Journey to the West: Teaching Monkeys to Become Saints at the Beginning

The overall outline of the book is very good, and the content on Fangcun Mountain at the beginning is also very good. After leaving Fangcun, the book was useless. It's really embarrassing to watch. You are an immortal. You said that you spend all day with a stupid female bandit leader. You can't think of recruiting people to build a gang. Moreover, it is too plain and not interesting, a bit like reading a running account...

I hope that Feng Ling'er will be killed and the protagonist will be darkened. The realm is too chaotic. The Dragon King can't beat the heroine. Shouldn't it be a second? According to Journey to the West, the Dragon King is at least an immortal.

You actually used a woman to start a journey to the west. . . . Women are still like idiots. . . This is Journey to the West, this is a big world. You actually started falling in love? Opening the harem can also make readers happy. Love? In what era, who believes in love? The protagonist is also written like a fool. Nothing wrong. If it weren't for your courage, I would give it one star.

The front is okay. Once the two of them go out, I don't know what I'm writing. If I don't level up, I've endured so many things in a country and you have to take care of it? Do you play? I also got drunk for a while and I was exorcising demons here and there. Is that your business? And there is a great emperor who keeps messing with you because of a poor relative who doesn't care much about you? If the emperor had the leisure, that centipede spirit would have already ascended to heaven and become a god. Don't you think what you wrote is unreasonable?

This book is almost useless

This is hopeless, there is no need to write, it won't save you, just find a class.

Feng Linger.

Is this Journey to the West? Is this a monkey? Is this an immortal? Is this a world view? ? ? Is this for people with low IQs?

It feels good, but it feels a bit straightforward and not very exciting. I feel a bit boring after watching it.

Too many typos

Not bad, not bad.

Good, good, good, good

Come on, definitely next time

What a rubbish ending?

Monkey has finished writing. Have you graduated from elementary school? Digress

Very good! Very good!

Rubbish, is this Journey to the West? ? ?

It's kind of cool at the beginning, but it goes too far later. You're just a little earthly immortal, and the emperor can kill you with just one finger. The emperor still makes your family cool.

66666, After seeing so many lies and wins, this is the real lies and wins

33 Was no problem before. After 33. It's all tmd and it's garbage. What are you washing?