The Ancestor Is Too Strong to Protect His Shortcomings, but It's Not Too Much.

This novel is very good, but there are always some people who comment randomly and leave it alone without even reading it. So far, there are no big problems. Anyway, I don't see any flaws. Come on, author, keep up the good work! Get up

A rare good book with fast pace, decisive killing, blood and tears! This book only scores 8.9?

The author has the qualifications of a great master, and his writing is clear and concise, without confusing right and wrong. This book is recommended for everyone to read through.

I started reading novels when The School Girl's Personal Agent first came out. I'm considered an old bookworm. Let's talk about this novel. It is relatively good among Tomato's sign-in articles. The plot is very compact and there is nothing too word-county (the author is occasionally a bit messy, so it can be ignored). There are many plots and very informative (I have read Chapter 226 so far. If this guy forgets to fill in the holes later, I will come back to make up for it [sneaky laugh]) If it weren't for this sign-in system When reading and scanning, I feel like this is a system sign-in document. I may have forgotten that I am reading a sign-in document. It feels more like a young man with a grandfather who has many treasures. The story of his step-by-step growth and rise in the world of immortality. He has bonds, pride, responsibility, and follows his heart. There is no plot about becoming a saint or a god at the age of several decades. The road to immortality is long. Cultivating immortality is going against the will of heaven no matter where you are. How can you achieve it overnight? As for flaws, there are some, but I think they can be ignored (not many really) and are innocuous. Try not to skip chapters in this book, otherwise you will not be able to understand it. Sometimes you will not be able to connect after skipping paragraphs. The number of words is sufficient, the quality is high, and the updates are very stable. (Author, let me help you out. A small number of words means short, a low quality means small, and instability means it is weak!) The author is very active and sometimes very naughty. After all, he needs to find excuses when he is weak.

I have read more than a hundred of them, and I feel really unsatisfied (I give it a five-star review, okay?) And I would like to thank the author for his continuous updates from time to time, which made it fun for me as a newbie to read this book. Cheers, author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

To be honest, the fight scenes in this book are described very well! I used to be attracted by the fighting scenes in "Breakthrough" when I watched it, and I felt it was very good. Later, the description of the fighting scenes in "Perfect World" was also very exciting, so in comparison, I felt that the fighting scenes in "Breakthrough" were inferior. I have read almost all the Eastern fantasy novels so far, but it is really difficult to find one that describes the characters, fighting scenes, and visuals vividly. To be honest, I am capable of writing a good novel myself. However, I have been busy with work and have a lot of fun and never started writing. I most likely read the content of the book. From the early stage, it does have some interesting genres, and the story line in the book is also relatively consistent. But when I saw Entering the Holy World, I didn't want to read it. I'm sorry. Generally speaking, the author's writing is very good at the beginning, but the latter is more exaggerated. This book is relatively good in terms of the author's writing style. Well, that's it for my review. I hope the author will work hard! ! !

I love this book, I love it so much. I have been a bookworm for ten years. The taste is very good. There is really nothing to read. I looked at the rating at first and read it casually. But I became hooked after reading it. The rating of this book should be at least 9.0. I don't know if it was maliciously brushed or something. Anyway, don't look at the rating. The content is really good and highly recommended.

This book is very well written, and the quality of each chapter is also high. It will definitely become popular. I support it.

This book is very good, I still have more to say! I've read more than a dozen books about Invincible or Ancestor, but this is the only one I'm still following. I especially like the line where the protagonist is seriously injured and falls into the mortal family of Yun. I find that most immortal novels have this section where he becomes a mortal and experiences all kinds of emotions and sufferings, which adds a lot to the novel. In the latest chapter, Yun Xuan has become a son-in-law. He must be getting married. Didn't he say before that the protagonist would be there to give gifts? Is the author going to skip such a wonderful show that shocked everyone? Also, I wonder if the author is going to bid farewell to the Sword Controlling Sect completely? According to the author's thinking, with Lu Feng here, Lu Chen should bid farewell to the Sword Controlling Sect completely. However, as a reader, I feel a bit regretful. When the protagonist is seriously injured, the heroic spirit guarding him is described from the perspective of the narrator. The protagonist does not seem to know about it. I wonder if there is an opportunity to know these emotions, or many years later, I can personally see the various fortunes and heritage left by the place where I first guarded, such as preaching, spiritual rain, etc. All in all, I personally give it full marks and it's super exciting. I hope the author will work hard!

I have to say that it is really good-looking, and the fantasy novels are quite good. It solves the book shortage problem. There are only a few books that I am still following. Good luck to the author! !

What can I say, brothers, highly recommended! ! ! You can give it a try. If you are tired of reading other cool books, or those plots are too cliche and repetitive, you can read this one. I will give it 5 stars if I have to say it. I personally highly recommend this book because I feel particularly good about the fantasy theme. The plot is very good. If you want to read it, it is best to read it for a long time. The beggar writing usually has some foreshadowing, which will directly sublimate into the subsequent plot. Again, this book is highly recommended! ! !

The plot twists in it are very exciting and interesting. The protagonist also has an online IQ. I hope the author will update it soon. Looks good [blowing kiss]

A good book, not much explanation. It is better to read the chapters than to read the comments. After reading a few chapters, you will naturally understand. Why care about other people's opinions? Everyone's opinions are different.

This book really touched my heart. The characters, plot, and tear-jerking plot are all very well written and clear. I have another book that I really like! ! Keep up the good work, author, don't stop updating.

This book is really good. It made me feel like I had found the passion and passion I had just started reading from countless novels. Being in a book makes me feel like I am in reality. Think about it, why am I not the other living beings in the book?

The author is amazing. A dozen or so pictures are worth more than 50 others. To be honest, I don't like killing, but your footbath makes me feel very comfortable. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, don't be confused by the comment section [eat melon]

This fantasy novel is one of the best I have read on Tomato so far. The author is particularly talented in literature. If you want to follow the path of no return for the sages, don't let gold and silver swallow up people's hearts. I write about heaven and earth with an inch pen, and I dare to laugh at the jade-money tigers in the world. I just lament that the world's capital covers the sun with its palm, and the thousands of flowers are not in the same dust as the light. The young man's words hurt his bones, but he begged Long Ting to keep him safe. I have been on the run for a hundred thousand years, and the years have lost track of my path. There is no way to survive in the sky, and there is no way to die in the lower world. One step One kowtow, a million miles away from the Immortal Gate. The invincible Danggui Dao, I am fortunate to have mercy on my teacher. Return to my hometown, Thousands of flowers hide a thousand enemies. If you can walk on the road to heaven, you can kill all the enemy clans. The heroes are stationed in the restricted area, looking at death and life Don't worry. The name of the eternal hero is not here, here But you can sleep for a long time. Half life in dust and half body in tomb, Only pride will last forever. What touched me the most was this game (they have their stories, and we also have our stories. We witness Lu Chen's story, and Lu Chen witnesses their stories. In the book, you and I are both storytellers.) The author is great, and I look forward to your next book.

Overall, the author's book is quite good to read and write. In terms of characters, Lu Chen's character changes step by step, and Lu Feng's image is full. In terms of plot, from Taihao to Huanyu to the Holy World, it is still closely linked... Five stars are awarded.

I have read a lot of novels about the sign-in flow. This one is really good, but the plot needs to be clarified. Many of the plots in the first dozen chapters were not written out, and I was a little confused. For example, the realm suddenly skipped a large section. Although the sign-in flow is said, don't be too aggressive. In addition, the protagonist's disciples have Taoist companions, so where is the Taoist companion who is the protagonist? Not to mention the love interest, there is no such thing as a Taoist companion, you still have to have what you should have. This is just my personal opinion, the author should not mind it too much. Come on more

It's really well written, everyone can give it a try! ! ! This is when I come back to write a review. After reading more than 200 chapters, I feel that the writing is pretty good. Although there are a few pictures that are not very well written, they don't have much writing either.

Very good! I won't say any nice words to praise the whole book. This novel is really good. The first 24 chapters are more than 4,000 words long, and the author has not deliberately put the author's care into it!

Read this novel, don't read the comments, just enjoy it

The overall review is okay, it could have been five stars. There are a few small points that I don't like very much, and they only represent my personal views. 1. The plot of the first module is better, but the "plot" of the protagonist is missing. The protagonist in Greater China should be a young and energetic single man, but he actually signed in and became an ancestor. Although the plot is okay, but becoming an ancestor means you have to be single for the rest of your life. I don't like the lack of people and liveliness. In addition, the Greater China area encourages two children and three children, so you might as well stay single. In fact, the little fox 🦊 is quite good; 2. In the second module, the protagonist's upgrade is too fast and too vague. It's not enough to fight the immortals in the True Immortal Bar. He actually kills the immortals like butchering dogs🐶. Dogs don't recognize such skills, and then suddenly slaughters Jinxian, Daluo, and the Immortal King... In a word, I feel that as long as the author makes one stroke, the Immortal Emperor is not as good as a dog🐶. Come on

As for me, I was reading the book. Normally I can't read it, but because there are many words in the book, I downloaded it and read it offline. The book is actually very good, but it may require some patience. To be honest, my patience is a bit overused now, but it is really beautiful. You will feel better and better after reading it. As long as you have patience, it is a good book. The characters are very lively and flexible, with their own thoughts. Everyone is a story, with their own life, their own experiences, and different emotions. Different from the blank slate characters, the author's writing style is also very good. (But I have to say that the author is too humble. Dear readers, the rich are for money, and the poor are for personal gain. He is a real beggar. That experience... ... Poor!) Each character can be written vividly, and even the supporting actor has his own unique insights. If you are patient, then I think this book can be a god, but it feels a little lacking in artistic conception, but things like a pound are very illusory. You say he does not exist, he does exist, you say he exists, but he does not exist. This kind of thing can only be polished and exercised by oneself, and then I understand for myself that this book is definitely written by the author with all his hard work. He writes very carefully. Since you can read my comments here, then please have the heart now and read this book. Thank you ~ (Finally, I emphasize that I am not a trustee. This kind of thing comes from the heart. You want to make money even if I ask you for fifty cents a piece. It doesn't exist. Well, I don't care about fifty cents.) Of course, don't think about it, the heroine Fox Girl. To be honest, I don't like the character Fox Girl. She appears too abruptly and leaves a mark on the protagonist. I feel very shameful about this. I can understand his admiration, but there is no need for this. In short, my good impression has been ruined. I have never had a good impression of this kind of character. As a It is very difficult for a system owner, the future master, to have a heroine who is not in line with his strength. Maybe you will say that the system can help him achieve that level, but as the system belongs to the protagonist, the system will not help him. If you want to say that the protagonist can help him, then I want to talk about why the protagonist should help. As a protagonist Zai, Seven Emotions and Six Desires are used to watching the strong man who is supposed to cut off love, so I would say that Tiger Girl is a drag and is too narcissistic. I admit that he has taken care of the protagonist for hundreds of years, yes, but the things the protagonist has given are enough. Some people may like Tiger Girl, and some people don't like to see it. Personally, I feel that the character Fox is actually himself It shouldn't have happened. The things the protagonist did when he was in a coma really made me want to watch it. However, the character of Fox Girl is also quite controversial. Some people like this character very much, but some people hate this character very much. Regarding this, I can only decide what the author says. Anyway, I personally don't like the character of Fox Girl.

I feel very good, there is family affection, there is passion, the protagonist is a real person of flesh and blood, not a cold and heartless fairy, the spirit of being an elder and constantly paying for the back is moving!

Five stars for you. There is no need for the author to tell them so much. If they don't read it, they won't read it. We support you. Don't be nice to people like this. If the novel is well written, people will read it. Come on, the writing is great. I haven't followed a novel like this in a long time.

After reading it for a long time, I finally finished it. The early stage was very slow, and it may not look as exciting as I imagined. The middle stage is not bad, and I can continue to read it with my heart. In the later stage, various future incarnations come back and forth in a long river of time. The ideas and rhythm are very good, but I personally feel that there are too many and it is a bit messy, and the pit is not easy to fill (but the book has been completed, I am just expressing my opinion) plus the later plot. I skipped everything by looking at the table of contents directly. In the end, I fully understand the author's difficulty in writing and his anger after being trolled. However, some of the inner words put in the book will make readers feel uncomfortable. Good readers can listen to troubles and give thoughts and opinions, but readers should not want the author they follow to have such a bad "attitude", which will also disappoint readers, so I wrote this paragraph

No, brothers, if you don't look at me for a day, I will feel itchy all over. The front is a little messy, but the back is super exciting. And wow, hurry up and update, if you don't look at me for a day, I will feel itchy all over!

Not bad, I like watching this type of stuff

First of all, this book is very good, and secondly, the logic of this book is very perfect. If you read it by skipping chapters, you won't know the answer. I don't even know what I'm talking about at the end. This book is worth calming down and reading