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I came from this site to support you, this great hero. I have read this article on this site, and I have also read the comments below. I objectively analyzed your article from the perspective of an author. First of all, there is the writing style. There is basically no problem with your writing style. It is still a common problem for newcomers. It is too immature. It will be better if you write more. Let's talk about the plot, the pace of the plot may be a bit slow. Since this is fan fiction, there is no need to talk about the characters. There are some problems with this protagonist. You can completely use the system as the protagonist, and there is no need to hire a special person to be the protagonist. If the system is the protagonist, there will be much fewer problems. There is also style. Many people cannot accept this style, but those who can accept it like it very much. You have already written so many words, and it is impossible to change them. Listen to readers' suggestions and try to get recommendations so that more people can read your articles, so that you will find people who like your books. Let's do our best together. The above are all my personal opinions. If it causes you dissatisfaction, please reply to me and I can delete it.

It's very interesting, the plot is intertwined 😊, it's very exciting

Don't ask me why I have four stars, because there are many authors who write about Naruto, either they write about people... Or they write very well in the early stage, but fall apart in the later stage, and then it's unfinished. So...[Crazy hint]→_→

I looked embarrassed when I saw it... This must be the author's first time writing... I hope the author will not write too brainlessly in the future... Come on...(￣∀￣)

Sorry, sir, I also left some bad remarks under your comment. I didn't know that guy was here to cause hatred at first, but I found out later. I can only say sorry to you.

I didn't see the back part. Is the protagonist dead?

Actually, author, you can try writing this kind of novel without using a protagonist. You can still write it well (*^ω^*)

Hua Chenyu, the eccentric man who controls the clothes and fuel consumption, has lived up to the "retro style".

Come on, come on, it's well written, but I don't know why a lot of people say that pig's feet should be written down.

It's okay to watch it as a funny cartoon.

I have finished reading it. How should I put it? This is indeed what they commented, but I still feel good about it personally. It is not easy to create a world of words, and bugs are acceptable. So, keep working hard to create. I believe that you, the author, will be able to create a superb novel. Come on!

It's quite good, but I remember that I was looking for a live broadcast room type novel. Will this one be considered off topic later on? And there are too many distractions, as well as the characters and plot. It's good to watch, but it's very difficult to watch. I didn't watch much in the early stage and skipped it, and then I barely finished it. There are really too many poisonous points. Even though I've finished reading it, I definitely don't want this book to appear on my bookshelf

Isn't Chi Hanfeng's behavior normal? Many fanfics are about wretched harems. You like it very much, but if he wants to open a harem, but he can't, isn't it more normal? LSP is Chi Hanfeng's evaluation of himself, but you must be invincible and all the beauties in the ninja world are Chi Hanfeng, do you think it looks good?

There were many words that appeared that should not be from this era, and suddenly I felt that they were all from time travel.

The magic changes are quite big, but it doesn't stop me from liking this book. It's messy, it's too messy

Okay, okay, based on the author's attitude, I give it five stars. I didn't expect the author to hide it so deeply and have so many protagonists. Thank you to the author for the answer (o^^o)

It's okay. The subject matter is novel and interesting. It's a bit toxic in the early stage, but it's still okay in the later stage. It has the nature of dream fulfillment, which is good.

Overall, the novel is very good, and the protagonist's transformation from an inconspicuous little person to the final one is very good. . . . Well, the main reason is that the plot is a bit messy and I couldn't read it in the middle, but I can't say anything about the quality.

A pretty good book

I prefer cool articles. Look at my bookshelf. The author's next book may be cool.

When I saw Chapter 72, God Itachi transformed into a royal sister and used his ultimate move (drawing a sword from his chest). That should be the system's true form, right? I thought at the time that this was a female video? Well, there is also the male protagonist Chi and other things, which is indeed disgusting. . . . Anyway, cheers to the author

I feel like the main character turned into a female, and Uchiha Itachi Yuri.

It looks very good! ! Haha 😄

The remake of Nonsense Demon is pretty good.

This book doesn't stick with the needle

Still pretty

Why is this novel so ugly? But I like it.

I just read Chapter 80 and it feels good. Let's see what happens next (manual funny) 🤪

One word: good Two words: super good Three words: Super exciting Four words………… One hundred million words are omitted here......

It's so easy to persuade me to give up in the early stage, but it's really beautiful later on.