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I hope it can be updated faster. The more chapters there are, the more people will read it. I also hope that the protagonist will be more powerful in the hearts of other survivors. For example, when he gets something, the whole area will be notified and something will be opened. Generally speaking, the author's writing is also very good. Come on😊

Good-looking but no one series It feels like there are fewer and fewer people

It's not impossible to have a female protagonist, but it's best to have contact with her in the later stages, but don't have sex. Wait until the end is almost over before having sex.

Compared with those who are all invincible and seem to enjoy life, this book is still close to my imagination. There are some beautiful sides of human nature, and some evil sides of human nature. It is that your foreshadowing or the possible future time you want to reveal to the readers is too direct. There should be a certain amount of suspense and give the readers some room for imagination. Only when you read it can you know, oh, this is what happened, and it will be possible to give people a bright feeling. There are not too many vulgar incidental language, etc., And there is not much reliance on these to attract attention. After all, this thing is inevitable and understandable. Moreover, the journey of the book is like an exploration game. After exploring this place, you start to the next place, one by one, which still has a sense of sequence. I have read about one-third of the book so far. If some places can have some interaction with previous places or events, or interactive foreshadowing caused by a small incident, I can have a better reading experience. I myself have been a bookworm for more than ten years. Although I am also a layman, I may not have a very good vision. This is from my perspective, looking at some shortcomings and some advantages so far. I still think this book is pretty good here. I think it would be a lot better if we could stir up the reader's heart a little more or stimulate the reader's own imagination, instead of telling the reader what the ending will be like in a simple and clear sentence, leaving suspense. I hope the author will be inspired by my comments.

The thing about "Ying" is that she is so lucky. She is a girl and she usually doesn't go too far. Is it possible that there is a bug in this survival game? Hundreds of treasure chests in one area? A few more questions, is she the heroine? Do you have a good relationship with the protagonist after that? Will you meet the protagonist in real life? Will there be frequent transactions in the future?

It's pretty good. I like this one better than other apocalyptic novels. Please update it quickly, author!

It brought out the greedy thing in me, and it's gone! ! ! ! I want to kidnap the author and make him type the code for me every day.

I finished reading this book at 8:01 on June 1, 2023. How should I put it? At first, I came for the genre of national survival. After reading it, I found that this book does not belong to this genre. Overall, the world view structure of this book is good. With the search for the "Light of Creation" as the main line, the protagonist fights monsters and upgrades, searches for treasures, makes friends, and fights against the gods. It was not until the end that I discovered that the Lantern of Creation that the protagonist is pursuing is actually the courage and hope of mankind when facing the unknown future! Points deducted: The author's control over the details is not good enough. There are cases where the protagonist does not know certain information when the results are known before and later mentions it, and it is not the kind of pretending not to know. At the same time, there are inconsistencies and settings in the text.

The author writes very interestingly. I think the author is also a person with an interesting soul in real life. Uh-huh, but I always feel that the author is a newcomer. Give it a five-star rating. Life is not easy, come on! Next I will talk about the shortcomings. 1. The early stage needs to be able to capture readers, and this is generally done. 2. The protagonist needs to be smarter. I can tell you have a sense of humor. But don't overdo it or pay attention to timing. Otherwise, the protagonist will look like a fool. 3 This is somewhat related to the previous 2. Because humor is a prerequisite, it will limit the content that follows. So sometimes it seems illogical. 4. You still need to think more before writing and think about it after writing. The reason why I wrote this is to look at things from the perspective of the protagonist. For example, the purpose of building a house should be from the beginning. Or for the purpose of making money. I can't think of anything to write about. It is not advisable to have no purpose. In fact, there are still many problems that I discovered while reading. It is put forward to allow the author to make greater progress. Not for blackness. No need. If a work is particularly bad. I'm too lazy to type and just give it one star. Typing one more word is a waste. My level is also limited. But everyone (including the author) can point it out and improve together. I improve my cognitive level, the author improves his writing level, and everyone will definitely gain something. It didn't catch me early on. So I didn't look back. If what I pointed out above is wrong. The author is for other development directions in the later period. Then even if I am wrong, the author should not take it to heart. But that's it with the chapters I've seen so far. Come on, author!

A very good novel but no one reads it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

I think it's pretty good, but the combat power system is a bit unclear. The protagonist has never understood whether his sword has any special abilities. In the early stage, he basically only relies on guns. The author should add him an arcane origin. [Thinking] I've always been fascinated by small abilities. Strengthen the protagonist [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] You can evaluate the quality of a book after just a few dozen minutes of reading. You guys are awesome [vomit] [vomit]

Okay, it's not bad, but the back part isn't so good.

This book is quite good. I don't know why the score is so low. The protagonist has a growth process and the storyline is well connected. You can read it in the book shortage.

I started with a cabin and went out to wander within a few days. It was completely divorced from the cabin. It only retained the chat and trading system of traditional survival stories, and only mentioned it occasionally. Most of them were routines for wandering around in the doomsday, killing monsters and upgrading.

Chapter 37: After reading Xiao Xiao's words, I guessed that Juanxiu's handwriting at the beginning belonged to her sister? Was her sister the previous system owner?

It looks good, cheers for the author

My feeling when I watched it was that it was okay at first, but the more I watched, the weirder it became. In many places, the protagonist has a very powerful plug-in but can't use it where it should be used. It's also weird to ride a bike in the ice and snow. How far can it go? I still support the author.

After looking at it for a while, I felt that overall it was pretty good, and it didn't warrant a one-star rating. I looked at the rating of 7.8. The author also read it for the sake of insisting on updating, but now I don't really want to read it. Anyone who is interested can take a look. Give a five-star review and encourage the author's perseverance

This is a novel about the protagonist cultivating immortality under the guise of national survival. I haven't seen much about survival, but it's all about the protagonist killing monsters and upgrading [Petrochemical]

This cover deserves five stars

More than 200 chapters, less than 100 book reviews

Why bring a little girl? >O<

She is a little girl, not a 17-18, 21-2 woman.

Actually, it's possible that the author really likes to write novels [Grief]. Although I can't read the book, I still give it a higher score. If you have any objections to this comment, you can go and take a look where the author has something to say.

I want to say, is the protagonist too cautious? Besides, there are many things such as strengthening fruits and desperate potions, so why not use them? But overall the writing is quite good.

The novel is good to read. The only downside is. The author sometimes stops updating. [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] It would be great if the author kept updating it. 🤤

It's pretty good. It's the first time I've seen this... "Type"? Anyway, it looks pretty

The second novel I read on Tomato Overall not bad [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

If the needle doesn't poke, is Xiaoxiao the heroine?

The author is very lively, well, no more, just very lively [Thinking]