The Fourth Immortal Emperor

I am a new author, I would like to encourage you. Your writing is pretty good so far. I just have a few suggestions. I see that the cultivation systems of the human race and the demon race you wrote are different. The human race understands the laws, while the demon race stimulates the bloodline awakening talent. Since you are a human race, you should embody some power of laws against the enemy. Of course, it is no problem to use the physical body and the innate magical powers in the demon race, but you can also consider the combination of laws and innate magical powers. Another point is the swallowing demon body. Since it is called swallowing the sky, it should show super strong swallowing abilities, such as swallowing the energy and strength of other people's attacks to weaken other people's attacks, swallowing the surrounding energy for its own use, and the swallowing mark that swallows the energy of others. After swallowing it, it should be able to feed itself back to improve its own energy. Of course, the above is just a suggestion to provide the author with some ideas. Perhaps the story has just unfolded now, and the author will write about it later, so we'll see.

Update soon, even the cows in the production team dare not rest like this [dog head]

Good guy, I have a lot of words, so I'll move on to the next one.

It's pretty, but a little short

It's pretty good, but the demon clan seems to have become the tool man in the early stage.

Okay, okay, okay, okay, okay

This novel is pretty good

It's okay, author, come on

It's okay, but it improves too quickly later on.

All in all, in short, it would be better if the detailed description is more detailed. I look forward to your next masterpiece😁👆🌹🔥