Online Games: Beautiful Landlady, Absolutely European Emperor

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Author, I want a game NPC character. Character: Dust Race: Human (innate) Realm: Golden Immortal (lvl.700) Skills: Gang Sha (Three-Six Tiangang, Seven-two Earth Sha), Nine-turn Xuanyuan Gong, Taishang Xuanqing Jing Properties: Strength 'fairy': 5300 Yuanshen 'immortal': 5600 Physique 'immortal': 5200 (One point of fairy-level attributes is equal to 10,000 points of spiritual-level attributes, and one point of spiritual-level attributes is equal to 10,000 points of ordinary attributes. Speed and physique are integrated into physique, and spirit is integrated into soul with soul.)

The author's thinking is very clear, and using the game as a clue, it can be seen that he is an advanced player. It is very typical for a male protagonist who starts as the Dragon King to make a living by playing games and having beautiful women as his companions. After reading it, I have a certain understanding of this book, a story about monster-spawn love. The game and reality are combined, and the logic is very clear, but it is recommended that the author keep the content a little closer, for example, lay some foreshadowing in the first few chapters and fill in the holes later, which will be more attractive. Personally speaking, I was a little excited when I watched the male protagonist draw talents in Qianmen, but there is obvious moisture in the following chapters. Although I have read them all, it is easy for the reader's curiosity to disappear. Blindly killing monsters and leveling up is an old routine to provoke gamers. It can be seen that the author is working hard to make this book popular and popular. I will always support the author. Then I have a few suggestions that I hope the author will take a look at. It is suggested that the author should use some of the potential of LSP, as long as it can pass the review, and make the content more attractive [I don't know if others want to read it, but I want to read it anyway. . ] The richer the content, such as betrayal by a friend, or encountering difficulties and blows, etc., The article will be a little ups and downs. If the protagonist's path is too smooth, it will have a bad impact. Although it will be better to write the beginning this way, it will become a bit boring later. I still feel that the author shouldn't give the male protagonist too good equipment or something all at once, as it will make the readers feel bored [that's how I feel anyway] Although there is a lot to write, I still hope the author can care about it. I still hope that the author will write better and better, this book will become popular quickly, and my comments will become high-quality comments. If you have any dissatisfaction, you can leave a message below. I will reply and explain and make changes one by one after reading it. I hope my comment can be upvoted, so parents, can you give me a heart? Four stars are given here, come on the author!

Very good, I like it very much.

It looks so good. Hurry up and recommend it to the heroine.

Is the heroine Fang Xue?

Great, support the author

Read, read, take note, remember to add

Over 600,000 words, and it doesn't even have a rating

Beautiful, this is beautifully written. It's very close to my heart, Sao Nian.