Supreme*****

For this queen's emotional drama, I'll give it a five-star rating first. The emotional description is pretty good

Okay, okay, hahaha

Huh, after reading these chapters written by the author, I have a few suggestions. First, the author is too slow to update. I understand that I still have work after all, but I still hope it will be faster, otherwise many readers will save books. Second, the author has set too many difficulties for the protagonist in the early stage. The main thing is to make the protagonist The corner (one side) is too weak. Except for the general legends that can kill some low-level ones in seconds, but the aura rarely kills 100,000 people with one hit. However, other people's summons are written to be able to defeat people in adversity. Even if you are at your peak and you are beaten by half a step with one hit, it is still too weak. The third is the writing There are too many intrigues. I don't need to write too much about this in the early stage. Anyway, I think that although the world of cultivating immortals is gloomy, it is written too much. Maybe it will be written like a palace fight. I say that you don't need to be too realistic and pursue a straight life. Especially when killing people, you can't kill indiscriminately. This Although it makes sense, you can just give it a name. This rebellion does not need to be considered at all. The fourth is that although the dynasty and the cultivation of immortals are combined, they are still mainly cultivating immortals. The system can draw points to increase spiritual energy, such as the kind of grand formation that improves the cultivation of the people. Can there be another author who can include the names of Fengshen Pavilion and me, and just be free and easy (please👀🙏🙏)

Are there multiple heroines?

Niubi, so powerful. Once ambitious, Sima Yi's wolfish heart came out.

It's not that the summons will improve your cultivation level. Why is it only the first time that you can improve it and not the rest?

This book is still in the domineering style, killing all those useless people. You can summon them, but there is still a shortage of people, right?

Okay, okay, it looks good.

No matter how much he does, it's all about being happy. Reading novels is not just about being happy.

I remember there are unofficial records that Liu Bowen wanted to steal Zhuge Liang's tomb. When I found Zhuge Liang's tomb, there were three notes inside, one of which was Xiao Liu, Xiao Liu,,,,,,. I forgot later that when Zhuge Liang was buried, he was in a specifically designated location. So he may have predicted future generations, of course, according to unofficial records! And Zhuge Liang seems to be a Wuhou of some temple, ranking first. It seems that there are three parts of the world. Zhuge Liang dominates Liu Bowen, but who was Zhuge Liang's opponent at that time, and who was Liu Bowen's opponent?

The update will be accurate soon. Dear author, where is your Chapter 45?

It's wonderful, the details are well written, and the protagonist is very stable.

It's good to do other things and know how to prevent others from being upset. Haha, it's my birthday and I don't want to let other people feel uncomfortable. My brother VS fainted.

The writing is more exciting!

Come on, come on, come on!

Good very good very good

Very beautiful, very exciting

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Update quickly. I won't force you. Just update a hundred or eighty chapters a day.

Come on write! Well written!

Good looking, good looking, good looking

It does look good, but the question is can it be faster?

There are so many people who take novels seriously. I am really speechless. This is a fantasy novel, not history. It just needs to be interesting. Give the author a thumbs up and keep updating.

Wouldn't it be nice to directly replace the intermediate summons with army summons?

Not bad, not bad! The empire has begun to take shape, and it looks pretty cool! By the way, are there any royal guards? Dongchang? West Factory? Or the Shadow Secret Guards of Great Qin?

Not bad, I hope it is a single female lead, the female lead has more roles and is sweeter

No verbosity, the content is wonderful! The level of it also shows the author's mind 👍👍👍

Not bad, you can take a look

Come on! Very well written

Very good, very exciting, too short,

Author, continue, don't stop