A Mortal's Ascension to Immortality

It's a traditional fairy tale that really suits your taste. It's not a mindless upgrade, it's not a supporting character, it doesn't have a harem, there's no old lady criticizing the protagonist, the foreshadowing is excellent, and the descriptions of various aspects of life are also great. Immortals are also people who live beside the mountains, and they are people-oriented. No one calls them immortals, let alone those who are just cultivating immortals. The author has a very good grasp of the subject, and it is so lovable. This novel makes up for the common problem of male cultivators writing romantic dramas, but it does not make heroes feel short of breath. Although I am so poor on Double Eleven, I still give a reward. I hope the author can stick to it and stick to a single heroine. That charming body is the limit of what I can tolerate. I'm sorry.

In the past, when I saw Immortal Ni, I would transform into a mortal before transforming into a god. That sentiment was still very good. Looking forward to excellent articles. Don't fall into the cliche, don't write without thinking. Just like "This rain is born in the sky and dies on the earth, and the process in between is life." It is very philosophical and metaphorical. To cultivate immortality and Taoism is to cultivate the soul. If the author has time, he can read Taoist books on cultivating the soul to learn more. Taoist culture. The human body is just an air bag, the soul is immortal and can be reincarnated, but each person's soul lives in an impenetrable skin bag in every life. It's just that our Yuan Shen is usually in a sleeping state, and cultivating the Yuan Shen is also about establishing communication with the universe. Macro and micro are account-dependent and can be infinitely expanded and reduced. Historically, Qiu Chuji of the Quanzhen Sect was a successful example of a mortal cultivating immortality, as was Zhang Daoling, the founder of Taoism. I hope the author can study it carefully and think about it carefully. Integrated into the novel. The situation in the world will inevitably divide if it stays together for a long time, and it will unite if it stays divided for a long time. All forces are interdependent for their own benefit. What should not be thoughtless is the battle between good and evil between some big forces. Whether it is human beings or the world of immortals, there should be more gray situations. It doesn't matter what is right or wrong. The characters cannot be made into facial expressions. They should be more humane. I hope the author can work hard! After all, it's just a novel. I don't want to be too demanding, but it's best to keep improving. I am a person with a lot of spiritual connections. Just make some suggestions to adopt.

I've read almost 400 chapters. According to the current progress, if there is no second part, this one will need at least five to six million words to fill in all the pitfalls. The layout is a bit big and the writing is very good. When I read this novel, I felt like I read Zhu Xian more than ten years ago. Especially the emotional description is very delicate and the supporting characters are well-shaped. In addition, the foreshadowing laid by the author has basically been filled in. I hope it will not fall apart in the future. As long as it does not fall apart, it will definitely be a first-class work of Xianxia. In addition, I hope that the author will not let the plot of the novel collapse in order to speed up the pace. The current pace is quite good. Come on, come on

The Yingtian chapter is very exciting and brain-burning. Although the black can at the beginning is a bit nonsensical, the plot and writing are very good, the portrayal of human nature is in place, and the supporting characters are all flesh and blood and have emotions. It is a rare good article. Nothing can be compared with useless writing.

Another divine book after Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, the plots of Huoyun Momo and Ying Tianjie directly conferred gods. The author of this book is not only good at planning the layout, but also good at describing the little characters, avoiding facial makeup and making these little characters flesh and blood. In contrast to the previous fantasy Cultivation to Immortality stream, after reading the complete book, you only know what the protagonist is like and not what the supporting characters are like. Although the author drew on the plots of mortals' cultivation of immortality in the early stage, in the plots of Huoyun Momo and Yingtianjie, the author got rid of the influence of mortals and came out with his own style. Moreover, the author has really many twists and turns in the plot, avoiding a straightforward narrative that makes the plot twists and turns. The plot has many brain-burning foreshadowings, which made me often stay up late reading at four or five in the morning to catch up on the book. The author's writing style and plot handling far surpass that of San Shao, Tudou, Chen Dong, Wang Yu and other platinum masters. I believe that in a few years this book will definitely become another classic among mortals!! In addition, the author please update quickly at the rate of 100 chapters a day😡

Although it is somewhat like a mortal, the author's unique writing and narrative style and the storyline make people forget to return and are worth savoring. 1. The outline may have the meaning of paying tribute to mortals. Several large copies in the early stage are quite similar. 2. The character description and story background are wonderful, and the author's ability deserves recognition. 3. The author is also considered a master at filling in pitfalls. Personal suggestions can give readers some room for imagination. 4. The characters are very emotional and have many bright spots. This is a good review. Overall, it is a good book. The book is like a ladder that allows readers to reach the peak of imagination. The author did it. Thank you very much for the author's hard work. I hope that I can calm down, polish the plot, and carefully outline the outline, and give us readers a good book, a book worth remembering.

The author's writing is solid, and the male protagonist's path to advancement is particularly detailed and, well, a bit funny. The first hundred chapters are somewhat similar to the story of a mortal cultivating immortality, but the later stages are different. The male protagonist's character gradually becomes more harmonious and his will to cultivate Taoism becomes more stable.

The author is really thoughtful. Having just finished reading Yingtianjie, I am here to contribute my first book review. In the "Huo Yun Mo Mo" chapter, whether it is the portrayal of the characters' emotions or the ups and downs of the plot from multiple perspectives, the writing power and skill can be seen, which is fascinating. The grand composition of Yingtianjie and the intertwined thoughts of various characters, especially the discussion of hope, are thought-provoking. The only shortcoming is that the ending may be a bit sudden, but I didn't think about how to end it without being sudden hh. In addition, I would like to mention another point that most online articles are not well written at the beginning. The protagonist is too perfectly portrayed too early in the beginning, and the beauty does not take up the wealth, and he is cautious and clever. The result is that from the beginning of the story to the end of the story, the protagonist behaves in the same way, experiencing thousands of things but just like a passer-by, with no growth at all. The author of this article still has some shortcomings in this aspect, but he has seen some efforts.

I spent a week reading 1,300 pictures and am waiting for an update of 1,000 pictures. I personally feel that this picture of Ying Tianjie is the most exciting part of this novel. This novel describes the world of cultivating immortals with the word "profit" in everything. It feels very real. In reality, it is all for profit. No one is good to you for no reason except your family. Personal view of the male protagonist's character: Cautious, not holy, never forget his original intention, has brains, puts his own life first and interests second. Has a conscience but not much. The front part has a bit of a Mortal Cultivation to Immortality flavor, maybe the author is paying tribute. You can turn off the comments when reading because some comments will affect the mood of reading the book, and some comments are too murderous. 🤦

It's really exciting. It's been a long time since I've seen such an appetizing book about cultivating immortals. Nowadays, the books on cultivating immortals are either vulgar like Invincible pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, or they're elegant like Jian Lai. I've never seen the world and it's interesting to read vulgar things. I'll get bored after reading too much. Although elegant, I don't have any patience or literary skills to read it. If I don't go on, this book is somewhere between the refined and the vulgar. It has a bit of a taste for both the refined and the popular. At first, I just read this substitute version of A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality to satisfy my craving. As a result, I became more and more fascinated as I read it. I felt it was not inferior to A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality. I now watch it at two or three in the morning every night. . . . .