Lu Xiaobei, a lovelorn young man, got a black ring by chance and started his journey to get rich... He likes to help the weak, he loves to support the kind, he has the courage to face the darkness, he dares to draw his sword to help...
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Comparatively speaking, the front is okay, the protagonist is a good person, but it feels different in the back. The protagonist feels that he has no brains, and he only spends money to get slapped in the face... This makes people feel that the protagonist's lack of brains cannot be solved by having money. In addition, the author can consider bringing the law into it. He was lucky not to die when he was beaten. He was knocked unconscious by a punch and was already in the hospital. There are always various cameras. The police can catch people. And that time when the protagonist's girlfriend sent a courier and arrived at a takeout station? Courier site? In order to have a showdown, stop pretending... And then hire someone from here... You can consider saying that you are familiar and reliable, but you can only fight small gangsters. Let alone this casual one, you can still get a special soldier, right? ……………………I don't want to fight, please come on, author.
Comparatively speaking, the front is okay, the protagonist is a good person, but it feels different in the back. The protagonist feels that he has no brains, and he only spends money to get slapped in the face... This makes people feel that the protagonist's lack of brains cannot be solved by having money. In addition, the author can consider bringing the law into it. He was lucky not to die when he was beaten. He was knocked unconscious by a punch and was already in the hospital. There are always various cameras. The police can catch people. And that time when the protagonist's girlfriend sent a courier and arrived at a takeout station? Courier site? In order to have a showdown, stop pretending... And then hire someone from here... You can consider saying that you are familiar and reliable, but you can only fight small gangsters. Let alone this casual one, you can still get a special soldier, right? ……………………I don't want to fight, please come on, author.