Elf************

The book is good, and the plot of beating Gou Hao is great. But did the author get Mei and Touya's CP wrong? Dou Zidou is also the protagonist of Black and White, Kyohei Mei and Black and White 2. Or is Kyohei being cheated on?

This book is very interesting, but I am a little disappointed. The main character does not have Charizard and Monarch. These two elves are my favorite. I would like to see one of them at the back.

This book is so enjoyable. It doesn't have the feeling of being invincible, but it has the feeling of being invincible. The elves are also popular elves that fit very well. It incorporates elements from other anime. It can be said that it deserves a five-star review.

Great work, I will update eight chapters today, it was really fun to read, I really like this kind of books, I support you. See me back. 🤗🤗🤗

It looks good, Naruto and Elf are combined

The plot development of this book is pretty good, and the image of the protagonist is also successfully created. The main reason is that it is seamlessly connected to the original Pokémon, without any sense of inconsistency or discomfort.

... (Omit the 1,000 words representing the Chinese class), the writing is very good, come on!

It's very good. I hope the author can make a Hinata in the future. In fact, I came here to read Naruto's other novels which are also good. You can check out the author Ling Yiyi's Naruto novel, The Holy Virgin. Both of the author's books are good, but it's a pity that the one is finished. It's all because of the one on the list. (Cheers to the author)

Author, please listen to what I have to say Your article does not have gorgeous language decoration, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise and It is rich in morals and can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word is vivid and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret for me. Please forgive me for being selfish! No matter how gorgeous the words are, I can't describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say one thing: Your novel is so touching! How about... . . . One more chapter?

It's super good-looking, but it feels a little brainless, but the writing and other aspects are good, and the plot is also quite exciting. It's one of the better Pokémon I've watched.

Not bad, this is some of the best fan fiction I've ever read.

The author, awesome way to end the protagonist's undefeated myth in a way where the protagonist is worried about the little boy, also reflects the protagonist's kindness and heroism, awesome!

How come no one reads such a beautiful book? The content is super exciting, not a harem, but it is also very comfortable to watch. Anyway, it conquered me (￣へ￣). It is not like a mindless and cool article. It is very suitable for old bookworms. The author will update it very quickly.

It's very interesting, a refreshing article, and sometimes a bit funny (●°u°●) "

Author, five stars are given first! ! ! I have never seen such a beautiful one! ! I have a small wish. I want to see the Susanata Buddha (first open the Buddha, then wrap it with a layer of Nine-Tails Chakra coat, and then cover it with Susanoo.) How handsome~! ! °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°Wonderful

It's good-looking, and the Pokémon theme is written in a new style. The author has good control over the plot and theme. It's very good and highly recommended!

Yes, the writing is very good. There are very few mistakes in this novel!

This book is really well written, especially the in-depth updates in the past two days.

This book is okay, it belongs on my bookshelf, it's updated well, and the setting is very novel. At least I haven't read novels like personality cards. The plot feels good to me. When I saw the protagonist Jiang Chen become a sky hero and form a contract with Rayquaza, emmmm. . . I feel a little bit envious, and I feel like I want a Rayquaza too! Ahem, ahem, let's get back to the topic. Both of the author's books are very good, and they are considered one of my favorite books. Support the author, take care of yourself, and give readers a high-quality reading experience. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗!

It's really fun to watch Da Gou Hao (｀Δ´)!

Perfect, well written, but can you introduce some character cards? I don't know some of them.

Just this book, it's great. Really, that description of Pokémon is great. Author, I support you to write it down, I support you. It made me laugh and cry, it was so awesome!

This book is really good. It is my second novel worth reading so far. Come on, author! ! !

This book is really good, I will read it as soon as it is updated. The plot is also very good!

It's a very good novel. I've always wanted to see an unprecedented kind of Pokémon evolve. The author's writing here is quite good. Although it's not what I expected, it's very well written. Love it, love it

This book is very good. The subject matter is different from other Pokémon. It is very novel.

No sooner said than done. I will give you 5 stars if I say 5 stars. This book is particularly beautiful. But ah. Some readers, when reading the contents of certain chapters, must not make casual conclusions, like me. I said I must give you 4 stars. I said that, and then I gave it 5 stars for the good ones later. So, this is my first time reading a Pokémon fanfic. If you have anything else to recommend to me? Of course, there are a few pictures that are not very good. They just whitewash a person. You can check to see if they don't look good. If they don't look good, you can skip that page. This is probably what I see and it's still okay now.

Super pretty! And there is Kuang San, hehe (the five-star praise is late)

It's quite interesting, and the extra emotional descriptions are also very delicate. It makes me feel like I was reading novels when I was a child. I've only read such a good book on Tomato, and I give it a five-star rating.

It's super nice, but there aren't many chapters, and the author is a bit weak🌚🌚