Memories of the Southern Song

Did the author forget that he was writing a novel? Continuously denying modern research on ancient history, and also knowing all kinds of lost allusions to the Song Dynasty. No one knows about the co-authoring, but you do, right? It's better to just write about an imaginary world. Of course, if you are really in the Song Dynasty, just pretend that I didn't say anything.

I really can't stand watching it anymore, it really feels like a complete mess, especially Guo San's dialogue. He says some useless words and always keeps track of the diary to make up the number of words... The technology is copied mechanically, there is an encyclopedia and it is not used, and the protagonist is forced to hide and protect himself!? It's not like I'm traveling through time in a child's body... The whole book looks very sleepy! Abandon it, delete it, don't fall into the trap. Still recommended, The No. 1 Undercover Agent of the Southern Song Dynasty (I haven't finished it yet, but I am listening to the real person's lecture, it's pretty good)

I am so tired from reading this book.

The front part is pretty good, but the back part becomes more and more yyy, and the characters of the Shooting Condor and the Divine Condor are added, making it a mess and speechless.

The story is okay, but the content structure and language organization are not good. There are too many branches and the main line is unclear. Readers are easily bored. A good novel is difficult to attract people. The author should learn a lesson. I can't stand it at all. There are too many water characters. In addition to a lot of knowledge points, each chapter has paragraphs that have nothing to do with the development of the plot.

The author has profound historical knowledge and fluent writing. But writing a novel seems too verbose. Being less interesting is like chewing wax.

Writing a novel is not about writing a thesis, nor is it about researching history. It feels very long-winded when I read it, and I couldn't stand it, so I left.

Please don't fall into the trap, I really can't complain

Why did Chu Dasong save it? Forget about a feudal dynasty, and it is the most popular feudal dynasty.

I saw Chapter 1.34. It is very well written. The development of science and technology is based on previous research. It is well-founded and seems more real.