
Shock! a Great Start, with a Critical Hit and a Miracle
震惊!开局一片地,暴击出奇迹
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 6.6M Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Gaming & Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Explore more →Looking for Fan Fiction That Travels to Douluo Continent
The wonderful story of the male protagonist traveling to Douluo Continent and being with Tang San
9.9 Points, High Score Novel
More Than 5000 Chapters, the Final Chapter
A better book than Jiutianba Tijue
Completed Version of the Book of God (9.0 or Above)
A Good Book with a Score of 9.8 or Above. Please Read It at Least Twice. Please Recommend It.
Both male and female channels are acceptable
Check Out Books with a Tomato Score of 9.8 or Above
If there is more, please add
Completed More Than 5,000 Chapters, Fantasy or System Novels
Looking for (Completed) Articles That I Will Never Tire of Reading! ! !
I'm already out of books, and I don't want to wait for updates that would be too painful😭. There is no limit to the type of completed articles, and the subject matter should be as novel as possible. I don't want to read the same articles.
Wilderness Survival, Desert Island, Sea Island, Empty Island, Anything Can Be Used
Wilderness survival, time travel, etc.
I've Become Numb to Reading, and No Novel Can Arouse My Interest Now, Jiu Min
Can anyone help me? I'm tired of reading it. Is there any novel with novel themes and good writing that can keep people reading? I beg you! ! !
Top-Notch Book, Very Mouth-Watering, Don't Read If You Don't Have a Good Book.
We Urgently Need the Kind of Novel That Will Make You Addicted as Soon as You Read It! Both Modern and Ancient Times!
Urban, Systematic Article, I Can't Bear to Delete It After Reading It
It's urban, systematic, the supporting characters are not smart, and you won't delete it after watching it.
Everything Below 9.5 Is Ordinary Grade, and Above 9.5 There Are Also Different Grades.
More Than 5,000 Chapters, Preferably Completed, Gun Novels
That kind of spear from ancient times
Please Read a Book That Makes You Laugh Until Your Stomach Hurts and Still Gets a 9! !
The Three Divine Books Have Been Completed, and There Are No Updates on the Strange Beasts. Is There Really No Masterpiece?
I want to read a book like "I Learned to Kill Gods in a Mental Hospital".
Chapter 2000 and Above, Talking About Leading Troops to Establish a Dynasty
Chapter 2000 and above, about leading troops to establish a dynasty, with martial arts
Finished the Book, I Have the Desire to Read It
Infinite Evolution, Death Train, Resistance Ability, Mental Hospital Killing God, Young and Old, Southeast, System, and other things that are not annoying to watch.
Supreme Level Book Wasteland, There Is No T0 Level One, Don't Come Here
The End of the World + Stocking up + Not Building a Power + 9.5 Masterpiece⊙▽⊙
Complete Book, High Quality, Complete Book Absolutely Complete! ! ! Any Type!
There Is a Shortage of Books and My Eyesight Is Too High. I Can Only Rely on These Few Books to Survive.
There is a shortage of books and my eyesight is too high. I can only rely on these few books to survive.
Survival, Island, Ocean, Empty Island, Wooden House, Raft Type
I want to read a book similar to "Survival on the Ice and Sea, I Chatted with All Creatures to Get Information". Islands, empty islands, deep sea, rafts, wooden houses, etc. It's too difficult to find books. No one has read the topic yet.








































































































Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. [/ Awesome] Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. [/Poor] I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded and let me finish reading it in "two days". [/Sweat] Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers first
This book is also a book that I have been following for a long time, and it is well written. Compared with other time travels, the world system written in this book has many ways to play, and there are many people from different worlds. Reading this book gives me the feeling that you can watch the protagonist grow up step by step, instead of speeding up the progress and letting the protagonist reach the sky in one step like other books. It may also be because of the "old age" of this book that there does not seem to be many new readers, so the rating is not as high as other books, but it is indeed a good book, five stars.
Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not gorgeous The language is decorated with pure language, but it impresses readers with its ordinary true feelings. Statement Smooth and coherent, with perfect psychological portrayal and detailed description. Beautiful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials It is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, and the language is plain yet stylish. Pick. Concise and full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This book The novel shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary, and uses the ordinary to The sentences describe the hero's psychology very well. The ultimate, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. Art From a technical point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its The meaning is far greater than success itself. After reading this little book of yours After saying that, my heart could not be calm for a long time. How could this world be so peaceful? I can't believe my eyes that such a penetrating novel can exist eyes. You made me deeply understand that "there are people outside the world, and there are people outside the world". After reading the novel, I dare not easily comment on this sentence On the subject, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish the little people in this world. Some articles. But I still commented because I felt that if I cannot leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, That will be a lifelong regret of mine. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe this novel. Wonderful. So in the end, I just want to say: your novel It's so exciting, why not update it quickly?
Overall, it's actually pretty good. If you're short of books, you can read it. Even though I have read more than 590 chapters, and I was told not to read it with my brain, I still can't stand the numerical system, and there are often problems with the logic.
The writing is very good. When did Fang Mengyu get taken over by the male protagonist? They just keep the territories together. Ahem, I'm a serious person😍
It's a good book. Although it has some unreasonableness and loopholes, the characters are well created. The most important thing is the rhythm of the plot (I personally think this is an important scoring point for a book). The world view is well created, except for the Three Kingdoms copy, which is a bit unsightly. This quality is very good among tomatoes. I really scolded it while watching it. The rating is still a five-star rating!
I am addicted to it. It has more than 1,600 chapters and took two and a half weeks. Come on, author, I will read it again.
All I can say about this book is yyds! Marvelous! This is one of the few books that made me read only this book for several days in a row. I read it from morning to night. The writing is really great! I personally think this is the best tomato farming book. Give the author a thumbs up👍👍👍!
To be honest, the name of this book is a bit sloppy, but the content in the book is really good, and it is not as stupid as other similar articles. It is worth reading.
To be honest, I have been reading this book for several years. When I first read it, I had forgotten how long it was. I only remember that it was only a little over a thousand at the time. After reading it, I felt good. Two or three years later, it turned out that it was still updated, so I read it again. This book cannot be said to be very exciting, but it is indeed good enough in the early stage (in my opinion), and it may feel a bit repetitive later on, which I personally think is okay; in the early stage of dataization, I don't know how rigorous it is, but at least it is passable, but in the later stage, it is a chaotic dance of gods and demons. It's hard to say anything else about the protagonist, but the character setting is definitely very obvious, and I like it very much. Then there is the World Channel speech, which some people think is watery, but in fact this part has become one of the highlights of the book in the middle and later stages, right? The more than 2,000 chapters have been written in a humorous style, and in the later stages, there are various self-deprecations and slander. Maybe you will say that you should not read it with your brain. That is indeed true. Logical problems do exist, but listen to me. If you don't like the parts, you can skip it. This does not prevent it from being considered a good book. Maybe you will like it?
I wasn't really a fan of multi-female plots at first, but the scale was well grasped. The early development of the plot was relatively gentle, but the regional battles in the later stages were more exciting. It was a pleasure to watch. The disadvantage is that the author's mathematics may have been taught by a physical education teacher. If you want to read it, you don't need to remember the data he wrote. Another point is that sometimes the slots are written in the front and filled in later. It takes patience to watch.
I have read more than 700 chapters, not to mention how good the writing is and how exciting the plot is. But the author has always been able to maintain a fresh advancement. I can see the shadow of various online games. Although the settings occasionally crash, I can continue to watch. It's a good book to pass the time, but it's a pity that I found it too late, otherwise I could have suggested authors who are at the same pace.
The steady improvement is very suitable for a post-apocalyptic survival novel. It feels very good, not brainless, and the BOOs natives are not fools, and the fights are relatively real. The article is also very interesting. Each of the beast girls in it is very unique and cute. The heroine and the harem are all well portrayed. I highly recommend reading it🥰 Personally, I like it very much, [laughs awkwardly][rolls eyes][eats melon]
It's wonderful, perfect, and it perfectly suits my taste in reading. I stayed up late to finish reading it. Thank you, the author, please keep updating!
The score is a bit low, 8.9. This book can be read. The author will help you give it five stars and rush to it. Update it quickly. You are most afraid of keeping the book until it gathers dust on the shelf. . . . . Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
The books written by the author are very attractive to me. I can't stand reading such books written by other authors. If you like survival, worlds, and tower defense, I highly recommend reading it.
Very good, very good, the author is updating 3 chapters every day. , Very stable
I really didn't expect this author to be so persistent. I have been following him for almost two years. I think I have to praise him for not being a eunuch. It's quite rare to meet such a person in Tomato who just writes books and doesn't give up.
I quite like it, but the word count is a bit short, but it's well written! Add a little more to make me look good, hehehe. Chapter 113 is a bit short. Believe it or not... I will follow the network cable directly to your home.
It's very interesting to watch. The mystery of Yu Dijun's identity has been revealed. Luo Yu's business history is also very interesting. And the last sentence, please update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The big idea isn't new, but it's well written and has a good rhythm. I feel like I've always wanted to read the storyline. Instead of repeating the same routine. A very good book.
I've seen about half of it so far, and I would say it's very eye-catching, whether I praise it or not. Common protagonists in novels have characters that are either good, a light of righteousness, evil, decisive in killing, or funny or something like that. The protagonist of this film is the first capitalist I have seen. I don't dare to say that it is true. This capitalist's face is really quite real, and it is also very suitable for the background of the farming development article. Of course, there are also people who cannot accept that they think the three views are incorrect, and it is normal for people to have different opinions. However, some small points are not very good. The data is sometimes slightly confused and the expansion is a bit fast (personal opinion). Also, there are too few scenes of Beast Girl! The setting also has some annoying holes. Anyway, I hope the author will do his best.
Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. [/ Awesome] Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. [/Poor] I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded and let me finish reading it in "two days". [/Sweat]Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers first. The more I look at it, the more I look up to it
Be content with yourselves. This book is much better than The Thatched House Next Door. The protagonist improves and becomes good or evil. The male protagonist of The Thatched House Next Door even cheated on the girl his friend liked. After being exposed, he still thought about how to escape. I couldn't read it at all. This book is already very good.
I feel like this is going to be a novel with ten thousand chapters. As long as the author doesn't give up, I will keep reading it. It's just that 3 chapters a day is not enough, and the author has done a great job in detailing it. .
Overall, this book is pretty good. The reason why the rating is so low, less than 9, is entirely because the author is not good at mathematics. . I always miscalculated the previous money. . I'm so angry that I won't give him 5 stars. . Hum 😤. . . I miscalculated money earlier and forced a lot of people to quit, but the plot at the end was okay. I guess you need to learn arithmetic from a teacher again. If you can survive the little poisonous part at the beginning, the overall story is quite interesting.
The content of this book is wonderful and there are many details in it. It is endless fun to think about it carefully. The emotional aspects are also well written, unlike some novels where the emotional aspects are difficult to describe in one sentence. I would like to call Luo Yu the greatest capitalist😊
This book is really super, super, super, super, super good.
Overall, it's okay, although some people feel that there are flaws in the numbers of attributes and materials. But I personally feel that it's enough to read books that I can keep up with and enjoy, and don't worry about too many small details. This is a novel, not a textbook or historical record. If it is too serious, it will lose the fun of reading a novel😁😁😁
Based on my reading time, this book can be ranked first among the farming articles I have read. I hope the author will write more and more wonderful things [blowing kiss] I would like to ask for high-quality articles of the same type. This one is not enough.