An Ordinary Guy at the Pinnacle of Pokémon

This book is really good, and the content is also very rich. I hope the author can continue to update it and don't end it. Come on, author!

Yes, this is the third book I've finished. The plot is okay and the heroine's storyline is good. After all, it's an elf novel, and the heroine doesn't need to appear too frequently. I personally see that elf novels don't like to create their own heroines, either anime heroines or no heroines at all. There are several flaws. The first is that the "Nine-Tails" has no fetters to evolve. Secondly, I have a record. I only used the treasure hunt function once, but I didn't use the 4 system rewards. There was also a Master Ball that I didn't use. 13 Elves, [Alola Nine-Tails (Overlord)], [Flaming Chicken (MEGA Form)], [Quasi-God Quick Dragon! ], [Phantom Beast Zeraora! ], [Lucario (MEGA form)], [Koga Ninja (bond form)], [Gardevoir (MEGA form)], [Flash·Boscodora (MEGA form)], [Lizard King (MEGA form)], [Galer·Flame Horse! ], [Mythical Beast·Latios (MEGA form)], [Level One God·Cang Xiang (King of Swords)], [Mythical Beast·Martial Arts Bear Master (Combo Style)]

I have to say that this is the most enjoyable and comfortable Pokémon fanfic I have read in Tomato. The character descriptions are still vivid in my mind after reading it, as if they are in front of me. The bond between the protagonist and the elves also makes me very touched and comfortable. The plug-ins are not too big. The story is comfortable and I am very impressed. It is the first time that there are so many comments. The author is greatly encouraged (I don't know if the author is from Spring City, but I am not a fellow, you write really well)!!

This book is really good. It's completely different from the previous elven books. It's also quite rich in content. It would be great if there were more female wives. What's the true nature of a man?

Compared with other books, I think this one is the best. It is very beautiful. I hope the author can be faster.

How can I put it this way? This Pokemon fanfic is the most realistic one I have ever read. The strength of each partner is obtained through continuous hard work. The descriptions of the Pokemon are also very vivid and the plot is full marks. And Koga Ninja is also my favorite one. Don't ask, he is handsome. In short, come on, the five-star author!

As always, 5⭐ is just to encourage the author, the real situation is almost between 4⭐~4.5⭐ In terms of description, I feel that the Gardevoir tribe (Chapter 260) is very good, and the description is great. Let's talk about the advantages first 1. There is a single female protagonist, and she appears less frequently. It is both a plus and a small minus. The author probably isn't very good at describing the emotions between men and women, so he's a little afraid to write about it (but that's okay, I'm just afraid that he won't be able to write about it anyway) 2. The plot develops quickly, but it left me a bit unsatisfied (maybe it's because I prefer reading longer novels) 3. The system has few roles. Different people have different evaluations on this. Some people think it is good and others think it is bad. I won't say much more here. 4. I think the most important point is to resonate with readers. The battle against the Pillar of the Sky in Chapter 411 and Hu Bin's death in the end were both very good. If the whole book doesn't resonate with readers, then it's not a good book. Now let's talk about the shortcomings 1. Description of the battle. The most important thing about Pokémon novels is the daily life with Pokémon and Pokémon battles. The author's description of the battle is very general There are no other major shortcomings Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better, and I also hope that everyone can help me post my comments so that more readers can see them. I think my comments are very fair.

This book is the best elf fan novel I have read after reading Elves: Darkness Rises, especially the elf configuration. They are all cool and powerful elves. Good luck to the author.

How can I put it, except for the bloody and soapy plot of a man chasing a woman in the middle. Everything else is really good. It's been a long time since I've read a novel like this that takes you step by step. It still deserves five stars. Also, let me recommend another Pokémon book. It's called Pokémon's Bonding Monkey King. Not directly invincible. Another type of it. A book worthy of five stars

It's not bad, it's very exciting, but um, this one is much better than that kind of scandal. The meaning of this book is that after someone in the host obtains the system, um, after getting a thumbs up from Kyuubi at the beginning, the story begins like this, and later on, he conquered his friends and made friends. A lot of mythical beasts, friends, and various friends, and then there's that one that also has a heroine. This is what this book refers to. Almost everything has a system, the protagonist, and the heroine. Dreams come true! Well, you start with a Pokémon or something, and then a friend of the mythical beast conquers the mythical beast. Well, time travel. It's all there, so great. There are also other things mixed in here, such as the king from Pokémon, and red and so on. These are all from the original Pokémon film, so this should be regarded as a super invincible stitched Pokémon.