
Atone for Sin
弥罪
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- Completed
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- Mystery
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- Mystery & Supernatural
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- Male
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- 4y ago
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In booklists 17
Horror Novel, so Scary That I Can't Sleep at Night. Please Read It!
Thriller, mystery, something like the Ten Deadly Sins
A Crime-Solving Novel on Par with the Ten Deadly Sins
Various terrorist cases
Suspense Reasoning Ceiling
Bookworms are looking for books with interlocking suspense reasoning.
Are There Any Horror Novels Based on Real Events Like the Ten Deadly Sins?
Horror novel
A Suspenseful, Brain-Burning and Exciting (Suspense Reasoning) Novel!
There is only one truth. Come on, bring your high IQ and solve the puzzles together~
The Male Protagonist Is a Killer and the Police Solved the Case
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The Kind Where the Male Protagonist Is a Police Officer, a Criminal Police Officer, a Special Police Officer, a Drug Police Officer, Etc.
The plot is more novel, the age difference can be bigger, mature boys
Recently I Have Become Obsessed with Detectives and Solving Crimes. Are There Any Novels Like This?
A Simple Detective Novel About Solving Crimes, One Case After Another
Interpol, Anti-Narcotics, Military 1V1 Double Clean! Double Clean! Double Clean!
I want to read a book similar to "Hard Bones".
The Protagonist Designed the Crime, No One Survived, Manslaughter
There is a novel in which the protagonist travels to a time to reduce the crime rate, so he organizes a live broadcast of solving crimes. The protagonist wrote the script of Manslaughter, Mekong River Case, No Survivor, and participated in it. After the completion, there will be an explanation from the police station. What novel is it? I forgot.
The Beautiful and Miserable Male Protagonist Is Always the One Who Is Kidnapped and Unable to Resist! Ah! !
Murderous Violence, Dark Writing, Absolute Ruthlessness, No Elegance
Looking for a Book That Is Very Depressing and Makes People Breathless
If you want a book that is very depressing and despairing, please pray! ! !
No Female Protagonist, No Cp for Male Protagonist, Any Type Will Do
There is no male lead, no CP, no ambiguity and no harem. Don't change genders. Don't come with anything genderless. I want to be a pure man who is male from soul to body. Do not accept female-style novels without female protagonists. Don't have a vague heroine either. Report indiscriminately.
No Cp Male Protagonist Article! If You Vomit Blood, Faint, and Get Sick and Go to the Hospital, the Worse It Is, the Better! ! !
If you want to treat the weak type, the sicker you are, the better (I am a braid) hehehehehehe
I Want the Protagonist to Have a Dark Heart, a Pure Villain, a Pure Bad Guy, No Cp
Want to watch sequences like "I Created a Monster!" Book. Don't be timid in the early stage or in the previous life! Licking! ! It's best to be damaged from head to toe

















































































I thought the ending was good, but the result was just what I thought. I thought Guoguo would grow up, but she stayed in her childhood forever I thought Song Mi would stop, but he never looked back I thought Tang Shan would not die, but in the end he went to a place with light We all have to walk towards the end of the light, even though there is light there will be darkness Tang Shan, go and accompany your sisters. They are also waiting for you to run towards the light.
"A group of people were trapped in a barren mountain. They had no food or water, and could not contact the rescue team. They could only wait to die together in the wilderness. But there was one person in this group who was different. His backpack contained the food he needed to survive, but it was only enough to support him alone. A few days ago, everyone was in good condition, but after a few days, everyone went crazy with hunger and began to be on the verge of death. This person was thinking, should we share the food with everyone so that everyone can live together? Or would he eat the food in his bag and walk out of this dangerous area alone? Then, the group began a final struggle before death. They began to kill each other, shaking the man's idea of distributing the food. He had pretty good physical strength and escaped the attacks of these madmen. In the end, everyone except him died. " "He trembled and opened the other people's backpacks." Tang Shan said this with a sad expression. "He discovered that everyone actually had food in their backpacks. However, everyone was afraid that their companions would do something detrimental to them for the sake of food, so they didn't take it out." After Tang Shan finished speaking, he suddenly smiled and turned to look at Yu Duan, "Don't do it, you will starve to death holding food." After reading it, the ending is actually very good. Tang Shan has been crazy since his sister died. He did many bad things and killed many people, including innocent people. In the end, he was threatened and killed another person for Guoguo. Death is actually his best escape. Song Mi also planned revenge when his sister died. In more than ten years, he lost himself because of hatred and even attacked innocent people. When he met Tang Shan, he secretly targeted him. In the end, he used Tang Shan to avenge his sister and died at the hands of Qiao Yi. It's a pity that Guoguo died at the hands of Chen Qianbai. From her birth to her death, she was always in trouble. It was so pitiful. I hope that Guoguo will be born in a family that loves her in her next life. Tang Shan, Tangtang, Song Mi and his sister will all be well, and Qiao Yi doesn't need to worry about her future. Everyone can have a happy childhood and move towards a bright future.
This book is a magical book in Tomato, a true masterpiece, with detailed and appropriate descriptions. It can describe a person with outstanding characteristics in one chapter, and it can also make a person's image fully fleshed out in dozens of chapters. It's amazing, it's really amazing. The description of a man in 146 chapters is enough to make him a god. Two fragments, from the title , behavior, dialogue, every angle depicts a middle-aged working man who is poor but kind and simple. The only flaw is that the routine is still the routine of conventional novels of the same type. It is mainly based on backward reasoning, but the flaws are not concealed. The writing power of this author is stronger than that of all original Tomato authors.
If Tangtang could be noticed by the driver, and if those little boys did not have the idea of pushing Captain Song's sister down, then the Songxi City Public Security Bureau would have one more sunny policeman and one more captain who upholds justice and solves strange cases. But without if, the seeds of evil germinate and everything is destined.
It's been a long time since I've read such an excellent book, and I was mentally prepared for the ending. In fact, I quite hoped for another ending, but maybe this ending is the best. My cultural level is not high and my language is very feeble. I can only say that it is a good book. If you are interested, you can read it yourself. You will not be disappointed. Selfishly, I hope to see an extra story from the perspective of other characters, and want to know who was responsible for the case later, and the subsequent stories of other characters, but the two words that have been completed are really impossible (sad). I hope the author can publish a new book, and I really look forward to the author writing better works (by the way, it would be great if there is a physical copy of this book, which can be collected) Second edit There may be spoilers this time, please read with caution as this is based on your understanding of the topic. After thinking about it carefully, atoning for one's sins and making up for one's own sins may also have another meaning, the sins Song Mi committed. Edited three times The ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong stamina is so strong that I can't sleep over and over again. I really hope that he just had a nightmare and nothing happened when he woke up. Please forgive my fantasy and selfishness. I want him and them to live well. Everything around him is not arranged and happy. Why should I let him go through this? It's so cruel and painful. Wuwu, or filming scenes, they are all fine and everyone is fine. Wuwu, please forgive me for being sick in the middle of the night, but I can't help breaking my guard when I think of walking towards the light. Really. . . . . . Four edits Ah Shan, fortunately we didn't get the certificate. If we did, I would have delayed you forever [laugh][laugh][laugh] Goodbye, Ashan [laugh][laugh][laugh] 🚕💨🚕💨🚕💨🚕💨🚕💨🚕💨🏃🏃🏃 Will we see you again, Ashan? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] You want to be happy when we see each other again, okay? 😭😭😭😭😭 Ah Shan, you have to be happy, you have to be happy, okay? Happy, happy! It doesn't matter if you don't have me in your world from now on, you want to be happy on your own, Ah Shan! Ashan! Ah Shan, how can I live without you, Ah Shan! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Ah Shan, please take me away, Ah Shan! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Ahhhhhh! ! !
The plot has ups and downs and is interlocking. Although I still like the male protagonist very much. The character creation is also very good and full of flesh and blood. I read other book reviews and learned about the ending of the protagonist. I feel very sad, but this is the best ending for him. I hope he can be safe and happy in the next life. Even if his life is dull, at least he will be happy. I didn't pay much attention to this book when I first saw it, but luckily my curiosity got the better of me, otherwise I would have missed a good book. Big cheers for the author! Looking forward to your other books I usually don't write book reviews, I can only make comments in the article, but this book is really beautiful, the content is exciting, and there are constant twists and turns. As a result, I really didn't expect that Chen Yiqing would pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger! ! ! It's a pity that Tang Shan is always an insider. Although Song Mi is dead, there are still Chen Qianbai, Chen Yiqing and Qiao Yi. . . Perhaps as another book friend said, Chen Yiqing is probably the next Chen Qianbai, but maybe even more poisonous than Chen Qianbai And Qiao Yi may become the next Tang Shan, but I just hope that he will walk towards the light The most regrettable thing is Tangtang, Guoguo, Uncle, and Huai Youyou. They were obviously innocent but they still left this world forever, and Uncle also had his eyes gouged out. Where did it all come from? It's the child's ignorance ten years ago, the adults' cover-up, the investigators' failure to get to the bottom of the case, and Song Mi's crazy and twisted revenge driven by hatred and paranoia. Even if it is for revenge, you cannot harm innocent people, just like Tang Shan killed Xiaobei to avenge his sister, and Song Mi killed Lu Qing for revenge. Don't say anything like "Don't persuade others to be good without others' suffering". If it's wrong, it's wrong. This is the fact. No matter how much you say, it can't change the fact. "Facts speak louder than words"! No matter how much I like the character Tang Shan, I really don't agree with some of his actions. I don't think he should have killed Xiao Bei. As for Song Mi, I think he is a paranoid madman who is cunning, cunning, good at disguise, and vicious in his methods. I liked this character in the early stage, but I really didn't like him in the later stage because he was already blinded by hatred. I think he only lived for revenge, and it is reasonable for him to die in the end. After all, he got his revenge, so he should have no spiritual support to live on. Hmm. . . That's it, you can figure out the rest of the characters yourself. (The above are purely personal thoughts and have nothing to do with others. Please don't criticize me. My parents are still alive at home, so I'll save my life🐶)
It can be seen that the author has profound knowledge, meticulous language logic, and detailed characterization. Linked together, it is a very good mystery novel. Even that Xu Lian is so amazing. The writing is very realistic and has many touching points. Will it be written later that there is a mole in the top brass of the police station? The protagonist's father was also wrongly accused? After all, the traces are obvious.
Very good, very good. This book is really good. All the characters have online IQs. The plot is complicated and confusing. Everyone has a different identity and a different side. The author did not deliberately lower the IQ of the female characters. Every named female character who appears has flesh and blood. The one who is not suspected is the real bad guy, and the one who is suspected sees him as the light. There is a devil living in everyone's heart. He grew up in darkness but still longed for the light♡ good book
The sad thing about this book is that Yao Xu died. A very good person met a very unfortunate person. Maybe it was fate. Like Captain Ling said, when he thought he could be with the person he liked, it was his last bit of happiness [crying] Tang Shan is indeed not a kind person. When he saw him killing Mr. Chang, he did it quickly and accurately! Even though he handled it very calmly, I thought he was very scary! But I still like this protagonist very much, because he didn't do this on purpose. He just chose a way to live a better life when his life was threatened. Living in darkness but with a bright heart, Guoguo and Tangtang are Tang Shan's only tenderness [shy]
After reading it, I felt a little depressed, but also a little relieved that Tang Shan had finally reached the end of the world... I think this book is really good, with high logic of thinking, strong criminal psychology, and everyone's background, characteristics, and personality. They are all really good. When I read the title of the book at first, I thought it was Tang Shan going to make up for his mistakes. After reading it, I realized that it was Song Mi's sin... The ending is very depressing, but also somewhat relieved. It can be said that if it were not for the title, this book would be absolutely god-level in criminal investigation. Alas, it is a pity, but if there is no title, then the story has no soul. After all, a title that reflects the character is really touching... Finally... Don't do it, people who starve to death holding food... Tang Shan, I want you to be happy.
I like this story. The author is not just teasing human nature from above, leaving behind a cynical and self-satisfied work in the end. In this small world, you can see the entanglements of various people and the horrific past behind them. Who is good and who is evil is difficult to sort out in their various behaviors. This is a shocking story, and it also brings us profound thoughts: Don't be that person who dies miserably in the desert holding food. It's a pity that some things may have been doomed. But it's nice to have sunshine.
I originally thought it was just an ordinary crime novel. I accidentally saw a comment about the following content while reading. I was very curious about what happened next. But after reading it, I was really confused and couldn't let it go for a long time. Especially for Tang Shan, I felt it was a pity. He chose to reintegrate into the world and discovered the warmth around him. If he were a piece of ice, he was slowly melting. But in the end, the people around him chipped him with an iron cone, and even the protective thing in the center of his ice was destroyed.
Jumping to watch. Does the sentence at the end of the book, "Don't be the person who starves to death with food" mean, don't think everyone is bad? Since everyone has food, and the first person shares a little food, maybe the next person will share the food, and everyone will tide over the difficulties together; if only this person shares the food, and other people attack, this is not necessary; if like this story, everyone thinks that only they have food, and others will come to take away the food, so they will kill each other. I saw the first half of this life-and-death story at the beginning, and thought that if this continues, I will have dark thoughts (laughs). If you look back at the ending with the ending determined, it feels like you are promoting the theory of human nature. It also tells people not to think too much, and you are not afraid of slanting shadows. But if you really encounter a desperate situation, you have to rely on your own qualities to survive. It is indeed a good book that I never tire of reading hundreds of times. It is a different experience from romance novels.
Very exciting, the characterization is excellent. But I think Song Mi's transformation is too fast and the connection is not enough, although the previous logic is reasonable. The most important thing is that I saw my shadow in Tang Shan and Song Mi. This is also the reason why I can get high scores in Touch. Tang Shan got his light, but I had no way to end myself.
The storyline is great! If I could revise the text, make the connection between the protagonist's character and character more natural, and pay more attention to some details, I would give this book nine points! In the early stage, Tang Shan was afraid of trouble and only entered the police station in order to erase his connection with the case. However, there was no change later and he became dedicated and helpful. The description said that he was the same subordinate as Chen Qianbai. Some people noticed, were afraid, and were shocked, while others didn't show any signs of it. Zhou Xiao and Zhou Shuan, father and son, were plotted against each other. After being submissive for the first time, they suddenly quarreled over the restaurant for the second time and were no longer afraid of anything? The evidence was still in Tang Shan's hands, so he didn't care about it. In the early stage, Team Song was very protective, risking his life to protect, but the sudden change later was really shocking. Maybe it can be more delicate, entangled with love and hate, or develop a relationship. Also, I really can't understand why Tang Shan must be used as the murder knife. With his ability, he can easily solve what he wants to do by faking an accident or hooking up with any criminal. What's more pity is that Chen Yiqing knew that he might turn bad, and even guessed that he was a villain. Unexpectedly, he actually hooked up with his brother, thinking that he would be neutral, and even helped him because Tang Shan helped him gain a foothold. Su Zhi still wanted to complain. The feelings came too quickly and were inexplicable. Then he was very scheming at the beginning, and arranged to help the promoters at the end. At the end, he was a bit silly and became real. Jian Chengcheng is a little bit in love, she dares to love and hate, and she is also very helpful. I quite like this pairing of Tao Ranran, and it's quite cliché, but while Tao has a good personality, his descriptions conflict with each other in many places. He feels guilty and scared right after the incident. I can't help but think about Xiu Xiu Wen. I haven't stopped reading. I basically like it and support the author. I also want to know the story of Ling Tiansheng's unlucky partner!
I read this work all night and shed tears in bed. Tang Shan's experience in the first half of his life was hard enough. He thought he would have a good ending after going through a series of things, but he didn't expect that he would eventually fall into a trap step by step. BE, good intentions are hard to escape. I am honored to read this work and look forward to your new work.
First of all, out of politeness, I apologize to some of the people I have spoiled for you. Secondly, I insist on my point of view: book reviews should be closely related to the book, which is a general sublimation and emotional concentration of the book's content. Maybe this is really wrong and offensive in your eyes, so I say to you: sorry But I'm sorry, this sentence may be sincere, but it is more out of politeness (although it is not polite to express false feelings) Then, what follows is my previous book review, which contains "[Spoilers]", so please avoid it. Finally, I like this book And, I hate everyone ———————————— —————————— ————————————— ——————————— ————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————— 11:06 PM 86 A Book review details… Yu Di 2022-11-22 ★★★★★ Reviewed after 19 hours of reading The devil policeman should be the most terrifying creature. "Apologise" means to make amends, not to make up for the sin, but to make amends. The biggest sins are Song Mi, Tang Shan, Chen Yiqing, Chen Qianbai... It is greed, obsession and ignorance. Under the bright sunshine there may be darkness everywhere, and there is also warmth in the dim basement. Song Mi should be the representative of absolute justice, but Song Mi can turn into a devil for his obsession. Young Chen Yiqing could also be one of the masterminds behind the scenes. A simple child will kill the sister upstairs out of ignorance. Sin seems to be always around us. But redemption is always there. Qiao Yi rekindled hope and gave up jumping off the building, got rid of his mother and turned to crime, and even found true love and returned to Qiu...★★★★★Review after 20 hours of reading The ending seems to be good. Song Mi borrowed a knife to kill someone and avenged his sister. Tang Shan also did it and sent Song Mi to hell. Tao Yuanyuan and Qi Hui will find happiness, Ling Tiansheng might return Tang Shan's blood and innocence. Chen Yubai may be sanctioned. Chen Yiqing will also continue to inherit the family business, Qiao Yi may still follow Tang Shan's old path, heading towards the light in his heart like him, The rescued Lu Qing may grow up healthily under Su Zhi's care, but Guoguo, Yao Xu, Li Changxuan, Song Mi, Tang Shan... None of them can come back... To make amends Yiyu Xuankuang Leave a comment.
Fascinating, all villains. Everyone has two sides and a devil inside. One link after another, from listening to reading, I can't stop. The online novel is very long, but it can basically echo the whole story. Some people did not explain clearly that when the girl fell down on the 15th floor, was it Tang Shan who damaged the railing? Where did the girl Xu Nian go? Why is the boy Xu Nian so powerful? Three girls like Tang, and the last one, Jian Chengcheng, is the most courageous and powerful. Tang has a kind of morbid beauty. The author writes about Tang Shan's experience in the last year of his life. I originally thought that I would hide the crime of killing Xiaobei and start a new life. When I met Song, I thought I had found an idol, but I didn't expect to be designed and used, and step by step towards the abyss. Finally he has awakened and died towards the light. Literary and artistic works originate from life and are higher than life. Don't underestimate the ugliness of human nature. Although the description of the work is absurd, it has internal logic. Live towards death It's hard to calm down. Human beings can never stop killing each other and repaying injustice. Only a person in darkness would be so eager for light.
It's my first time writing a book review, so I'm really nervous. All in all, it's a very interesting book. If you haven't read this book yet, don't read my review yet (who will read your review?) And read it directly because there are spoilers. Of course, if you have only read half of the book and want to read a book review, Tang and Song Dynasties are the best! Below are some of my feelings and comments after reading the entire book. Overall, I feel very good about this book. The logic is very organized. However, the expression in some places is not very clear, and there are one or two sentences that are not very smooth. However, the readability is still very high. I recommend everyone to read it ( ) Finally, I am still a little curious about the, uh, ending or follow-up of some of the remaining people in the book (of course, it may be revealed secretly, but I am just blind and didn't see it. Although I already knew from Tang Shanduo's part that Tang Shan will definitely die in the end, I was really super sad when I saw the ending. I cried for two hours. I hope there will be some side story or an if line in a parallel world for me to see (? You) At present, I am preparing to follow up the author's next book. I hope the author can continue to work hard and don't kill me (this sentence can be ignored) In the end, Tang Shanzhen's intentions were hard to reconcile.
After reading this book, I really like this book. The author is very thoughtful, and maybe this ending is the best. I hope that Guoguo will be a normal child in her next life, with parents who love her, and will be safe and sound in the future. I also hope that Tang Shan will not be burdened with these things in his next life, and will find a girl who loves him to spend this life.
True and false, false and true, good guys are bad guys and bad guys are good guys. It's exciting and good. It's just a pity that there are no extras. But don't be hasty. Regrets are the reality. I'm just curious about what happened to the people who escaped. Su Zhi still had some feelings for the protagonist and finally escaped. There is no follow-up, and there are so many people that the protagonist has helped. At the end, should there be a group portrait? Where there is light, there is darkness, so they will not come back. This is reasonable, but should there be a side story? I think it will be more perfect. There are also doctors Ling and Yun. After Ling discovers the truth, can he be vindicated after the end? It's not about vindication. After all, there is no real evidence to prove that Mi did it, but it is not what Tang Shan wants to do. At least he can vindicate Tang Shan's motives. As for Tang Shan's motives, Doctor Yun feels like it's nothing, but after all, not many people survive, and Doctor Yun is the only pure good person in the group with the most scenes, and the only one who survives. As for the group portrait, it shouldn't be difficult to write, it's just an understanding of Tang Shan, such as what kind of person he is. , And I still feel a bit regretful that there is no reciprocal revenge for Chen Qianbai. Chen Yiqing is okay, after all, there is no real actual intention to harm him, but Chen Qianbai is the real shooter, but such a little revenge feels completely unequal. Of course, killing him is impossible. But you can write Ling to pursue it, but it is unrealistic if the clues are broken, but it is more realistic to write it this way. After all, Chen Qianbai is so powerful that killing him is not realistic. It is just a little regrettable. From the beginning to the end, he still did not kill him, and he also let one of his own people die.
It's really good to watch and the ending is so disappointing [I'm about to cry] It would be better if there was a side story to explain the follow-up of other people•́‸ก
Really, I cried to death after reading this book. I was scared and sad after reading it. I was sad because of Guoguo and speechless because of Song Mi [crying] In the end, I actually hope that the protagonist can live. What a pity [crying] [crying] [crying]
What a surprise, the whole book is dark. . The writing is excellent, but very sad. It is a rare good book in recent years.
It's very good-looking. The protagonist is not a good guy in the traditional sense, but everything he does is what he has to do. A lack of words cannot describe the character and actions of the protagonists, including everyone in this book. After reading this book, it will make us think about human nature. You cannot judge whether what the protagonist, including others, does is good or bad. Different positions and different roles lead to different things! Even though Song Mi wears the sacred professional cloak of a police officer, he will violate the spirit of being a police officer, release his inner demons, and avenge his sister, even if he does not hesitate to use the protagonist or cooperate with criminals to kill the police! But he died in the end! This may be the ending that it should have, so you better read this book, it's very beautiful.
The reading experience of the full text is very good. It uses the tragic experience of the protagonist as the background and the interweaving of the two sisters Tangtang and Guoguo as the guide. It gives the protagonist a lot of warmth in the text. It is also the key and highlight of the entire article. However, the sad ending makes the reader feel uneasy... Overall, it is good and worth reading.
If you like detective crime, you can put it on your bookshelf! It took more than 2 hours to read. The writing is very good. The most important thing is that the intelligence of the corresponding supporting characters is all online. Pig's feet are not superhuman. I have some questions in my mind. I will give you a high score first and continue reading! ! ! After reading it... They are all dead. It is a sunny day. His most important people are waiting for him in the light! ! ! Publish it! It's really good!
‼ ️"Make amends for sins" is Song Mi's sin. His revenge was not pure. He destroyed some beautiful things and did not kill the enemy with his own hands, but he killed the guilty little boy. ❗️Tang Shan's only evil was to kill an innocent boy. The others he killed were all heinous people, and he finally came to the end of the world. 🔺Yao Xu, Li Changxuan, and Lu Cheng are guilty, but they also have a bright future. ❓1. Was Chen Qianbai arrested? 2. Qi Hui's ending 3. Chen Yiqing's follow-up 4. Xu Xi (female) has not been found yet 5. Why is Xu Xi so well-informed? 6. How did the deputy director know that Song Mi was guilty? 🔺If Tang Shan had not exposed Chen Qianbai, would Song Mi still seek cooperation with Chen Qianbai? I hope the author will have extra stories to fill in the hidden lines Wish him and them all the best
I've read Chapter 190 so far, it's very interesting [cool] Finished reading. In fact, when I saw it at the end, I suddenly realized that the title of the book actually revealed the final murderer. Tang Shan and Song Mi are both people who are too obsessed with love. I really like that uncle, and the other women are all well portrayed, but Tang Shan's feelings for Su are a bit abrupt. It's still a very good novel. I hope the author can write more exciting mystery novels [laughs]
Very nice! The plot is pretty good. It's just that the back part is more abusive and it's quite uncomfortable to watch. Alas, in the end it felt like he really had nothing and nothing to worry about. Maybe this ending was a kind of relief.