I'm Not an Immortal

Ahhhh, I really like this type of novel, but I still think Shen Qing is suitable for a beauty with long hair and red robes in ancient times. Of course, some perverted scenes should be added ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

It's very beautiful. Jiang Qing's charm is really great. It also amazed me but made it difficult for me to let go. In the end, Jiang Qing was very sad when he committed suicide and his soul disappeared into various worlds😭. I think Jiang Qing shouldn't have this ending. He should be loved and loved by thousands of people. I will continue to walk with the company of the system, but I am too fond of him and a little cruel, so I respect his choice. He will always live in my heart, and he is not alone. I will always support you behind your back. I hope you will always be happy😀

In fact, it feels really regrettable, but I really like the character of the protagonist, not Bai Lian, Bai Qie Hei, I really like it, and the regret is real, I skipped some parts, although I was a little confused, but the ending and the extras, I feel uneasy

The protagonist who abuses is not a loved one at all. He is bullied and bears the malice of the whole world alone. There is no protagonist who retaliates against abuse at all. There is only a protagonist who has been hurt by people. I feel sorry for Jiang Qing [crying][crying][crying][crying]

There are no extras. The author knows how to let people imagine on their own. This is the highlight of the book. Each small world is very fast. You can think about the rest by yourself. Many places are not clearly written, but people like me who read it often can understand it at a glance. I think it is more suitable for old bookworms. Newbies may not like it, or they may not be able to understand it.

It looks so good. I don't feel anything at the front, but I feel bad at the back. I'm so fucked up. Although every world ends with a bit of confusion, life is like this. It ends suddenly and begins again. Poor Qingzi, I hope you will be happy in the next life and love yourself forever. Objectively speaking, there are many problems with this book, including the plot and forced torture. Inexplicably, it can only be rated 3.9 And 4.1 Fluctuates. But I finished reading it because I was attracted by the protagonist. The protagonist is forced to be miserable, but it is indeed attractive, but I still feel numb to the plot. I feel very sorry for the protagonist. Not only is every world miserable, but the ending is also not good. I feel that he has never lived the life he wanted from beginning to end and has been manipulated. Maybe he just wants to be an ordinary normal person. But there are indeed several worlds that are very interesting when watching it. . . [I'm sorry, I'm a pervert, I'm guilty] This book is amazing. Although I often skip it, I always remember to come back and taste it from time to time. The settings of several worlds are really novel and unique. This book is really contradictory and attractive. Damn, it's so damn good to read, but it's also quite boring. Oh, after thinking about it, damn, it's so good. I skipped these chapters, it's really good to read. [Pauses face] Damn, it's so miserable. This author is awesome. I have read her other vests, but to be honest, I don't recommend this one. I read emo for a day and felt very sad. The writing is very touching, that is, humans sometimes become interested and you will be very excited after reading it, but after reading it, you will feel very uncomfortable. The life of the reader is also life. Alas, the author is very cruel to his protagonist. I It's very uncomfortable, because I am a protagonist person, and I still hope that the protagonist will be well, but I not only like to read exciting stories but also like to read sad stories, so I will still read it, but I feel tired after reading it. This book is really uncomfortable for me to read. I can't say, the character of the protagonist is really touching, and she is really good at writing this kind of thing, but it is really uncomfortable and miserable after reading it.

It's super good-looking, as long as there is no cp in the whole book [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

This introduction is really attractive, and the content is also very interesting [Adoration], but I don't know if I'm too emotional. I feel so distressed, and I feel so depressed [crying] But it's really good to watch, and it's finished. It's so enjoyable to watch, I really can't miss it [Blow kiss]

The book is really good to read. I don't know why the rating is so low. I like A Qing's character. I like the character who always keeps his true heart. But in the end, A Qing's ending really makes me sad. A Qing has experienced many worlds and many people love him. But A Qing has always been sober and the type of world is different. There are so many categories, almost all of them. There are several worlds that made me cry. The ending is very disappointing, but after a while, I think this is okay. There are many characters in each world that are disappointing, especially the world with few chapters. But when I put into A Qing's perspective, I really feel that the love of those people is very abrupt. What I like is Aqing's sobriety and the interaction with the system. Although the ending of each world is very hasty, the ending of each world can be regarded as OE. I am a master controller and don't like who the protagonist stays for or gives his heart to. ✨In the end, I really like this book. It is highly recommended and of course I am very upset. I highly recommend reading it. I will always keep this book on my bookshelf. I also really want to find a replacement for this book but there is none. It is not as shocking and overwhelming as Aqing gave me. (Finally, I like Aqing to death) After reading the book, the biggest flaw of this book is that there are too many typos in the back of the book. If you read it, you need to read it many times to read it through, which affects your reading a bit. If you listen to the book, it is okay. Many of them can still be understood through homophones. I am the kind of person who listens and reads at the same time, so this feeling is not too big.

His writing should not stop at this score; Beyond those straightforward vulgar plots, And be able to touch the independent immortals in the misty clouds; Not only the protagonist, but also the soul that disappeared in the long river, In the immortality, the beauty that is so beautiful and breathtaking that it cannot be seen directly blooms.

Mom... It's so good. I'm currently watching the second dimension. The author is really good at describing emotions [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. It just feels like a dull dull pain. It's not the kind of violent abuse. It won't make me shed tears, but it will make me shake.

Wow wow wow, I really like novels with this kind of setting. I like it no matter which world it is in. I like Qingqing so much. The author's writing is really good. I can't put it down after reading it (//∇//)

It's really good to read. The subject matter may not be particularly novel, but the author's writing is very novel. I was captured in the second plane. I couldn't get over Wan Xu and the protagonist, but I think they should be like this, a cunning kitten and its conniving owner. I really love them so much. The protagonist is essentially an ordinary person, but he is not just an ordinary person. He has his calculations, his calmness, and his tasks. He completes them very well, really well. From the initial vigilance to the final loss of control, Wan Xu never thought that he would be so crazy because of Jiang Qing, but he surrendered everything he had step by step, and in the end, he just doted on this cat. Zundu is very good-looking, Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people ≥≤ The bickering with the system is also very cute.

It's really beautiful, and the subject matter is also very novel. Come on!

If the early stage was based on the setting of a heart-warming and exciting story, but seeing the knife emerge bit by bit in the middle stage, it turns out that Jiang Qing has been crazy for a long time. It is just his madness and his pain that the author did not describe in detail. Once he writes in detail, he can find that it is all despair. All Jiang Qing's pain was hidden in the joyful dialogue with the system. The funny the dialogue was, the more profound Jiang Qing's pain was. I read it in a skip, and read it intermittently for a long time and couldn't help but get to the ending, but the ending is a new reincarnation... I really like the narcissistic, sick and strong Jiang Qing created by the author, and I also like this rare article in Tomato that is difficult to resolve and has no CP. I hope the author can write such a special story. PS: To remind the readers behind me, this is a blunt-knife article. In the early stage, it is funny and heartwarming, but in the later stage, the blunt knife cuts flesh, which is regrettable and heart-wrenching.

It's a very good novel [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]. I started reading it a long time ago. Why was it taken off the shelves? [Crying][Crying][Crying]. Although I started reading it very early, I didn't finish it. Maybe I read it back halfway through. [Laughs] But it's really good. What's the ending like? , I don't know yet, but judging from other comments, it is quite sad [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I wish you baby Jiang Qing, and hope you can live a happier life in the future [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss]

The first one is not to evaluate, it is too simple. In the second world, Zhixi's love is too pure. Even if he knows that he will forget, he will do that to others before or in the future. It is an ideal love. There are too many delusions of love mixed in, "But this is all he can give." I was moved and also admired. Jiang's is too bland, like "Secret Love", but he's a little bolder. Jiang is the most miserable, Zhixi fell asleep first, and lived and died with the banished immortal, and he was alone here; he was also the winner, he was always the first choice to banish the immortal (but only because of the mission). He is indeed like an immortal, not for anyone, always rational, clearly knowing what he wants to do, what he should do, how he should be, and what he should think. ————My thoughts, for myself, for them... (The story never ends)

Reading this book, from 8·6 to 9.0, I am really happy. The plot is really novel. The protagonist uses his mind to say that the male protagonist is going to be free of CP. It is very refreshing to read. I really like this kind of protagonist who is beautiful alone, and I also like the author's great impression of the protagonist's appearance. I want to get CaⅡ for my Jiang Qing. This plot really made me cry to death. It was so good! Come on, author, I will always support you [love] [love] [love] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I also like the relationship between the protagonist and the system very much. They are the kind of mortal enemies. 1. I actually fought against them before [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I bet with my cup of milk tea that this novel has simply stayed in my heart. I like all the plot and background. Of course, except for the sadistic parts, I like the cool beauties the most, and they look very innocent. Especially when the contrast is cute, I can't wait to be loved immediately.

I've finished watching it. The Madam is so beautiful. Although the ending is a bit sad, I think it's the most suitable for Jiang Qing [crying][crying][crying]

This is a very good book. Maybe I didn't really understand it. I will be happy because of him, I will be happy and happy because of him. I don't understand the freedom he seeks. But I understand the freedom he pursues. He was tied up for a ridiculous reason. He left again for a ridiculous reason. I could read him, but I couldn't read him. It seems that I still like the original world where one person dominated the world of fighting and fighting. That seems to be when the book is happiest, even if it's in disguise.

I think this is a sadistic novel, and of course everyone's feelings are different. I think the emotions it expresses are long-lasting, gradually accumulated, depressing and dull, and sadistic enough to make people cry silently. Every aspect I have seen so far is be-y, but it is really beautiful. [Shy][smirking][shy] I feel like my baby is going to have a schizophrenia when I see it later [face covering]. Although I know that this article was reposted from another platform, the typos and repeated paragraphs and chapters are a bit too much and there is one chapter missing. Isn't it a bit too much? [Scroll] [scroll] [scroll] Overall, I think this book is relatively good. He prefers the non-CP type with fewer emotional lines.

Random thoughts from a young reader: This book is one of the first books I added to my bookshelf when I first came to it, but I didn't have the habit of reviewing books before. I've been watching it for a long time, and I didn't even think about commenting [face covering] Later, I forgot about it because I was addicted to some books. Now that I have some time, I'll give it a five-star hehe [shy] I was attracted by the setting in the first place. Although it seems a bit old now, it must have been considered novel at the time. I'm always a little embarrassed in some places, but I can't help but want to read on, so I replayed the first few worlds several times [shy] and then I basically passed it after reading it once. The writing style and comparison with the previous period are much better. I'm not sure if it has been blocked or taken down, I just hope it's always there [sending my heart] "Good people will also be treated gently by the world"🕊️💋

Jiang Jiang is really written on my heart. [Adoration] It's hard to imagine how beautiful it is. My wife has been chosen. Most of the story is good, but it's a little bit knife-y. However, Jiang Jiang is so beautiful. There are several settings in the world that really poked me. There are also deep meanings. It's not just about appearance. I give a five-star backhand [blowing kiss] to support the author greatly.

To be honest, I really felt a sense of suffocation and the oppression of the environment when I read it. I haven't seen the back yet, but I don't dare to read it anymore. It's the first time I come across this type of writing, which is a bit strange. Because the ones I read are usually big heroines or those written by Sanjiu. Without exception, their life and death are usually reversed, and there is no description in this book that magnifies human nature and is full of malice. But regarding the evaluation of this book, I would say: It is a good book, but it requires a lot of courage to read it, because it vividly displays human nature, which may cause disgust for some people, but exclude people who are bts themselves (cross out) Breaking out of a cocoon and becoming a butterfly is my evaluation of the protagonist of this book. I feel sorry for his experience, but this is an inevitable growth process.

This book is so wonderful, it immersed me in a world of fantasy, adventure, and romance. The author's imagination is like an endless treasure. Every chapter is full of surprises and suspense, which made me irresistibly want to keep reading. The characters in the book are lifelike, each has its own characteristics, and has its own dreams and pursuits. I seemed to have experienced all kinds of dangers with them and felt their joys, sorrows and joys. And those breathtaking scene descriptions made me feel like I was in a colorful dream, and I couldn't forget to leave. This book is not only a fascinating novel, but also a thought-provoking work. It made me think about many issues about friendship, love and life, and made me understand the importance of cherishing the present and facing the future bravely. Whenever I open this book, it feels like I have embarked on a wonderful spiritual journey, which gives me great pleasure and satisfaction in the process of reading.

It's nice to watch [Blowing Kiss], there are a lot of disagreements, it's fun to watch them argue with each other, but in the end, only System is left, and then he collects soul fragments and resurrects him. But with his temperament, he may leave System alone again, and the cycle repeats like this, and it may come to one day. Well, that's it; And each picture is written to the end, because the author has left that world and cannot observe the life of the people who stayed here, so giving the readers space for their own imagination is like suddenly getting up to watch the sunrise, not looking at the forecast, and setting off directly, but I didn't expect that the weather was not as good as I expected. I just did it as I wanted. Although it may not necessarily have results, it is the best. Well... Actually... I mean why there are no extra chapters (for each world). . . . . . Author, you really can write if you want to, but if you don't want to write extras, just don't [grievance]

It's a bit cruel, but the protagonist gives me the feeling that it is very complicated, complicated in various aspects. But I like this kind of protagonist very much. It makes me feel unpredictable. But everything in the small world makes me feel very distressed. No matter what it is, I feel very distressed for the protagonist. He is indifferent, he is heart-wrenching, he is gentle, and he is also scheming. I simply couldn't guess whether the protagonist was acting or his true character. In the book, it is very clear whether he is acting or not acting, but I feel that the true character he shows is not entirely true. I like Jiang Qing very much. He has such a charm that even outside of the book, I was a little impressed. But... I feel sorry for his ending. Maybe he doesn't think so. But... It's really, really sad...

How to say it? This book is really depressing, so depressing. It's the same as torturing the male protagonist. The male protagonist of every world does not die well. The writing is very good and the people in it are really perverted and perverted. Watching it made me feel extremely sad, and I really wanted to stop watching it, but I couldn't. Do you think he is particularly abusive? He doesn't seem to be particularly abusive. It just makes you feel uncomfortable but you don't want to give up. This book should be called Prisoner of Love because it is so uncomfortable. 😭😭😭😭

I haven't read much, only Chapter 85. After seeing this, I no longer want to watch it. The more I watch it, the more suffocated and depressing I feel. Later, I read the book reviews, and many people said they were sadistic, so I didn't want to read them anymore. I can't read sadistic books. It makes me cry when I read them, which is too easy to empathize with. I don't want to feel sad, and it's very uncomfortable when I feel sad, so I never read sadistic books. But the author's writing is really good. I have only read Chapter 85 and I can already feel that the plot is very tight. What's more, this is the first chapter. I believe that the author will definitely mention a lot and the article will definitely get better and better. The author's writing is very good, but as I said before, I don't read abuse stories, and I don't read all abuse stories equally, so I don't plan to read them again. But the author's writing is really good, so that's why I said so much. I hope the author's articles will become better and better