The Violent Priest Is Cheating [Hologram]

[The setting is very good] [The story is good] The low rating may be due to the author being a bit over-the-top when writing. There is no problem with the setting and plot of the book, and it can even be said to be excellent. However, the sweetness on the emotional line is not obvious, and the abuse line is not focused. The overall look is just about how to defeat the monster pass dungeon game process... As a result, the refreshing article is not exciting enough, the sweet article is not sweet enough, and it may not be enjoyable to read. I personally give it a 9.0, Mainly because the settings are really good. Although there is less sugar, I can figure it out by myself! Character design: top-notch skill output • Violent shepherd • Not too concerned about the male protagonist • The female protagonist who is dedicated to fighting monsters and upgrading + the killer of the ancient time travel game • The real boss • The warrior-assassin-cum-pet male protagonist. In fact, if the female protagonist is written more carefully, it should be a very interesting couple, but the female protagonist does not seem to care much about the male protagonist, which leads to a bit... Although the ending is HE, it is quite bald. There is not much of a problem with the supporting cast. Plot: The main plot is the story of the heroine and her time-travelling brother fighting monsters together, which is pretty good. The branch plot is about the story of the abuse of the scumbag and the first love, but the holes are not filled in. The scumbag is not too sadistic, and the relationship between the first love and his sister is not clear, so it looks rather confusing. The relationship line is mainly between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Every day, he waits for the female protagonist to come online and urges the female protagonist to go offline and lead the female protagonist to work. However, the female protagonist is obviously not interested in the male protagonist. For example, if the game needs to be updated, she will log off directly without worrying about whether the male protagonist will be wiped out... As a result, I still think it is a bit abrupt to say that the female protagonist goes all the way to find the male protagonist in the end... Summary: A story with a good setting and a good story. However, the inking problem makes it look a bit awkward. However, the flaws do not hide the good points. It is a good story and the length is not long. It is still recommended. Recommended to friends who are interested in [What should I do if I, an ancient killer, enter an online game by mistake] [The story of me and my time-traveling NPC brother] [About me falling off a cliff and picking up a gangster]. The short story is completed, with a few errors and omissions. You will miss paragraphs when listening to the book, but it does not affect reading, so you can eat it with confidence.

"The pet is really resurrected, are you happy?" Fu Jingyun was stunned for a moment, and then slowly turned to look at Mo Yuan. He still had the familiar face, a little haggard, leaning on a cane, looking at her with a smile. "Then I want to see this magical pet in the game!" Fu Jingyun said with tears in his eyes, coquettishly. Mo Yuan smiled lovingly. Their story, from this moment on, is the real beginning. I want to see the follow-up [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The writing style is good, the kind that makes you want to continue reading. I originally thought that the emotional drama and the plot were about half and half, but after watching 20% ​​of the game, the title of the priest began to appear. And if it is a contemporary theme, the male and female protagonists should have basically understood each other in the 100th chapter, and the female protagonist only knew that he was not a person in the game. Maybe it's because I don't play games, but I think the narrative about the game is a bit too large, and the plot could be more relaxed. Some key points are not described in detail, but the dungeons, disputes with other players, or other trivial matters are a bit too detailed. Also, I watched the ending directly, but the ending was a bit cliche in TV dramas and movies, and it didn't match the imaginative description at the beginning of the novel. After reading it, I felt a sense of disappointment that it ended quickly and abruptly. I am still looking forward to their subsequent love story.

Nice! The plot is poor. Very exciting!

The final encounter in the real world is a really good ending. Although I don't know how Mo Yuan became Mo Yuan, it doesn't matter [I almost cried]. And I am actually quite curious about what happened between the heroine and her master. Her stepsister, well, she had a pretty good image in the beginning because of this master. . . The heroine's life experience is really miserable

Won't you write about it later? Still not satisfied

It's okay (●'◡'●) but it's too short

It feels more to my liking.

It's such a pity that there is no extra story

A little follow-up would be nice [shy]

Why is it over? I haven't seen enough

Why does such a good article have such a low rating? Collection

It's great, but the ending is a little too fast

Smooth, main game. The male protagonist's soul travels through the game, they meet under a cliff, they fight monsters together and level up, and have constant adventures. Reality Reunion Completed

Very nice, no flaws, very good

I just watched a little bit but it feels good

Good looking, highly recommended

Super beautiful, highly recommended! ! ! !

Suspense, I feel like it can be continued

Can you have some more?

It's just a pity that it's too short

Woohoo, too short, not enough to see

Some loopholes in details

It's quite beautiful. Quite like it.

The ending is a bit rushed

I give this book 101 points. One more point will make you proud!

Why is there no sweet extra story?

The ending was so unexpected that we could actually write about their real lives again.

The ending is a bit rushed, but it's still good, but it's a bit regretful. It's a love story about a holographic game, but it's not very sweet, it's more about the game, and it's not too long.

The setting is novel, it's a time-travel game with the male protagonist, but it's too short and leaves you with more to watch.