The Start Is Ruined, I Start the Strongest Evolution

Come on and update, the first spiritual pet is a zombie, how about the second one is a Zerg Spider Queen🤔, the heavy flavor is awesome😏👍

There is a disease that has existed since the birth of human beings. This disease has a long treatment cycle. It is usually cured around the age of 18 to 30. There are also cases that cannot be cured in a lifetime. This disease is not very harmful, but the treatment is very cumbersome. It not only requires a lot of time, money and energy, but also may relapse at any time if you are not careful. Yes, this disease is , , , , , , , single

The writing is still very good, but later on the protagonist must not tell other people's spiritual pets his evolutionary path.

It's very interesting. I read the latest chapter in ten days. Please update more. Don't be discouraged, don't worry about where they are complaining. Did you write the book and publish it just to make them complain? Believe in yourself, keep writing, we old fans will always support you! Come on⛽! Love you so much👄👄😘 (I am following both books, both are very interesting) (I wonder if the donor can race on the highway more often? I want to see the donor's skills😶😶)

Why can Phoenix evolve into Suzaku? . . Shouldn't it be the Suzaku that evolves into the Phoenix?

The author's writing is very good, very smooth, and he is also very serious and responsible. The most important thing is that he has no eunuch record. This is a very good thing for each of us readers. For this one thing, the minimum score is three points. In addition, the subject matter is relatively novel. This book It's a leisurely style, the heroine has not yet been decided, now we are in the Suzaku Academy chapter, there is no Madonna, so if you want to be more detailed, you can refer to Douluo Dalu 3. When describing the details of life, there is no sense of abruptness, and it feels very smooth. The only shortcoming is that the author did not give me a kiss.

Just have an immortal phoenix as your second pet!

It's quite good. I recommend it to those who only read a few dozen chapters and saw that the early stage is not fast enough to upgrade. The later stage is generally different from those other hours when it starts with invincibility or direct crushing. This is a harem system, fighting monsters, and slowly upgrading. It's a cool article. Although the author always makes some mistakes in some words and the early stage is boring. In the later stage, I think it's okay. It's good. It doesn't have the feeling of being impatient to watch in the early stage. But the author can put a few more pictures of his wife [smile][smile][smile]

As long as it doesn't give up and doesn't end up being unfinished, I hope the author can finish this work. I feel it's still very good😊

It's not cruel, the main character's outlook is pretty good, and it's quite comfortable to watch all the way. There's one less important thing, the foreigner's mother, um, not bad.

It's good to read, but there are too few, but I highly recommend this book, it's really good to read👍 The author really hopes that the person named Huo is not the heroine.

It's very interesting. There are 50 chapters in one exam, and the later ones will definitely be more exciting. There's also college. It's exciting just thinking about it. It's even more exciting when you think about it. You have to pretend to be slapping people in the face, have sex with women, and have to upgrade.

It looks good [Love] I feel like I wrote some parts and then said it again. When I read it, I felt it was very ink-stained. I hope the author can change it in the future [exploration] Also, the skill Magic Eye can be upgraded in the future. In addition to the eyes turning black, for example, clothes and pants can also turn everything black, just like Tang San's blackening in Douluo [Thinking] I hope the author will work harder in the future [Top post] [Top post] [Top post]

I have just read a dozen chapters and read the comments for a while. How should I put it, it feels like a short article, but at least it is not a crooked war god. On the Tomato software, to be honest, this book is not bad. It is not Long Aotian. I have read a dozen chapters and I can see the general world view. But the common problem is that the comments have already said too much and are a bit watery. It's not that I'm trying to make up the word count, but some things don't need so many words. Based on the numbers, it can be seen that it is a good novel, but the author's writing level may need to be improved, but I am still willing to give it a five-star support. The body shape and world view are very good, and I have read so many novels. As for this novel, it is considered a good one, and it is one of the better ones. Come on, the author, and improve his writing level. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the story and ideas. Come on!

The writing is good and super beautiful. I keep up with the updates every day. I hope the author will continue to work hard. ฅ(⌯͒• ɪ •⌯͒)ฅ❣

After reading this chapter, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Rebi, held it tightly in my hand, and walked slowly to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. Gradually, it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision is blurred. I don't know whether it was because I shed tears or because it was raining heavily, maybe both, but I felt even more depressed. I can no longer suppress the emotions inside me. Open the window and shout out the window. Come out: Just two updated chapters are totally not enough!!! The sea, how can it be so watery? There's too much nonsense, it's so grinding, it's the first time I've seen a novel with such water.

Let everyone in the harem choose spiritual pets who are obedient, good-looking, and will never betray. It won't be criticized by readers, and it can also be refreshing.

Beer was born by chance, just like I discovered you by chance - "The start is ruined, I started the strongest evolution" Qiqi Coconut Milk [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Good guy, I suddenly remembered that zombies have infinite iron power. Will the protagonist suffer from [sneaky laughter] [sneaky laughter] [sneaky laughter]? And the protagonist's kidneys, can they withstand it? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Great! I really didn't expect that the royal pet would have a zombie or a woman. Good luck to the author for writing it well, but maybe I came too early and didn't read enough! π_π

Not much, I like Xinhai, I just want to slap her, brother Meng bless me.

It feels like all the female characters who like the male protagonist now only like the male protagonist because of his strength. The male protagonist will barely interact with them after the system sends a mission.

I stopped reading it last time because of my study. It was about 500 chapters and I came back to read it after the holiday. I read it from beginning to end and it still tasted the same. Come on Qiqi! I'm optimistic about you! Give me a hug [smile][smile][smile]

It's okay to pass the time, nothing bad about it. If you can change (level) to (star), the smoothness of the overall story content will be greatly improved. (Seventh level five stars) (Level 7 and Level 5)… Obviously stars are better to read.

Just watched the third stage, looking forward to the third contract beast [please update]

This book is not very comfortable to read. It feels a bit too young. I deleted the repeated sentences and I think it looks better. The language description is stronger and the expression description is more vivid. No matter how high the score is, cheers for the author.

The evolution of Celestialmon is not that of Divine Celestialmon, but an Angelmon.

I have read more than 400 chapters. Let me talk about the advantages first. Overall, there are not too many bad points, and there are no problems with the main settings. It is more suitable for beginners to read this kind of game. There are also shortcomings. It is obvious that the author is a novice, and many settings are not detailed and grand enough. The data is also seriously lost, and the increase in combat power is not written well. There is also a low word count, which is a common problem of many novice authors. In fact, the number of words "water" is very normal. Many authors have the word "water" in them, and even some famous works have the word "water" in them. But the number of water words also depends on the method. Some authors have a good number of words, and the ones that are watery will not make readers complain even if they are watery. This is perfect. Finally, there is the emotional drama. The key point for novice authors is not to write emotional drama, because emotional drama is the most difficult to write. If you write it well, it will be just average. If you write it poorly, it will be really embarrassing and toxic. Of course, if the emotional drama is particularly well written, it will also deepen the reader's influence on the work. Overall, I give 5 stars to support novice authors. After all, Tomato is free and the salary is not high.

I hope the pace isn't too draggy. But it's also nice to be compact. At least if you can do a good job in laying out the details, then do a good job. 2.4 I can't stay any longer. . Manyo, I'm here again! !

I had the attitude of giving it a try, but I didn't expect it to look very good.