Apocalypse Survival: I Activated the Sign-In System from the Start

I don't even want to say that the protagonist is too much a virgin. If the author wants to write an apocalyptic novel, doesn't he know that the apocalypse cannot be a virgin? You should at least read the Doomsday Survival Rules before writing. If you ask me, if I had seen such a situation, I would have done it a long time ago. It's terrible. Please re-write it, it's so rubbish.

Don't scold me so much. It's free. If you like it, look at it. If you don't, go away.

The whole book feels like rubbish. People are threatening you with an axe, but you still say that good or bad people cannot be seen with the eyes. What kind of weird thinking is this?