Honghuang: I Built the Strongest Academy

Generally speaking, the protagonist's level is too low. He should be invincible in the academy. He can hide his cultivation level. The school has just started and let others know that Taiyi Jinxian's level is so low. There is no level. You are still challenged by others. This is really a shameless dean. You should be invincible from a distance. Others don't know your cultivation level, giving others the feeling of an invincible saint. The noodles are too low. It looks embarrassing

Why did he skip to Chapter 16 where he was a guest at Zhen Yuanzi Taoist Temple after being robbed and killed? The chapters are still a bit messy

[The novice gift package has been opened. Congratulations to the host for receiving the following rewards. ] [Congratulations to the host, you have obtained the Dharma and Body Dual Cultivation Technique, the Hongmeng Creation Technique. ] [Congratulations to the host, you have obtained the innate treasure, the dean's sword, the Heaven-cutting Sword. This sword is a killing treasure and can hurt saints. ] [Congratulations to the host, you have obtained an innate treasure, the Dean's Seal, which can be used to suppress the luck of the academy. ] [Congratulations to the host, you have obtained a ball of Hongmeng Chalcedony, which can be used to absorb and increase your cultivation. ] [Congratulations to the host, for obtaining the basic building of the academy, the Spiritual Root Garden, the Trial Tower, the Enlightenment Tower, the Divine Ability Hall, the Stairway to Heaven, the Mission Hall, and the Treasure Pavilion.]!!!! Six prompts sounded in his head. Ye Changge's expression also changed from anticipation to ecstasy. He didn't expect that. This novice gift pack is so awesome! It is indeed the ultimate novice gift pack, it's a dick!! If nothing else, these five rewards alone are considered luxurious.

The academy is so powerful that it has become a tool to improve your cultivation? And after accepting so many students, there is no movement? Also, he stipulated that Da Luo was the core disciple, but a few chapters later he actually recruited him as the Supreme Elder?

Bad review, open an academy, you don't accept disciples to fight, you can't even figure out the main plot of the novel, just write a

16 Zhang was still preaching, and 17 Zhang said that Hongyun helped you. And what the hell is Bai Zizai?

It makes no sense. I can't understand what it says. It's like a dog chewing. There are pieces here and there, completely disconnected.

The author's writing is pretty good, but the Qiankun Ding is not an innate treasure. It is not that precious. It is not needed in a fight. Daozu did not talk about recalling it, but gave it to Nuwa. I hope the author will understand it before writing.

The author has exactly the same name as him. He stopped updating for a few days for no reason and was extremely disappointed.

The first 16 chapters are okay, but after the 17th chapter, it's completely inconsistent and confusing. It's just writing whatever comes to mind, and the organization is not clear at all. If it is written like this, most people will abandon the book directly after seeing the 18th chapter.