There's Something Wrong with This Monster in Journey to the West

The part about the battle between Che Chi and the Kingdom of China is the most enjoyable part among all the more than a dozen Journey to the West novels I have read. However, there are some places where the author could have looked up more relevant information, and some places are quite different from the orthodox story.

It should be the most exciting of the Journey to the West fanfics I have read. Although the male protagonist has two wives, there are almost no emotional scenes throughout the whole process. He has been continuously separated in two places after being married for more than 200 years. Although he is a bit nosy and extremely partial, it is not out of the ordinary and makes people feel that it should be like this. The author is great,＾0＾~

Don't know what? I like it when I criticize Buddha!

Very good book, different from ordinary monkey blowing

If fellow Taoists don't care about those detailed settings, you can still read this book. This book is more martial arts-oriented. The protagonist's upgrade is slow in the early stage and too fast in the later stage. This book is quite good. In the early stage, I was submissive and was always being plotted as a pawn. I cleverly avoided the fatal game in Hidden Mist Mountain. Then I entered the Tang Dynasty and got deeper involved with the underworld. I think these two parts are the best. After provoking heaven and entering the Buddhist kingdom, it started to collapse. A big part of what makes this book interesting is that it is different from other prehistoric novels. Most of them cheat invincibly or remain silent all the way. The most direct one is the chapters on Hidden Mist Mountain. Another point is that in the emotional drama of this book, the two heroines are like soy sauce.

After three days, I finally finished reading it. It's worth five stars just because it keeps me motivated to watch. The foreshadowing laid out in the early stage and so on are all revealed in the follow-up, and the outline is also good. I saw a different perspective on Journey to the West. The later stage was too hasty and there was no patience and carefulness in the early stage. The ending was too fast which was not good. Overall, it's a good Journey to the West novel that I've read that I'm quite satisfied with.

This book still has some information, the author's skills are also good, and it is not a novice... The various logics are good, and the key worldview is clear... At the end, Hongjun didn't win, and it felt like it ended hastily. Postscript Time has returned to modern times. It would be nice if we could clearly compare the real world with the prehistoric world before the restart. The last sentence is any book that keeps me staying up late reading is good. And the most important thing is not to add a sentence: "The prince and the princess lived a happy life from then on."

After reading it for a few days, I finally finished it. If you haven't finished it, please don't comment. The first half of the book mainly talks about the protagonist and Journey to the West, that is, the grievances between the protagonist and Buddhism. After Journey to the West, the protagonist grows up and becomes a chess piece of Western religion (Buddhism is a chess piece of Western religion), the underworld, the sea of ​​blood and Hongjun. Under the calculations of all parties, the protagonist's luck and jade card is finally revealed. The story of this book is like a mist being lifted layer by layer. In summary, this is a good book.

Fine. At first I thought it was a no-brainer, but after looking at it I realized it was a traditional fairy tale.

They are: Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, transforming gods, anti-empty, earthly immortal, heavenly immortal, true immortal, golden immortal, Daluo Jinxian, Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian.

The concept is clever, the plot is ups and downs, and the writing is calm. The humor contains Taoism and Buddhism, and it also incorporates the philosophy and wisdom of life. It is really a rare masterpiece. I look forward to more masterpieces from heroes! ! ! 👍👍👍

Generally speaking, the male protagonist was being used throughout the whole process, and he finally became a quasi-sage in the later stage, so everyone came out, and Hongjun's clone also came, and asked the male protagonist to hand over his luck. He took it out twice. Later, Hongjun was almost destroyed, so Ren Houtu came out to resist again, and the male protagonist ate it. Luck, it was because Hongjun wanted to be unfavorable to his wife that he ate it. Later, everyone was gone. The male protagonist's original soul was divided into two and saved part of the two states. After a few hundred years, he woke up and took Nie Xiaoqian away, and then returned to the Saint to find the other two wives. Telling the truth later is normal

It's okay, but the character of the protagonist is a bit broken, and he is stubborn. Every time he is very arrogant, he will withdraw from the tiger's skin and raise the flag at every turn. The author is too flattering. He belittles the people of the Buddhist team and Sun Wukong all the way, and the barrage is a lot of rubbish. I agree, after all, the original work is indeed dark, but when I saw the Shituoling section, I couldn't help it. The protagonist actually admired the demon here, hahahaha, what's the comparison? Why don't you write it according to the original work? The author himself even wrote it out, saying that Shituoling is not as scary as what is written in the book. . .

Before the end of Journey to the West, this part was quite interesting. It can be seen that the author carefully prepared relevant information and created it based on ancient myths. Later, the plot gradually became cliché and began to apply the prehistoric system. There were many details that overturned the early settings. The details of the story were mentioned in one stroke, making it difficult to relate to the characters who appeared. Resonance, the rhythm begins to speed up, and the plot gradually becomes boring. I thought it was a masterpiece. After the end of Journey to the West, the overall score may not be worth four stars, but this period of Journey to the West is still quite interesting. If the stories of the characters can be written to resonate more with readers, instead of simply telling stories, this must be a masterpiece.

This book attracted me because of the plot of the little leopard's obscene development along the journey to the West. The goblins on the Journey to the West also have the author's own opinions. After the decisive battle in Hidden Mist Mountain, the Empress of the Tang Dynasty ascends the throne, Agarwood saves her mother, the trip to the underworld (A Ghost in the Rain), returns to West Buddha, enters the Three Thousand Worlds, and enters the Half Saint. These plots are all relatively OK. I think entering the Half Saint is faster. It should be the author's intention to speed up the plot. The back part didn't look as good as the front part, so I took a quick look at it. At the end, the author explained from the perspective of the author why there would be no more saints in the future. The final plot echoed the previous foreshadowing. From the author's timeline of the Tang, Song and Ming dynasties, I thought the author would write to the present at the end. The saints have passed, the gods have also passed, and in the end you and I are all mortals.

The content is very exciting. He grew up from a leopard spirit in Nanshan to a quasi-sage in time, and then sacrificed himself to protect two continents after the world restarted. The little man Da Xinde. It is also one of the few novels that I have read to the end without ending, which is great.

The book is good, the early part is okay, but the middle part is dull and digs a lot of holes. The plot in the later chapters fills the holes. If the author hadn't filled in some of the holes, I would have almost forgotten that there was such a hole. The protagonist doesn't change much, but it doesn't change a lot. The protagonist has a thief heart but not a thief courage. Many people could have accepted the result but missed it. Overall, it is a good novel that can be used as a good source of food. Just like life, it is dull most of the time, but there are also small climaxes. See you in the next book👋🏻

It's not bad. It has an outline and several different plots are connected together. It feels reasonable. It should be considered a good article in terms of content. There are also some funny plots. The protagonist basically has a bit of intelligence. Overall, it is quite comfortable to read.

There will be no more thunderbolts and leopards after the Hidden Mist Mountain

It's super exciting, but I feel like it ends too quickly later on. For example, in the Luck Cage, he cultivated too quickly. One page lasted more than a hundred years. There was also a jump from the Tang Dynasty to the Southern Song Dynasty. Generally speaking, it would be better if he cultivated at a slower pace. [Praise]

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I think it's more appropriate to call the protagonist's luck a disaster. After all, there is no Qi Luck Dao, which is just the people involved in the robbery on the journey to the west. Luck doesn't stop there. In addition, it is necessary to abandon the lack of qi-gazing technique to see that it is actually somewhat uncomfortable.

The organization is clear, the thinking is clear, the boundaries are clear, the pits are filled, the ups and downs of the plot are very attractive, the ending is a bit hasty, it should be a data problem, it is super good-looking, I hope not to be forgotten by Tomato

Don't have a harem. Don't have a harem. Eunuch, eunuch, what is that in the back? The front of Hidden Mist Mountain is still better looking, but comparing the back to the front, it looks like someone has been replaced.

Okay, finished reading. There's just something wrong with the chapter display. It's showing 20% ​​here. I thought I couldn't move after writing so much. It turns out that the finale is almost here, and I can write it well, with the halo of being a semi-protagonist.

I think it's OK. Basically all the pitfalls have been filled in. Is there any unfinished content? Because it's not winter or summer vacation, the time is a bit long. Well, I don't have any particularly deep insights. The time in between is relatively long. Now I have almost forgotten the previous plot. Well, anyway, it's hard for me to read long books now, and I read them all in one go. Basically all I have read are systems. Well, it feels good without a system. Well, the one in the middle is a bit unreasonable, so I'll give it four stars!

Not bad! The previous journey to the west was very interesting! The sense of immersion is very good! The next part of the Three Thousand Worlds should be played more and the timeline should be sorted out! There are a lot less struggles after becoming a quasi-sage! However, I think the transition from the final ending to the modern era of lawlessness is very reasonable! There are very few prehistoric texts that explain the situation of the end of Dharma and the reasons for the collapse of the four continents! Fine! [Like][Like][Like]

The novel is very good and borrows shells from several myths and legends, but it is not boring to read. Although the male protagonist is a bit like Zhang Wuji, all calculations are in vain in the face of absolute strength. The author was able to justify the final ending, which is considered perfect. Overall it's pretty good! It is also considered a masterpiece among tomatoes.

This is a rare good book, which writes something new about the well-known myths. But the author, have you forgotten that you left behind a Taoist priest named Li in a small county?

Good-looking (two simple words contain countless meanings, vividly expressing the beauty and brilliance of this book, and at the same time expressing my own lack of words,)