National Luck**********

So far, the writing is pretty good, but my personal suggestion is to try to reduce some of the so-called netizen comments, which are a bit dramatic. In addition, there is too little written, so the more explosive, the more explosive!

Come on, I hope there won't be a harem and someone as strong as Pain?

Good guy, I give it a five-star rating

Can the next template include Obito Six Paths or several navy generals or one-punch man without emotions 😂 Personally, I like to read it, but if you don't like it, don't comment 🙏🙏🙏

Big cheers for the author!

It's very good. This is the first national sports novel about Payne that I've seen. Most of the comments are that the plot kills the audience, and there are very few opportunities for the players to perform, so I think this distribution is not reasonable, but overall it is still very good. I am very optimistic about this novel and the author. Come on

Update quickly. When I wake up tomorrow morning, I want to see 100 unread chapters. It's not too much.

Is the protagonist curvy or straight?

The protagonist speaks Japanese and no one noticed! →_→

I feel pretty good so far, keep up the good work

The author should update it as soon as possible, otherwise you will be divided into eight sections by me

I want to know if there is one person behind... Or there will be Payne's team. How did you set up this author, the reincarnation eye, etc., Right?

It looks good, but is short and weak. Time 8

Five stars, must be five stars.

Very beautiful, come on💪

The author carried a bag of rice upstairs

Especially beautiful\(//∇//)\Cheer for the author(•͈ᴗ⁃͈)ᓂ- - -♡

It's already written like this. Listen to my advice. You can't grasp this book.

A bag of rice from Ouliwa has Ouma Eva to slim down, Waliwa Pain, Kamida🌚🌚🌚

The routine is different from other national games, and the jokes are well played, which adds fun and is not boring. The role of Payne is also good, at least the strength is good. The Japanese homophony in it is eye-catching, and it immediately makes me excited. I will always practice it. Also, can the author give me more sea dog pills to make it last longer? It is too short and not enough to watch😭😭😭😭

Awesome, it was only 8:01 yesterday and now it's nine minutes

Very interesting, come on author

Fuck, I just finished watching it after downloading it.

Awesome, awesome Heifer takes a plane - so awesome The heifer rings the doorbell—it's awesome Heifer rides on a rocket - awesome Heifer rushes into bull pile - awesome Heifer sitting on a chainsaw - huge cow Heifer goes to the Antarctic - so awesome

When will the other five channels be released?

It would be nice if there were more chapters

The friends who care about coming over this time should be better able to understand what surprises are brought for us and other ways to be able to see what they are going on!

Thanks, but author, you still need to come up with the Six Paths Mode, the Tomb of Reincarnation, and some more awesome moves, because Pain's upper limit is not particularly high, at most it reaches Super Shadow, and there are restrictions. Even if it is 100%, it is estimated that it will not reach the Emperor level. If you want to use the Reincarnation Sharingan, you can have these

It is suggested that Payne create other five paths in the forbidden area so that the six paths can gather together.

Awesome