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If I give five stars myself, no one will find out, right?

Compared with other books that have less than 100 chapters and are updated three times a day, this one is too short and I can finish reading it in half an hour. Although it's short, I can't help but look good.

I hope there will be a female protagonist. His Highness Ka is really miserable. In the original work, he is already miserable enough and he still ends up alone. I hope the author can write a female protagonist so that His Highness Ka will no longer be lonely (please reply)

Okay, the author is more attentive and there are basically no big loopholes. There are just too many narrations. Finally, there is the issue of how quickly the Sannin can come back from the front line of the school: the long distance from Konoha to Iwagakure takes at least 7 days for an ordinary jounin to jump trees and run. Minato comes back first, so his speed is much faster than that of ordinary jounin or even Kage level. It takes at least more than a day to return from the front line with a flying thunder god. Kakashi kills the third generation and the pot king in a matter of seconds. Even if he chases the advisor, it will not take a day. Moreover, Tsunade will send messages to three teammates on different battlefields faster than Konoha. Ninjas or messenger beasts are fast, and Kakashi kills people as soon as he comes out, so there are no more than 4 ninjas seen. According to common sense, the 4 people will act together. Even if they run to the three battlefields separately, they are not as fast as the protagonist, and the flying thunder god consumes a lot of money. The above is my opinion, there may be something wrong, please don't criticize! ! !

No, this book is too good at driving. The wheel marks on my face are all proof. If this is the case, then please let the storm come more violently later.

Among the many system streams, this one is definitely a clear stream, and I look forward to the follow-up development😏

It's good, but it may not be easy to write in the later stage, so please do your best, author.

Not bad, the author's writing style is very good! It says online that it can't be done, (I'll give you a reward after I save enough money, really).

It's quite good. The reason why I deducted one star is that I feel that the protagonist is too arrogant, and it is obviously a dark version, but it almost turned into a warm version when he got together with Tsunade.

Work faster author, don't take a break. What does your sudden death have to do with us readers?

Good guy, this car goes really fast. I didn't even react when the windmill hit my face😂

Five stars, nothing to say The author only needs to update each chapter Just a little more?

It's very interesting, but I hope the author writes more about the interactions between the characters.

The author's writing style is much better than similar Naruto novels. Come on, come on╭(･ㅂ･)و

I think you can accept Hinata, hehe, and Hanabi. By the way, I only follow you as the author😏😏

Another book-keeper

I rejoice, I love, for no reason

The writing is quite good, but the part about the death of the Dance King may be in line with the author's idea of ​​Naruto, but in my opinion it is a poisonous point. Madara may be wrong, but what the protagonist did... Four stars

It's okay. I like any book that doesn't contain the prince and the second pillar.

The book is great, I like it very much, but the update speed is a bit slow. I think comrades who like books should stop reading and support the author. It is not easy for the author, right? And the car is really fast!

There are few authors who are so decisive. The early plot is quite good, the characters are flesh and blood, and the characterization is very good and overall clear. Although I didn't understand the part after Brother Kaz's revenge. What are you going to do? But the coolness is 5 stars

This is the most satisfying Naruto fanfic I have ever read. Although it has changed a lot, it is really good to read. I sincerely recommend you to read it.

It's very interesting and recommended, but I just want to ask if this article is systematic? Well, I just have this kind of question. I can't figure it out. I'm a little bit frustrated.

So-so, but author, please update soon. Who is too few? If there are more Zhang Mu, most of your books will become popular.

(ง ᵒ̌Vanᵒ̌)ง⁼³₌₃The book is pretty good, but let me revise it a little bit. I'll add more when it's finished.

It's pretty cool, 5 stars! Looking forward to the author's next articles, already collected.

It's very interesting, and the plot is also very good. It's time to kill and play. I look forward to the author adding more updates.

Very nice, recommended.

Let me break this 999 rating 😂😂

I hope you give Obito a good ending