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Author, if you couldn't change the name of your novel to a better one, it would definitely be better if the word count was longer. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

It's much better than other Pokémon fanfics. Others don't have elements of Naruto or pirates. Pokémon itself is obviously charming but it's lost in other stories (just my personal opinion. My parents are still alive).

Collect more elves! As a gym leader, it is impossible without the second-tier elves. It feels so good to watch Gou Hao being bullied! I beg the author to bully him more!!!

As long as updates are not delayed, I will continue to be a fan. If you want to update it quickly, you might consider stuffing it in a bookshelf. If you can update quickly and consistently, congratulations! This reader will obtain the Great Sealing Technique. Forcibly sealed in the bookshelf. Feed regularly. °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°Wonderful

Well written Come on! There are just a lot of typos I hope the author can pay attention to this aspect

It's okay, I'll rate it again after I finish it.

I enjoyed watching the simple black Xiaohao, and the rest of it was acceptable. ⊙⊙

It's good to read. This book has content that you will like... How is that dog? I believe you know better than me...

To be honest, I was attracted by this cover, hahaha. But after reading it, I thought it was well written, and I hope it can be better in the future.

A very good book. I hope I can kill Xiao Hao soon.

Don't be obsessed with the past, don't expect the future, youth is now.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~

The writing is very beautiful and refreshing. It is a refreshing article.

Alas, I originally wanted to give five stars before I saw the merging of the two worlds, but since I saw the merging of the two worlds in Chapter 19... Maybe... The ending... Um... 4 Stars...

The writing is very beautiful. I hope that Pig's Knuckle will marry more wives, and also make the writing of that wealthy guy more miserable. Big boost for the author!

As long as you abuse Xiaohao, nothing else matters, even if you suck. I also give you five stars.

Fighting Gou Hao is a gift from my brother with 5 stars.

If Gou Hao dies in the later stage, it will definitely be five stars.

Let me give you a suggestion, Zuidun Chaomeng: Scientists have given you powerful power, but they have not given you a warm heart. Also, it's time to change this cover

The content is very good, but the level is too high and the blood collapses. Author, is this book based on fictional Pokémon?

There is Xiao Hao, five stars for it, the author should write a little bit about Ye Feng and Xiao Hao! ! !

Well, the author thinks these few points are very important for a good book: 1. The number of words is large and the update is fast. 2. Background setting 3. It's okay to be embarrassed in a small way. If it's too embarrassing, we will be persuaded to leave.

It's very good, but I don't have the words to describe this book. In short, it's very enjoyable, but there are too few chapters.

This book is wonderful, good luck to the author.

Come on update, long live update! The novel is the same as the author. . . . . . Yyds! ! !

I like the refreshing feeling of Desert Tyrant, because everyone who has seen it knows its size. Generally speaking, Gardevoir is too small, cough

Each of the four kings of the Kanto region is at least a quasi-champion, and may be stronger. The four generals and the three beast warriors are all king-level. Xiaoguang, your mother is a boy.

Come on, author! ! Believe in yourself! !

Okay, not bad, beat Xiaohao

You can lose in a fight, but Xiaohao must die.