Dad: I Became a Father Before I Even Graduated!

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With the heroine's character, I really don't know how the heroine survives to this day. The same goes for the male protagonist, he's really awesome.

The problem with this book is that the author has no children at all. He wrote it based on his imagination. Those who don't have children will probably still find it good. Those who have children will find it too confusing.

Two stars for no reason. I feel uncomfortable watching it. The protagonist's past is not mentioned at all. Just like this person who suddenly appeared, I don't even know why he hates his father so much.

The advantage is clear logical thinking. It seems that your outline is very clear. Although the child's growth process is simplified and clearly described, it is better than those that have to describe more than a dozen pictures. There are not many abuses. Personally, I feel that this book is still a good book. It depends on whether the author's outline will collapse in the later stage. The system will also appear and disappear when necessary, which will not make people feel that the system is necessary. If you write well, this will be another excellent book. Come on [Those who say there is no logic are because you have read few books. Generally speaking, this book is not suitable for beginners, so you can read it for old bookworms]

1. It is not explained what conflicts the protagonist has with his family. 2. The system shows up and the protagonist doesn't understand that there is a problem. 3. Is it enough to just rest in the hospital for a few days during childbirth? What about confinement? No need to do it?

The author lacks common sense in life. For example, a child who is only half a day old can hold a bottle and drink milk, and can go shopping for clothes ten days after a caesarean section. There are too many such examples. No wonder the score is not high.

I was dumbfounded when I read Chapter 69. At the end of the chapter, the author also said that it was about daily life. The daily life of your family is really dangerous. Also, the author said that the main character was in poor health and had been strengthened twice. He also said that he had muscles and so on. He couldn't even beat a middle-aged gambler. It was really a display of muscles and a negative IQ.

After reading about 20 chapters, the protagonist has a big problem with the setting. Instead of talking about the system, he talks about his father and says that it has nothing to do with him. He really wants to cut off the relationship and return the black card. If he wants to break off the relationship, he still reveals the black card from time to time for fear that others will not know. It is also uncomfortable to think about his father's secret.