Bai Lian). This is not the first aspect. It feels quite childish, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not well written. I like it to come quickly, but maybe the relationship aspect is not handled well. It feels very casual, childish, and awkward. However, in some places, it will be much better to imagine it as an anime, a comic, or a Q-version character. I quite like the boss in that position. Good luck to the author.

Overall good, keep going😊

Good job ahead, keep it up

Good-looking, good-looking, recommended, recommended

Very exciting and beautiful

Author, I read another novel. The male protagonist in that novel is also named Yan Qing. It's a coincidence. Author, your novel is really good\(//∇//)\

Very good, worth reading, sweet article

So pretty! Support the author greatly! Big cheers for the author❤️

I love this novel, highly recommend it! !

Can! ! Not bad for a bookshelf! !

It's super good-looking and you won't lose money if you invest in it (ಡωಡ)

The plot is good and looks good

Very beautiful, I like to watch it

The plot is quite interesting

It's so pretty, I'm so grateful😀💗

Not much to say, it's very beautiful, I recommend it.

This book is quite nice. I can't understand the writing style. Anyway, it's just two words: nice (๑•ω•๑)

The good-looking male protagonist's love for the female protagonist is his preference for doting on his own from the beginning to the end. The female protagonist is domineering, good-looking, pampered, sweet, and fond of her [laughing] [shy] [like]

This book Fried Chicken is great! ! !