Immortal ***

The writing is very patchy, whether it's a battle of skills or martial arts, you have to spend half a chapter before getting started, and then you shock everyone for half a chapter, and then you run away again and again! Wasted

I gave up after Chapter 90. What did you write about it?

After obtaining a complete soul, it is said that heaven and earth cannot restrain him from now on. There are actually no skills or spells in the back. A sect should have many skills, right? All gone? Just remember the treasure? That's nonsense! Nothing has been gained. Far water cannot quench the near thirst. How can the faith that comes from it be said to live forever? Can you have some reasonable logic? ? ?

It's terrible, I was dizzy when I read it, and it was written in pieces. After reading a few chapters, I decided to delete them.

What the hell? I was tortured all the way to the end, and the hole was basically unfilled. No wonder so few people watched it! What is this in the end?

In the memory of a sect leader, he actually didn't practice any martial arts, and a fairy sect accepted disciples and had the number of disciples controlled by mortals. Write nonsense

Prevention Guiyi Envoy Picture

The book is good to read, but there are many typos, and the family ancestor in Ziluo Palace is also a fool.

Very exciting

Garbage, mess

No literary talent. Full of hostility.

Too bad. .

What's the last thing to do? Let's do it.

Wonderful, good, worth seeing

The big man beats the villain

This book is so beautifully written😊

A thousand years old?

The style is unique and can be over-described, leaving no room for escape for the author himself. . . . . . .