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I Beg the Hokage to Read the Novel and Not Lick Konoha! ! !
Villain writing is the best
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Naruto's Single Heroine Hinata Is Invincible in the Later Stage.
Written on the topic.
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The Protagonist Travels to Japanese Anime and Cultivates Immortality
Best to beat up anime protagonists
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The Heroine of Naruto Is Kushina
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The Hokage Doesn't Have a Good Book, so He Refuses to Accept It and Sends It Out to Read.
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After watching Naruto for so many years, I realized that the ten rebellious ninjas in the Akatsuki organization represent ten dreams, peace, friendship, love, family, strength, religion, money, dominance, art, and childhood. If you look at the Konoha Sannin again: pornography, gambling, and drugs
I would like to give you a suggestion, what you are cultivating in cultivating immortality is the Tao, and there are so many great ways. At least it should not be limited to swordsmanship, it should include alchemy, weapon refining, formations, etc.!
Will there be a master-disciple relationship (dog head)
Fighting Minato for his wife is so cool! It would be nice if the code could be written faster...
It's not bad, but it's cut too much, and the combat power system is a bit messy, and the training is too fast. Have you barely practiced? Suddenly he was promoted
Ah ah ah 😱 The author is great, come on, come on, come on, update. I just saw this and it's gone. I'm so confused and helpless.
It was a good book, but it was cut in half
If you are kidnapped, first wink at the camera, do a double backflip, make the international distress sign 999 times, and then perform a ballet dance. I will definitely send someone to rescue you if I see it.
I can't figure out why such a beautiful book was cut in half
It took me an hour or two to read it, and I personally feel that this book is a very good Naruto fanfic. This book is not like other fanfics. Because of the immortality, Long Aotian directly looked down on the original ninjas, and he did not collapse because of his immortality. Personally, I feel that this cultivator is not the prehistoric cultivator that everyone knows. It may just be one dimension higher than Naruto, but not very high. And after reading many comments from book friends, they are all saying that Golden Elixir should not live for many, many years? Shouldn't it just crush the shadow directly? I personally think that you should not blindly connect the cultivation of immortality with the ancient world. After all, the cultivation of immortality is not a system unique to the ancient world. It can also be seen that the author is referring to the realm of Guigu Bahuang, which was popular some time ago. I have also seen such videos, and I think the name of the realm may be similar to that of the ancient world, but the combat effectiveness is not particularly high, but it is not very low either. Overall, this book is quite worth looking forward to, a Naruto fanfic about cultivating immortality. If some book friends simply read reviews to determine a book, then I can only tell you not to blindly read this rating. After careful reading, this book is more beautiful than those mindless and cool articles. It is very systematic. But maybe the beginning of this book is a little depressing. Well, if there are book friends who don't like it, I think you can reconsider it.
Author, please don't cut me in half [angry] There are also people who like this book [sending my heart] What should I do if you chop me in half [crying]
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It's pretty good, and the pace is okay. It's a pity that it ends so sloppily. I hope the author will work hard and look forward to the new book...
I hope it won't be unfinished. This book has been added to the bookshelf.
Author, you have forgotten this book! !
This book is so good, why did it end badly? I feel like there are a lot of things I can write about. The potential of this book doesn't stop there
So I still don't understand why the avatar of Minato Namikaze was used to kidnap Kushina? 🤔🤔
Is that the end? The golden elixir is destroyed, and the wood leaves are gone. 
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It would be better if the protagonist was stronger in the early stage
The author hopes you can see it! The protagonist's combat power is really too low, and I don't want to see a low-end version. It's like fighting against a shadow-level powerhouse at the Nascent Soul stage. Many readers also commented that the protagonist is a low-profile version of cultivating immortality. So can the author make the protagonist more powerful? (The requirements are not high, don't think about eternity or prehistoric times, just traditional immortal cultivation. The key points!!! The first is physical training, the physical strength of the immortal is strong enough. The second is mana. After reaching the golden elixir stage, the mana capacity is almost comparable to that of a shadow-level ninja. The third is spells. Although the protagonist is a sword cultivator, it is recommended to do it after the Nascent Soul stage to see if he can master all the 36 magical powers of Tiangang.) (✺^▽^)✺ Come on Thank you author!
It's very beautiful. Come on, the author. I hope it will be faster. But the author should also pay attention to rest. Come on.
Why do you feel that the plot is very similar to the book Zhen Dun? But the author's writing is very good, I hope it won't be a mess😭😭
It's pretty good, but I feel like it would be more enjoyable if the spirit root was given to the protagonist.
This book uses a very creative writing style, with neat text and rigorous language. It's a good book worth reading. If there are similarities, don't take it seriously.
The book is quite nice and the plot is quite coherent. I also like the author's protagonist better.
I think it's pretty good and suits my taste.
For your heart, I exchange my heart for you. We have deep affection and know each other. Come on, author, work hard to update, I will be very supportive🌹🌹
I want to give you likes from early morning to dusk, from the North Pole to the South Pole, you can fly with confidence!