The Young Landlord of Great Yin

Overall, it's pretty good. It can be seen that in the early stage it is very similar to Xiaoyao Little Landlord, but it still has its own ideas. Later, it gradually adopts an industrial style. The pace in the middle period will be better than the previous work, but the excitement is less. This is probably a common problem of many books. The early stage is full of excitement, and the later stage is less and less.

It's okay. The overall story is very coherent, but it's a bit short. There are also plot descriptions that are relatively bland and the characters' personalities are not distinctive enough. I hope that future works will add more baggage, highlight the characteristics of each character in characterization, and use more exciting words to describe the plot. After all, readers of this kind of novel mainly want to have fun.

It's slightly better than the time-travel novels I've read before, at least the logic is clear, give it a thumbs up!

"The Wine Will Be Entered" Ignore you, the water of the Yellow River comes up from the sky and flows to the sea never to return. Don't you see, the bright mirror in the high hall has sad white hair, and it looks like blue silk in the morning and turns to snow in the evening. If you are proud of life, you must have all the joy, and don't let the golden bottle stand empty against the moon. It is my nature that my talents will be useful, and I will come back after all my money has been spent. Cooking sheep and slaughtering cows is a pleasure, and you will have to drink three hundred cups at a time

Perfect, great ending, big thumbs up

It's okay, it's fine if you look at it

It's pretty good, I'll stick with it until I finish reading it.

Except for the author's occasional bragging and then making up for it with incomprehensible descriptions, the rest is pretty good.

No problem

It's just that the ending is a bit lame. I forgot to write it, please come on.