The Villain in Quick Time Travel Is Very Calm

Ahem, has the author seen me? I like this book, the stories in this book, the main theme, Yan Helin, Huo Yan, and the author (o^^o)♪ Congratulations to the author, come on, author.

•The pace is fast, the plot is exciting, and the protagonist is •Yan Helin vs Huo Yan •Small shortcomings: Some paragraphs are not very clear and need to be read several times.

(When the book comes out, the inappropriate parts will be gradually revised or replaced.) I am used to staying up late to write articles. Some parts may have been written when I was too sleepy. If you see any mistakes in the writing, you can call me and give me your opinions. I will try my best to modify it. You can also mention the parts you don't like. Let's talk about it uniformly, because I can't see the paragraph comment prompts, and He Lin's IQ of 50 is a display error caused by a problem with Gu Wu. I will mention it later in the plot, so I won't spoil it. Come on, compliment me on how beautiful my new cover is, blah blah blah.

I can only give it four stars. The disadvantage is that there are too few details. Each world gives me an outline feeling. After reading the whole world, it is still unclear. It still needs improvement, and there is a lot of room for improvement.

The task is completed quickly, the quality of the task is high, the protagonist acts neatly, there is no unnecessary suspense, there is no unnecessary clown scene, and the author's writing is good. This is the first time I encountered such a fast-traveling article, and I feel good about it. Come on!

It's okay, but I couldn't understand some passages after I read them once. I read them a few times and found out what they meant. But it's still very beautiful °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°

I want to ask how Yan Helin fell in love with Lei Yan?

It's very beautiful, why don't many people see it?

The order is a bit unclear, but it looks good [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Love]

Although the book "A Small World" is very short, the writing is good. Thank you very much (ง•̀_•́)ง

I have to say that this is a very interesting story, but the transitional period always feels weird and something is missing. It is like simply telling a story, and the sense of immersion is not strong. Moreover, his transition period was not smooth during the turning point of the story. I look forward to the author's next work.

It's beautiful, keep it up

Hiss... I'm a little confused, but it's not bad, it looks good!

Ah! Why did it end so suddenly? I haven't seen enough yet👀🐾

Good looking 👀Support the author

It's very interesting, but I didn't understand a few chapters.

How pretty. Once it becomes popular, I will be an old fan [shy][shy]

Jue Juezi, I like it, hehe

Author: Does this book have any emotional lines?

I really like this book, congratulations to the author. I will read more of your books this summer. Highly recommended!

Although some don't understand

Good, good, good, good, good, good

The story is good, but too short

Big cheers for the author ^0＾~, support the author greatly

I don't even know who the other protagonist is 😂😂, I read the comments and it says it's Huo Yan. From what I've seen, he and Huo Yan only met once. There weren't many scenes. Is there any emotional scene later?

It's pretty good, but it would be better if the order was clearer.

It's pretty cool, but it might be a bit confusing.

It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? I almost missed it.

The pace is tight, not procrastinating, and the character descriptions are concise.

I like the writing and plot very much. It just ended too quickly before I could understand it. In some places it felt like the link wasn't connecting.