The Heroine of Kuai Wen Is Now with Me After Turning Black

So excited! ! ! I've finally been waiting for a book with two female protagonists! ! I love you (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The author is great Very well writtenʕ•̫͡•ʔ❤ʕ•̫͡•ʔ

She has a very upright outlook on life, and I also like girls! Although I haven't caught it yet! But (*^ω^*) I support it (*^▽^*)

Finally found a book with two female protagonists! ๑V๑Hey!

The double heroine story is great! I like it very much. Let's watch it together! Awesome, wow~

I love [love] Xixi is so flirty! This book is so beautiful [Sending my heart to you] I love it so much! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I really like this book written by the author. Although it is only the first one, it is really super good-looking. I really like the characters created by the author. It is really great. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I love it so much [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart]. Come on, the author. [Hold] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold]. I will always support you. I believe your book will be more popular in the future. I love you~

I like the novels written by you very much (it's very similar to the c-leather ones), keep up your hard work~ Hugs (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Ahhhh! Two heroines, please read the article soon! I've been looking for you so hard, but I finally found you! Great writing! I just read a few chapters and couldn't help but comment. Come on, write more worlds. I want to see the princess and the slave. When they grow up, the slave rebels and destroys the princess' country and takes away the princess. Finally, I whispered: Big! Love you to death! From now on, no matter who leaves, I won't leave!

It must be the first time for the author to write an article. He is a bit of a novice, his writing style is a little immature, and he is not sure that his sentences are smooth. The first world looked a little uncomfortable. He first mentioned the dual personality and then said it was not her. I was a bit speechless😑, but the rest is okay. Come on, the author is great! (Two heroines 1v1)

(๑♡ω♡๑) Arrived, it's very beautiful, I support the author greatly o( ❛ᴗ❛ )o(．-ω-)zzz

To be honest, the author has a lot of imagination and the plot is a little complicated. This may be the reason why the score is not so high, but the ending is satisfactory. I have just finished watching the second dimension to comment. I really like the extra story. Unfortunately, it is so short. I beg the author to publish a modern book that tells the story of that movie. I have found a lot of Lily novels on Tomato, and this is the second one that I can keep reading. It is really well written, and the plot is very rich. I still prefer reading this kind of imaginative novels, especially the second dimension. The vest in ancient times is really nice. Good luck to the author. I am very optimistic about you [top post]

There are very few novels with two heroines in Tomato. And it's a new author. Give me four stars⭐ to encourage you. This book has been on my bookshelf for a long time. I have read some intermittently in the past two days. I would like to express my opinion. I hope the author will not be angry. First of all, the first one is that the plot is a bit inconsistent. In layman's terms, the plot is incoherent. It talks about one thing in the first chapter, and then the next chapter is about another thing. Secondly, in terms of characterization, the heroine who appeared first, Luo Luo, first said that she was the second personality of the original owner when she traveled through the first world, and then openly admitted that she was another person. Emm... Don't you feel a little embarrassed? And the conversation between the second female protagonist Xixi and her pet also made me feel embarrassed... For the time being, I think the author will be a little clumsy with the text and give some suggestions. There is no need to go into so much detail, hidden foreshadowing, etc. The effect may be better. Finally, part of the plot is a bit cliche, but overall it is still great! Finally, I hope the author's writing will get better and better in the future! Looking forward to the author's new work [Blowing Kiss]

Finally I've been waiting for you. The author will update quickly😍😍It's super good^ω^

Come on! I saw you on Shuhuang Square a long time ago and started following you. Finally, when you published a book, I burst into tears (ಥ_ಥ)! The new book is very nice! Cheering for you again! ! ! Looking forward to another one!

This book is still very nice. A rare double heroine in Tomato. Good reviews.

After reading the whole book, let's talk about the plot first. Xixi and Luoluo follow each other and support each other in every world. They have very upright views and will help some innocent people in the world. The two heroines are also very sweet. However, in the fifth volume, there is some confusion when explaining their life experiences. (I feel like I've been censored [facepalm]) Overall, the author's writing skills need to be improved, but after all, this is the first book, there are still many places that are quite humorous, and the little sister is really cute. I hope that the sunshine will shine on the little sister in the future, dispelling all the haze of her childhood. It's not a loss if you fall into the trap~[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's so beautiful, the sweet love between girls, Luo Xi CP is really awesome, I recommend it to anyone who loves watching Shuang Jie!

Especially beautiful, quack is good-looking, quack is fragrant, quack is exciting,

Ahhhh! It's super pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! Big cheers for the author!

I have only read the first Little World so far. The author's three views are quite consistent with mine. It's just that the plot may have progressed a little too fast, and there were too many factors mixed in, which made me a little confused. But it's my first time writing an article. It's already well written. Come on, I look forward to your future works [Sending Hearts]

The author is very good😊 Come on, come on

The writing style is immature and the language is green, which is quite suitable for first-time readers. After all, it is not too difficult to understand. Although the author's writing style often goes astray as he writes, it can be forgiven for being a first-time writer, so I will give it a five-star to encourage it - I hope that the next Kuai Chuan will grow up (●—●)

As a novice, it is not bad, but the writing style is immature and immature, and I am not sure that the sentences are smooth. In fact, it can be written more delicately. The author can pay more attention to the expression, language, details, and appearance description, so that it can look better. I hope the author can write better and better, come on!

The author's writing is great. I love it so much. I'm addicted to reading it. I can't get enough of it. 😊[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like](｢･ω･)｢Hey✪ω✪ (((*°▽°*)(*°▽°*)))♪

I abandoned the article once and then re-read it again. I was still confused. I can only say that the two heroines fell in love early in the morning and it was very boring (of course, my personal opinion. If you like me and don't have any objection to refute me, then I'm sorry, you are right). If you like reading mindless sweet articles, you can give it a try. Finally, I will give five stars and hope the author will work hard.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will do more and more (｢･ω･)｢Hey

It's pretty good. Although some parts may be a bit messy, it's still good overall.

I feel really good after watching half of it👍Go strong and look forward to the next plot getting better and better😘

It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I mean Luoluo and Xixi are so cute!!!!!!!! [Sending Hearts][Eating Melon]

I really like this type of work. Kudos to the author!