Mystery Livestream: I Can Fuse Character Cards

Not bad, come on! Although you are a short author Although you are a small writer Although you are a weak author But you must update me immediately

What you wrote is off topic. You are trying to save people all over the world and explore the dangers. Moreover, the number of words "water" in the front is too watery.

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The foreshadowing is too blunt and the author needs to work harder. You can read some books written by other great authors to understand the techniques and foreshadowing they wrote.

It's exciting so far😘

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Keep up the good work.

If you forcibly set the stage, it will be very blunt.

Not quite. . .

Good, good, good