Exploring************

What you wrote is off topic. You are trying to save people all over the world and explore the dangers. Moreover, the number of words "water" in the front is too watery.

The foreshadowing is too blunt and the author needs to work harder. You can read some books written by other great authors to understand the techniques and foreshadowing they wrote.

Okay, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

If you forcibly set the stage, it will be very blunt.

Keep up the good work.

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It's exciting so far😘

Good, good, good

Not quite. . .

Not bad! Need to be nourished